Hey ppl this is my first story soooo... please tell me what i can do better or change

You can call me Alexa

"Talking"

"thinking"

~Haruhi's POV~

Another uneventful day ... well as uneventful as it can be if your in the Host club. It's often on days like this that I wonder how much longer will this peace last, how much longer till Akito comes and takes me back (Haruhi shudders at the thought). It's not like I wouldn't like to see the others again Yuki, Hatsuharu, Momiji, Kisa and all the rest of them I just don't want to be the outcast again. I'm even more of a mistake than Kyo because I am the forgotten Zodiac ... a wolf.

"...uhi-chan?" a voice comes interrupting my thoughts.

"Haruhi-chan are you ok?" there's that voice again. "HARUHI!" the voice yelled. Okay that got my attention. My head snaps up and I find myself looking directly into a pair of concerned brown eyes, I back up from the pair of eyes in surprise and end up falling off the window ledge I was sitting on and hit the ground. "Ouch that hurt I wonder who that was".

I look up from my position on the floor rubbing my poor tail bone to find that the entire host club is staring at me, even Kyoya who is usually taking notes in his mysterious note book.

"What?" I ask them.

"Haruhi-chan are you ok? we've been calling your name and you haven't been responding... what are you thinking about?" asks an unusually serious Honey asks.
"I'm fine", I lie "it's nothing I was just thinking".
"Haruhi-"
"you're usually-"
"really attentive-"
"somethings got to-"
"be on your mind-"
"to make you lose focus" says Kaoru and Hikaru.

"No I'm just feeling a bit under the weather" I tell them. "Which isn't really a lie I'm not feeling to well after thinking about my past". They still don't look like they believe me, Tamaki, Kaoru and Hikaru still look kinda suspicious but mostly worried. Sigh.

"Can I just go home early today? I don't think I would be very helpful today." I asked them.
"Sure Haruhi if your not going to be productive then you can go home". Kyoya said without looking in my direction(when did he look away?).

Tamaki says " If your not feeling well then let us walk you home, we wouldn't want you to get hurt on the way home". "No Senpai I can walk by myself",I say as I stand up and dust myself off "I will be fine, bye". I walk towards the door and grab my stuff and leave without looking back.

~No ones POV~

Everyone watches as Haruhi walks out of the music room and as soon as Tamaki hears the foot steps fade turns towards the other hosts and says-

"Somethings wrong with Haruhi she is acting really different"

"No duh genius" Hikaru snaps
"Yeah what do you think she was thinking about to become so depressed? I'm really worried Takashi" Honey says in his cute child like voice.
"Hnn" was all that Mori replied but you could clearly see the worry in his eyes.
"Ya me too, i wonder do you think its safe for her to be walking around outside in a daze?" inquires Kaoru.

"That's it we are fallowing Haruhi home whether she wants us to or not!" yells Tamaki as he stands up and makes a big display about how he is going to find out what is making his 'Daughter' act this way. He starts marching to the door with the rest of the group in tow.

"For once i agree with Tamaki" whispers Hikaru to Kaoru who were currently at the back of the group.
"ya i think so too, if Haruhi is walking around in such a daze who knows what will happen" Kaoru whispers back. They didn't know that the rest of the Host club was listing in on their short conversation. Them thinking of the possibility's of what could happen made them start walking faster so as to catch up to Haruhi.

When they caught up to her they just watched from behind buildings and bushes(they were getting really strange looks) they grew more worried while they watched her shuffle towards her house. They were watching and were surprised when Haruhi suddenly stopped in place (they are in a park that's on the way to Haruhi's house, at this time it was pretty empty) and looked ahead at a figure.

~Haruhi's POV~

As I mulled over how I was going to explain to Tamaki and the others why I suddenly left and wasn't paying attention, I looked up and found myself in the small park near my house I saw a figure that was too far away to see who it was. When I walked forward going nearer to the strange figure that was just standing there as if waiting for someone, I froze. The person of my nightmares who comes to haunt me at night... the person I thought I was finally free from was standing in front of me with a small smile on his face that didnt disguise the cruelty and... loneliness? in his eyes.

"Akito" it came out more as a whisper, I didn't even notice I said his name.
"Why hello Haruhi I'm surprised you even recognize me after all these years, how long has it been? 10 years? oh well i came to tell you that you need to come back to the estate".

OKAY thats it for me today. i will try to update every week and will tell you if im not. Please R&R