From the author...
Okie dokie. I have no idea how this will turn out,
Its completely random, but I have a relatively decent
feeling this will not be a one-chapter story.
constructive critisism is welcome,
but remember to at least try to sound
like someone with a brain when you flame me.
Please review, it makes me happy.
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My Secret Victory
~chapter 1~
*****************************************************
It was a busy day at kings' cross station,
but the train conductor couldnt help but notice the
small Black-haired girl with a lost look on her face.
'Excuse me, miss. Do you need any help? are you lost?'
He asked her with his thick South-London accent.
'They told me to board this train...'
She replied quietly, as she searched
in her pockets for her ticket. She found it,
then showed him the platform number.
'Platform nine and three quarters?
I'm awful sorry, but it don't exist. Whoever
gave you this was playing an awful mean joke.'
He said, surprised that someone would do something
so mean to such a sweet little girl.
She only looked about eleven or twelve!
'I understand, sir. People are mean to me a lot...'
she sighed. 'Thankyou for your help...'
The conductor was about to look for
a phone to call the girls' parents,
But as soon as she had left his glance,
She was gone.
*****************************************************
The small girl rushed through the crowds
of irritable buisnessmen and giggling teenagers.
Until she finally got to platform nine.
she stared blankly at the space between platforms
nine and ten, and tears began to rush to her eyes.
It wasnt real... she had come all this way,
and it was a prank! where could she go now?
*****************************************************
'Packed full of Muggles, as usual!...'
a large red-haired woman was saying loudly.
George sighed. His Mum always did this.
Same old speech every year.
And she didn't do anything to try and
keep her voice down, she didnt seem to
care that muggles were staring at her
like she was completely mad or something.
He was about to start running for the platform,
When he tripped over something squishy on the floor.
He turned to see what it was,
only to see a girl crying on the floor.
'I'm so sorry! I didnt see you! Please stop crying!'
He frantically tried to calm her down.
*****************************************************
'Its... not... that... I'm not crying because of that...'
The girl sniffed, as she was used to not being seen.
'Why are you crying?' The red-haired boys'
mother asked kindly. The girl told the woman about the prank.
'Oh! You mustn't ask the muggles how to get on
the platform! They won't know! lucky George was here
to trip over you, or you would miss the Hogwarts express!'
The Plump red-haired lady said warmly.
'So... so its not a prank? I am a witch?'
*****************************************************
Percy got bored of the sobbing girl,
and stepped through the barrier between
Platforms nine and ten.
witches hurried around him, grasping luggage,
and pushing to get on the train.
He noticed a familiar face in the crowd,
and smiled.
*****************************************************
'So I just walk through a wall? but...
how is that possible? It isnt! you can't...
you can't ...just walk through a wall!'
The girl said, confused.
'Its an illusion, see! hold Georges'
hand while he goes through.'
The large woman says kindly.
'Oh, I wouldnt do that, she might get germs!'
joked Georges twin brother, Fred.
*****************************************************
As soon as they were all on the platform,
checking thier luggage, The small girl vanished.
It was a useful skill, and she did it to avoid
being near people. It was because she was scared of
getting hurt. whenever she got close to anyone,
they almost always turned on her for their own amusement.
When she did her vanishing act,
slinking away into the shadows,
People usually forgot all about her.
She checked that all her luggage was safely inside
her suitcase, and then made sure Kagami,
Her pet eagle was safe inside his cage.
She was so proud when she bought the baby eagle,
and she named him Kagami. He was the one friend
that she knew she could trust.
*****************************************************
George looked around him, searching for the girl.
Where could she be? she ran off as
soon as they were on the platform...
Why did she leave?
*****************************************************
The girl hurried into an empty compartment,
and changed into her school uniform,
leaving her school robes on the seat next to her.
It was warm, so she would put on her cloak later.
People would be filling up all of
the empty compartments soon...
She would have to bear the chattering crowds,
The gossiping girls and teasing boys.
Somehow coming to Hogwarts didnt sound
like such a great idea any more...
*****************************************************
Luckily, no students entered the compartment,
or just walked through to the next empty one.
She rooted through her rucksack and found her
muggle CD player and CD collection,
and listened to CDs for most of the journey.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
From the author...
Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
By the way, this is set 1 year before
Harry comes to the school.
Look! I managed to not let
you know what her name is!
and dont jump to the conclusion
that she is muggle-born,
Cos she aint. ^-^
Please review, I'll get the
next chapter up as soon as possible.
But you have to review.
Okie dokie. I have no idea how this will turn out,
Its completely random, but I have a relatively decent
feeling this will not be a one-chapter story.
constructive critisism is welcome,
but remember to at least try to sound
like someone with a brain when you flame me.
Please review, it makes me happy.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
My Secret Victory
~chapter 1~
*****************************************************
It was a busy day at kings' cross station,
but the train conductor couldnt help but notice the
small Black-haired girl with a lost look on her face.
'Excuse me, miss. Do you need any help? are you lost?'
He asked her with his thick South-London accent.
'They told me to board this train...'
She replied quietly, as she searched
in her pockets for her ticket. She found it,
then showed him the platform number.
'Platform nine and three quarters?
I'm awful sorry, but it don't exist. Whoever
gave you this was playing an awful mean joke.'
He said, surprised that someone would do something
so mean to such a sweet little girl.
She only looked about eleven or twelve!
'I understand, sir. People are mean to me a lot...'
she sighed. 'Thankyou for your help...'
The conductor was about to look for
a phone to call the girls' parents,
But as soon as she had left his glance,
She was gone.
*****************************************************
The small girl rushed through the crowds
of irritable buisnessmen and giggling teenagers.
Until she finally got to platform nine.
she stared blankly at the space between platforms
nine and ten, and tears began to rush to her eyes.
It wasnt real... she had come all this way,
and it was a prank! where could she go now?
*****************************************************
'Packed full of Muggles, as usual!...'
a large red-haired woman was saying loudly.
George sighed. His Mum always did this.
Same old speech every year.
And she didn't do anything to try and
keep her voice down, she didnt seem to
care that muggles were staring at her
like she was completely mad or something.
He was about to start running for the platform,
When he tripped over something squishy on the floor.
He turned to see what it was,
only to see a girl crying on the floor.
'I'm so sorry! I didnt see you! Please stop crying!'
He frantically tried to calm her down.
*****************************************************
'Its... not... that... I'm not crying because of that...'
The girl sniffed, as she was used to not being seen.
'Why are you crying?' The red-haired boys'
mother asked kindly. The girl told the woman about the prank.
'Oh! You mustn't ask the muggles how to get on
the platform! They won't know! lucky George was here
to trip over you, or you would miss the Hogwarts express!'
The Plump red-haired lady said warmly.
'So... so its not a prank? I am a witch?'
*****************************************************
Percy got bored of the sobbing girl,
and stepped through the barrier between
Platforms nine and ten.
witches hurried around him, grasping luggage,
and pushing to get on the train.
He noticed a familiar face in the crowd,
and smiled.
*****************************************************
'So I just walk through a wall? but...
how is that possible? It isnt! you can't...
you can't ...just walk through a wall!'
The girl said, confused.
'Its an illusion, see! hold Georges'
hand while he goes through.'
The large woman says kindly.
'Oh, I wouldnt do that, she might get germs!'
joked Georges twin brother, Fred.
*****************************************************
As soon as they were all on the platform,
checking thier luggage, The small girl vanished.
It was a useful skill, and she did it to avoid
being near people. It was because she was scared of
getting hurt. whenever she got close to anyone,
they almost always turned on her for their own amusement.
When she did her vanishing act,
slinking away into the shadows,
People usually forgot all about her.
She checked that all her luggage was safely inside
her suitcase, and then made sure Kagami,
Her pet eagle was safe inside his cage.
She was so proud when she bought the baby eagle,
and she named him Kagami. He was the one friend
that she knew she could trust.
*****************************************************
George looked around him, searching for the girl.
Where could she be? she ran off as
soon as they were on the platform...
Why did she leave?
*****************************************************
The girl hurried into an empty compartment,
and changed into her school uniform,
leaving her school robes on the seat next to her.
It was warm, so she would put on her cloak later.
People would be filling up all of
the empty compartments soon...
She would have to bear the chattering crowds,
The gossiping girls and teasing boys.
Somehow coming to Hogwarts didnt sound
like such a great idea any more...
*****************************************************
Luckily, no students entered the compartment,
or just walked through to the next empty one.
She rooted through her rucksack and found her
muggle CD player and CD collection,
and listened to CDs for most of the journey.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
From the author...
Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
By the way, this is set 1 year before
Harry comes to the school.
Look! I managed to not let
you know what her name is!
and dont jump to the conclusion
that she is muggle-born,
Cos she aint. ^-^
Please review, I'll get the
next chapter up as soon as possible.
But you have to review.