Hola! Yes, so I made a story christened, "A Celestial Dream" BUT that turned out to be a dud. xP Sowwy, guys!
Well, I noticed how Waka was a 'Master' so I thought he must have Pupils. (DUH) Anyhoo, this is a story that I will continue if you all like it. :) Be blunt, too. I don't mind harsh criticism; truthfully, it inspires me! Yay for criticism of all kinds; kind and/or spiteful:) Also, I hope you enjoy the show!
Song-Numb by Linkin Park
So this story's about a girl with a unique gift. She tries and she tries, but she just can't seem to make Waka, her master, happy.
Enjoy the fic:)
Okami characters (C) to Capcom and Clover Studios
Maya, Doc, and Tiko (C) to Moi
.PUPILS.
Prologue-Clumsy Gal
A tall, slender, looking young man paced along a group of three young teenagers who looked quite nervous and apprehensive.
The young man was garbed in an odd array of attire which consisted of a long hat-like head wear whih was in the shape of an eagle's head that covered his long, blonde hair, a fucia colored shirt with rather large, fuzzy buttons, a pair of purple trousers, and some tall shoes which added even more height to his already tall stature.
One of the teens looked to be around the age of fifteen. He had pitch black hair that fell to his chin, was not very tall, but average, big hazel brown eyes dazzled in amazement as he stared on in nervousness, a white shirt fit nicely as a large, grey vest matched along parfectly, a pair of grey, long pants danced with the breeze slightly as the wind blew eerily, simple, flat shoes wrapped around his feet, and a black headband hugged his head as a Japanese symbol meaning, "Power" was written on it.
This was none other than the boy known as Doc.
Yet another teen stood in the group with chills, also. He looked to be about sixteen. He had brown hair that was quite short, almost like a buzz-cut, was slightly short for his age, big black eyes that could pierce anyone's heart, a black, sleevless shirt hung loosely as a red belt swarmed around his waste, light black colored pants swallowed his legs as flat sandals took over his feet, and a silver chain hung around his neck.
This was the infamous Tiko.
The last teen to be seen was a young girl; about fourteen of age. She was the youngest and the shortest of the group, just barely reaching five feet. Out of all of them, she was not nervous in the least. She had long dirty blonde hair that fell about four inches below her shoulders, big leaf green eyes shimmered with each passing blink, rosy cheeks seemed to glow, she wore a simple off white shirt with a grey belt tied around her waist, an off white vest hung on her small, delicate shoulders, black, baggy pants hung around her legs as flat sandals swallowed her feet, and a qwrts necklace hung around her neck.
Who was this, you ask? Why it was Maya.
They all stood in a flourishing forest with tall trees towering above everywhere, bushes rustling with squirrels, beautiful, majestic flowers that peered out of their roots, and a glorious, small body of water encircling them all.
The tall, young man paced around the two distraught teens and one calm teen. He looked at them with sterness, harshness, and spite.
"So...," He continued, walking up to Doc who was biting his lip with tension. "You are Doc, no?"
"Y-Yes, Sir," Doc stuttered, opening the collar of his shirt so he could breathe better. "I-I am."
"I have one question for you, Doc," The man stated. "Why do you want me to teach you?"
"Well...," Doc was a bit dumbstruck as he began to perspire even more so. "You are a great teacher, and you are quite... smart..."
The man smiled slightly and let out a small laugh replying, "No, young Doc. You are wanting me to teach you because you have the desire for self defense which, in some cases, is a good idea... However, in your case, you are only wanting to require such a skill so that you may pummel those who downgrade you."
Doc stood there a moment with wide eyes as he heard this man announce such words. It was as if he were reading his own mind.
"Wow...," Proclaimed Doc with astonishment. "How d-did you know that? Even I-I couldn't find enough courage to say that to you, Master Waka."
"Words do not have to be said, child," replied Waka with a smirk. "Though, it is the heart that is truly the source of which your true colors lay hidden."
Doc nodded as Waka went on to the next student.
"Tiko, is it not?" He asked as Tiko nodded.
"Yes, sir!" stated Tiko in a loud voice.
"My, aren't you a strong spoken young offspring," Tao Master Waka said, grinning. "Tell me, Tiko. What is important in knowing how to defeat your enemy?"
Tiko thought a moment then snapped his fingers with pride.
"The weak spot!" He announced while slamming his fist into his clutched hand. "Have that in mind, and you'er good to go!"
Waka chuckled and replied, "Not quite, young one. You see, at times, that could be of a large amount of aid, yes. However, knowing your enemies' weak points will not always trigger their downfall. Before even considering to battle your foe, you must first always negotiate to attempt and settle things streight. Know that, and then you are good to go."
"Yes, Master," said Tiko as he gave Waka a bow.
Next.
"Maya, the last of my new pupils, no?" Waka asked, rubbing his chin.
"I sure am!" Announced Maya with cheer and a smile to go along with it.
"Ok, then," Waka went on. "Tell me then, little one. Do you have any skill in combat, whatsoever?"
Maya's lips curled into a bit of a faint, devilish smile as she answered, "Well... I do have this one teqnique, or skill, you brought out."
"Very well then," He announed grinning. "Show me."
The green eyed girl nodded and stood there with her eyes shut tightly, her hair began to sway as she was lifted off of the ground, a burst of wind knocked eveyone back as Maya gasped.
"I am so so sorry, everybody!" She exclaimed, running to help everyone up to their feet. "I kind of have a bit of trouble controlling that!"
"Dang it, Maya!" Exclaimed Doc. "You always screw things up; even back at home, you'er always causing some kind of mess!"
"Yeah!" Agreed Tiko, dusting the dirt off of his shirt. "Doc's right!"
Maya held her head in shame as such harsh words potruded from the teen's mouths.
Waka picked himself up off the ground and tried to calm down the rambunctious boys.
"Now, now, now, young ones," He continued. "It was only an accident; she just couldn't control it. This is why she came to me."
Maya smiled at Master Waka with a look of 'Thank you' in her eyes.
He replied with a sincere smile as well.
"... Whatever," Said Tiko and Doc simultaneously with irritance welling up inside of their voices.
"Now," Stated Waka. "Everyone, get back into a line."
Maya began walking back over to the group, but suddenly tripped over a large root sticking up out of the ground.
The young girl fell down right at Master Waka's feet. She blushed from the embarrasment as he stared down at her, shaking his head.
"Hehehe...," She said wiping the dirt off herself. "Sorry... Again."
Waka simply pointed to the area Maya had been standing all along as she walked in that direction with her head hanging.
The Master looked at all of his eager pupils and one distraught, sad Maya...
"... I have my time cut out for you," He said to himself, indicating Maya.
To Be Continued...
Well, thar ya have it! xB I hope you guys liked it! Should I continue?