This is just a start I am still working on this and I already want to redo
a few things
I was just wondering what people thought and if they had any ideas, besides spelling and grammar
"Coty get up we have to go to school," Alyssa yelled at her brother from the doorway into his bed room. Coty laid passed out on his bed from a long night of partying, Alyssa too was dealing with a hang over but had managed to get up.
"Lysa," Coty moaned from his bed
"What?" She yelled back she was in the bathroom brushing her teeth and trying to hide her red eyes.
"I think I'm going to die," Coty responded then closed his eyes and tried to go back to sleep.
"Get up Coty," she yelled again knowing he was trying to go back to sleep. Fifteen minutes later and Coty managed to get out of bed and brush his teeth, he had put on a beanie to hide his shaggy messed up hair
"Where are mom and dad?" Coty asked as he meet Alyssa in the kitchen she was eating a bagel.
"They left already, its eight thirty we're late," she then said. Coty sat on the bar stool and dropped his head on to his arms hoping to get a little sleep while he waited for Alyssa to finish her bagel.
"Come on Coty we need to go," she said as she started down the stairs to the garage Coty slowly followed behind almost sleepwalking. Once in the car Coty dissembled the rearview mirror and pulled out a safety container that looks like a cleaning spray but unscrews on the bottom. After unscrewing the bottom he revealed a small film container, his cocaine stash.
"Come on Coty it is too late for this," Alyssa complained, he looked up from what he was doing at her, he face was pale with black circles around his eyes.
"Would you like to walk?" He snapped back, and then went back to cutting the powder into lines. Alyssa didn't say anything else as she watched him snort two lines.
"Well Alyssa and Coty Stark, why are you two so late today?" the attendance lady asked as the two walked up to the main office.
"Forgot to set my alarm," Alyssa cheerily replied with a smile then signed the slip.
"Alyssa you have Ms. Berg right, and Coty... Mr. Melbye?" she asked not too sure
"Yah," Coty quietly answered back, he was slowly swaying back and forth as he stood watching Alyssa sign his slip for him.
"Where were you?" Mr. Melbye asked as Coty walked into the class and headed for his seat.
"Not here," Coty answered back. Mr. Melbye's class was a very laid-back art class. Coty put his he ad down on the table and went back to trying to sleep.
"Coty!" Melbye yelled in his ear ten minutes after Coty had fallen asleep.
"What the fuck," Coty yelled as he jolted up to see where he was.
"Nap time is over its time to do some work," Melbye told him
"I don't have anything to do Melbye," Coty moaned as he started to put his head back down.
"Go finish your painting in Ms. Galloway's class then," Melbye instructed, Coty looked at him for a minute then got his stuff and went across the room and start to work on his painting.
After school Coty's good friend Brad sat waiting in his car for Coty. Brad sat nervously waiting for him, because he was taking Coty to a school for troubled teens, Mt. horizon.
"Hey Coty I came to pick you up man," Brad said as Coty walked up to the car.
"Thanks, but I drove my own car here man," Coty smiled, thinking it was odd but not sensing anything was wrong at all.
"Lysa can drive it home, come on man, I need to talk to you about something," Brad insisted.
"Ok one minute let me go put some stuff in my car I'll be right back," Coty said wondering why Brad was acting so weird.
"Ah come on you can do that later I really need to talk to you," Brad said, Coty nodded and got in thinking it must have been important if Brad was so persistent.
"So where are we going?" Coty asked, as they started to drive onto the highway.
"I found this awesome place up in the woods I want to show you," Brad said
"So what did you want to talk about so badly?" Coty asked as he slouched back and took out a cigarette.
"Hey Coty When I was gone what happened to you man?" Brad asked. Brad had left for two months and when he came back Coty had lost a lot of weight and looked sick.
"Nothing what are you talking about Brad?" Coty asked not letting on at all.
"Well you lost a lot of weight and you look like you have cancer or something," Brad bluntly said.
"Just lost some weight," Coty replied." why man?"
"No reason, " Brad then dropped it and they quietly drove on.
I was just wondering what people thought and if they had any ideas, besides spelling and grammar
"Coty get up we have to go to school," Alyssa yelled at her brother from the doorway into his bed room. Coty laid passed out on his bed from a long night of partying, Alyssa too was dealing with a hang over but had managed to get up.
"Lysa," Coty moaned from his bed
"What?" She yelled back she was in the bathroom brushing her teeth and trying to hide her red eyes.
"I think I'm going to die," Coty responded then closed his eyes and tried to go back to sleep.
"Get up Coty," she yelled again knowing he was trying to go back to sleep. Fifteen minutes later and Coty managed to get out of bed and brush his teeth, he had put on a beanie to hide his shaggy messed up hair
"Where are mom and dad?" Coty asked as he meet Alyssa in the kitchen she was eating a bagel.
"They left already, its eight thirty we're late," she then said. Coty sat on the bar stool and dropped his head on to his arms hoping to get a little sleep while he waited for Alyssa to finish her bagel.
"Come on Coty we need to go," she said as she started down the stairs to the garage Coty slowly followed behind almost sleepwalking. Once in the car Coty dissembled the rearview mirror and pulled out a safety container that looks like a cleaning spray but unscrews on the bottom. After unscrewing the bottom he revealed a small film container, his cocaine stash.
"Come on Coty it is too late for this," Alyssa complained, he looked up from what he was doing at her, he face was pale with black circles around his eyes.
"Would you like to walk?" He snapped back, and then went back to cutting the powder into lines. Alyssa didn't say anything else as she watched him snort two lines.
"Well Alyssa and Coty Stark, why are you two so late today?" the attendance lady asked as the two walked up to the main office.
"Forgot to set my alarm," Alyssa cheerily replied with a smile then signed the slip.
"Alyssa you have Ms. Berg right, and Coty... Mr. Melbye?" she asked not too sure
"Yah," Coty quietly answered back, he was slowly swaying back and forth as he stood watching Alyssa sign his slip for him.
"Where were you?" Mr. Melbye asked as Coty walked into the class and headed for his seat.
"Not here," Coty answered back. Mr. Melbye's class was a very laid-back art class. Coty put his he ad down on the table and went back to trying to sleep.
"Coty!" Melbye yelled in his ear ten minutes after Coty had fallen asleep.
"What the fuck," Coty yelled as he jolted up to see where he was.
"Nap time is over its time to do some work," Melbye told him
"I don't have anything to do Melbye," Coty moaned as he started to put his head back down.
"Go finish your painting in Ms. Galloway's class then," Melbye instructed, Coty looked at him for a minute then got his stuff and went across the room and start to work on his painting.
After school Coty's good friend Brad sat waiting in his car for Coty. Brad sat nervously waiting for him, because he was taking Coty to a school for troubled teens, Mt. horizon.
"Hey Coty I came to pick you up man," Brad said as Coty walked up to the car.
"Thanks, but I drove my own car here man," Coty smiled, thinking it was odd but not sensing anything was wrong at all.
"Lysa can drive it home, come on man, I need to talk to you about something," Brad insisted.
"Ok one minute let me go put some stuff in my car I'll be right back," Coty said wondering why Brad was acting so weird.
"Ah come on you can do that later I really need to talk to you," Brad said, Coty nodded and got in thinking it must have been important if Brad was so persistent.
"So where are we going?" Coty asked, as they started to drive onto the highway.
"I found this awesome place up in the woods I want to show you," Brad said
"So what did you want to talk about so badly?" Coty asked as he slouched back and took out a cigarette.
"Hey Coty When I was gone what happened to you man?" Brad asked. Brad had left for two months and when he came back Coty had lost a lot of weight and looked sick.
"Nothing what are you talking about Brad?" Coty asked not letting on at all.
"Well you lost a lot of weight and you look like you have cancer or something," Brad bluntly said.
"Just lost some weight," Coty replied." why man?"
"No reason, " Brad then dropped it and they quietly drove on.