Hiya! I'm back with the rewrite! It's about 50 words longer though. Enjoy.
Edit: This chapter is revised...well a bit I still suck epically at editing. Ps. I don't own DBZ!
"Chia where are you taking me?" Gohan asked curiously as I dragged him over a fallen tree. I frowned; He had asked me this at least twenty times already. I turned to him and pressed a single finger to my lips.
"It's a surprise Gohan, just wait." I told him before taking his hand and dragging him along.
When we arrived I stepped into his view smiling, "We're here!" I said, side-stepping so that he could see past me. It was a large lake with a log that served as a bridge that led half-way into the water. I had found it while I was hiding from Momma's 'housewife' lessons. As much as I loved her, she was a bit out there with her ideas.
Gohan stared, amazed, "It's so pretty." He murmured quietly walking to the log. A bird landed on the edge and he laid down to get a closer look. He scooted a bit ti the left to make room for me, and I laid down beside him.
"You're a pretty bird." He told the bird. I smiled as I walked closer and lay down beside Gohan. The bird was pitch black and had a pretty maroon belly.
I looked closely at the bird but when I did it flew away.
"Please don't go." Gohan said as he reached out for the bird. But she just flew further. Suddenly the log rolled off the ground and into the water making Gohan and I go under. When we popped up we grabbed hold of the log once more.
I coughed and sputtered, gasping for breath, "Papa!" I didn't know how to swim or float for that matter. I started to cry. I didn't want to drown! I was only four years old! Gohan copied my actions tears streaming down his face.
"Papa!" I tried again. Papa didn't hear us. I clutched Gohan as we both went under again. My raven hair stuck to my face as I cried louder. Gohan slipped under moving to the edge of the log. Where was Papa?
"Gohan! Chia!" I looked up to see Papa flying over us with nimbus.
"Daddy we are here!" Gohan yelled to him. I stretched out my hand to grab Papa's as he dove down. My hand slipped and I went under. I grabbed the log and pulled myself up. Now able to see above water, I could see that we were approaching a hole. There was no way Papa was going to get us from there. It was only a few seconds before darkness surrounded me; the water splashed mine and Gohan's face. I saw light soon enough and I was out of the hole. I saw a waterfall approaching. I screamed and then I saw black.
I opened my eyes to find myself clutching a small branch along with Gohan. Papa was slowly floating up to us. Once he became level with us I pounced on him, as did Gohan.
"P-Papa! I took Gohan here to show him how pretty it was and we saw a bird. It flew away and the log rolled off making us fall In! It was so scary and….."
~ At the Son home thirty minutes after
Mama brushed my hair for the fifth time in about three minutes making sure there were no tangles or knots. My raven hair fell to my shoulders as she finally stopped ushering me towards my dress. It was a pink sun dress completed with pink flats and a white flower head band.
I slipped the dress on and pushed up my head band. My shoes made a clicking sound every time I walked. Mama literally shone with happiness. She scooped me up telling me how cute I looked and how I was going to be an excellent housewife. I wiggled my way out of my insane mother's grasp and ran over to Gohan who was in his tunic.
Papa smiled at us as we looked over to him ready to climb on Nimbus. Papa picked me up first, setting me on Nimbus before picking up Gohan, who he sat beside me. We waved goodbye to Mama and Papa hopped on Nimbus.
"Keep them safe Goku!" She ordered. Papa smiled and nodded. She nodded and blew us a kiss before waving us goodbye.
"Okay you two, hold on." He told us. I grabbed onto Papa's leg and Gohan grabbed on to his other one. Nimbus took off, buzzing quietly as he moved. I looked down to see the scenery. Seeing how far up we were I quickly looked back up, silently making a note to never look down while flying on Nimbus.
Papa looked at us before smiling.
"Are you two excited to meet my mentor?" He asked us, looking down to see us.
Slowly I started to see a pink house. I could faintly make up some words. Kame House.
"Is that it Papa?" I asked. Papa nodded and told Nimbus to go faster. Gohan clutched tighter as Nimbus went into sonic speed. The house was coming closer and closer. Soon enough we were a few feet above the ground. I slowly eased my way off of the fluffy cloud and waited for my twin. Gohan was soon by me, grabbing his hand we walked towards the small house.
"Master Roshi! Bulma! Krillin! Yoo-hoo anyone home?" Papa called. Three people emerged from the house. A woman who had blue hair and eyes, she looked about in her thirties, came out first. A man who was about 5'0, came second. Lastly an old man was a long gray beard and red dark shades.
"Goku?" The said coming closer to Papa and us.
"Hiya Bulma!" Papa waved. So that was her name, Bulma. I hid behind Papa's pants leg. When I peeked out the three people were looking at me and Gohan.
"Uh Goku? Did you take up babysitting or something?" The bald man asked-Krillin I believed is what Papa called him. Papa shooked his head before pushing us in front of him.
"These are my children, this is Chia and this is Gohan." He told them pointing to me and then Gohan.
Bulma squealed, "Aw they are so cute Goku! How old are you two?"
"We're four!" Gohan and I told her, holding up four fingers.
Bulma blinked, "You two are twins?" We both nodded. She smiled, "Well hello I'm Bulma." She greeted.
"My my Kakarot, look how much you've grown. You look just like Father." We all turned to see a man with long spiky black hair that was almost as tall as he was, and he was just in some weird type of armor. The weirdest thing was that he had a tail wrapped around his leg.
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Edit: I just kind of cringe when I look at these now...I revised it a bit so it should be more bearable.