ok so this was actually a english assignment that i did based on twilight (yeah im that obsessed... to make it worse i have to read it i front of the whole class tomorrow (i hate public speaking and plus they've never read twilight so they wont understand what i'm talking about and they'll think im crazy or disturbed or something)) im working on a fanfic thats post new moon and this is actually going to be an exact part in it (but im not gonna tell u what part...just think it could be the beginning, the middle, anything hehehe i so mean) but no worries ill post the first chapter for it as soon as i start getting reviews on this "yes lots of reviews!!! review!! review!!" says the little voices in my head (if your wondering why i'm writing what the little voices in my head say just read my profile... im freakin mental!!! there controlling my life!!! help me:O
id like to thank one of my best buddies jasmine for proofreading this for me. i luv you, you awsome-tastic person!!! oh and id also like to thank dilaney for changing my grammer mistakes. you rock! oh oh and of course i cant forget my besterest buddy whom happens to be equally as crazy as me, maybe even a little more (impossible right?... i think not!!), agnes, for putting up with me. i mean we live like two or three counties away and we still manage to talk like twice a day. you put up with me when im freaking out cause i've got writers block or something like that (and i get completely mental when i've got writers block). i don't know how you do it agnes but i love you anyway!
disclaimer: i dont own twilight or any of the characters i mention in this, they a belong to the dearly beloved stephanie meyer...but it would be sooo freakin awsome if i did:P
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Edward gave Bella a stunned, yet understanding look. He couldn't believe he was doing this now but it was an emergency; a matter of life or death… or should we say death or 'eternal damnation'. This was the only way to save Bella's precious soul, the one Edward cared so greatly about. "Are you absolutely sure about this?" he asked.
As Bella thought she studied her surroundings. Edward and Bella had been sitting on the piano bench in the living room of the Cullens' mansion. The rest of Edward's immortal family, which she would soon be part of, waited in the kitchen to hear Bella's cries of pain. The Volturi's waited patiently outside. If they did not hear Bella's screams and in three long, torturous days see the ultimate powers she would obtain as one of them, they planned on killing her and the rest of Edward's family so that Edward would be left on this cold, callous world, lonely for eternity. The entire house was quiet, almost like everyone was holding the breath they truly didn't need.
Bella looked back into Edward's smoldering, golden eyes and said, "I trust you". "You do realize that this means forever," he said. Forever—it's amazing how such a small word could mean so much. Bella gave a nod and a soft smile. She gave him her wrist. He stared at her for a few more seconds. He grabbed her wrist and his mouth slowly made it's way towards it. He stopped midway and said in a voice that broke Bella's heart, "I love you, Bella Swan." He pressed his lips gently on her wrist and Bella shut her eyes tightly to brace herself for the pain…
And then he bit her.
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omg i just noticed that my authors note is bigger than the actual story!!! and im just making it longer by writing this.
bye-bye peoples and don't forget to push that review button...i dont see you pushing it!!
love the entertainingly mental, sasha