I'm doing another version of this fanfic because the first version cut out everything in between those arrow-like thingies, so you couldn't see what the characters were doing or what Pikachu was saying and that would really make you confused so I'm using different symbols for stuff like that so forget about that chart thing I had up the first time. It showed the symbols I was using but now it's pretty much useless. So enjoy the redone version!

CHRISTMAS VACATION:Prologue

{Cloud,Tifa,Barret,Aeris,and Red XIII(of course!) are waiting outside Rinoa Heartilly's house}

Cloud:How long have they been in there!?! It seems like hours!

Tifa:Relax! It's only been half an hour!

Barret:Well that's 29 minutes too long![Faces house and yells]C'MON, YOU GUYS! WE DON'T HAVE ALL DAY! HURRY UP!

Aeris: Barret! Calm down,sheesh!

[The door starts to open at the house]

Red XIII: Here they come!

[The door opens and Squall,Rinoa,and Selphie come out, with a whole bunch of suitcases]

Rinoa:Hi,guys! Sorry it took so long! Squall forgot where his suitcases were.

Squall: I'm telling ya, it's the GF!

Rinoa: Yeah, right... Well,anyway, is everybody here?

[Squall notices Aeris]

Squall:o_O What the heck!?! Isn't she dead?!? That means.....It's a ghost! AAAHHH![runs around hystericly]

Cloud: Calm down,Squall! She's alive!

Squall:[stops running] Huh?

Cloud: We used a Revive materia and brought her back to life.

Squall: Oh....

Rinoa: Well, let's go!!!

Cloud: Wait! We're still waiting for the others to get here.

Rinoa: Who were they again?

Cloud: Ash, Misty, and Brock.

[just as Cloud says that, Ash,Misty,and Brock run up to the group with suitcases of their own]

Ash: Hi,guys! We would have gotten here sooner if somebody hadn't forgotten their stuff.[turns to look at Pikachu]

Pikachu: Pika! Pika Pika Pi Pikachu Pi Pi![Hey! What are you looking at me for!?!]

Selphie: Awwww! Look at the cute little rabbit!

Ash: Uhhhh, it's not a rabbit.....

[Selphie grabs Pikachu and gives it a big hug and practicly crushes it]

Pikachu: Chuuuuu,Chuuuu,Chuuuuuu![Heeeeelp,Heeeeelp,Heeeeelp!]

[Pikachu starts charging up a thundershock but Selphie's too busy squeezing Pikachu to notice]

Ash: I wouldn't do that if I were you,Selphie.....

Selphie: How dangerous can a harmless little rabbit-

[Pikachu lets off a thundershock and zaps Selphie and she falls over]

Selphie:[weakly] beee....uhhhhhhhh.@_@

Barret:[amazed] Damn!

Tifa: So much for harmless.....

Cloud: That thing's got more electricity than a Mako Reactor!

{After Selphie regains her bearings, all of the suitcases are packed into the car}

Cloud: Well, we're all here so let's go!

Everybody: Yay! Let's go!

Cloud: Uh, who's gonna drive?

Squall: I'll drive!

Cloud: Uh, that's o.k., you don't need to drive.....

Squall: I just got my driver's licence and I can't wait to drive!

Cloud:[That's what I'm afraid of.....]

{On the highway, Squall is driving like a maniac and everyone is trying to hold on}

Cloud: Squall! Slow down a little!!!

Barret: Damn it,Squall! Slow down!

Pikachu: Pikaaaaaa! Pikachu Pika Pika Pika![AAAAAHHHHHH! Squall,slow down already!]

Squall:[enjoying the thrill of going 100 miles per hour] WHOOOOOOHOOOOOOOO!!!!!

Aeris: Hey Squall! Our turn's coming up! Slow down!

Squall:[disappointed] Oh all right.....

[slows down the car, but does it too fast, and everyone gets flung foreward]

Everyone: Whoooooa!!!!!

[Squall pulls over so everybody can recover and sees everyone is tangled up]

Ash: Get off of me, Cloud!

Cloud: Well, get off of me, Brock!

Brock:[realizes that Tifa is on top of him] Don't get off of me, Tifa!

Tifa: Get AWAY from me, Brock!

[Everybody gets reorientated and Squall starts off again]

Cloud: Next time,Squall, don't go from 100 m.p.h. to 1 m.p.h. in a second....

Squall: Alright... Hey, we're here![pulls up into the driveway]

{ Our characters see a big two-floor log cabin next to the driveway}

Barret: What the hell? This place is really ugly!

Misty:This is where we're going to spend Christmas vacation? No way!

Cloud: Well the guy who rented it to us said it looks better on the inside.....

Aeris: I guess we'll have to find out what it looks like on the inside in the first true episode of Christmas Vacation.....

Misty:[groans] I want to find out now!

Aeris: Well I guess you'll have to wait along with the rest of us.

Misty: Oh man..... ____________________________________________________

Well, I hope you like the redone version better than the first version! I'll be redoing Part One soon, so until then, you'll have to just be confused while reading it. Oh, and I'll be making Part Two around then too, so that'll be great! Make sure to review this story!