This is my first fanfic so please review this small snippet and tell me whether I should carry it on and what you think of it overall.
The air was cool just like it always was in the TARDIS. "Doctor, do you know where I left my diary?" asked river in her usual flirty voice. "It's on the coffee table next to the pile of DVDs in the room next to the swimming pool!" the doctor shouted rather too smugly for rivers liking. Someone normal may have found it impossible to find that specific room however since River had a special bond with the TARDIS she found her diary with no trouble. She made her way quickly back to the control room to find her beloved husband tinkering with multiple wires that seemed to be endless being pulled out of the floor. She cocked her eye brow looking at him "you aren't going to be doing that for the whole day are you, sweetie," Giving him her best smile looking over at him suspiciously, putting extra emphasis on the word 'whole.' "No, Dear, I was just waiting for you to tell me where you wanted to go," The doctor replied almost sarcastically finally putting the wires down and taking in her radiant body. "So where would you like to go then my sweetheart?" he asks slyly. "Surprise me Space-Boy" River said ever said ever so cheekily. "well you really shouldn't have said that honey, but you better not tell your parents that we go on adventures when they've gone to bed- I will never hear the end of it!" He said jokingly to his wife.
River was glad that she put on the extra layers that she grabbed from their bedroom before the doctor dragged her out of the TARDIS. She looked around and honestly was stuck for words. She didn't know where or when she was but what she did know is that the doctor never failed to wow her. The TARDIS was parked on a massive frozen lake that looked like it should have belonged in a fairy tale, all around were masses of what looked like fir trees but couldn't have been because all the trees instead of being the emerald green that they were back on earth these were all a burnt scarlet colour covered with snow. She looked up into the sky startled to see four suns burning high in the sky. It was only then that she realised the doctor had ran back into the TARDIS for something he had obviously forgotten. "God that man would forget his head if it wasn't screwed on" she thought to herself happily as she wondered across the lake. The doctor ran back out with two pairs of ice skates and a grin stretching across his face. "Care to join me Dr Song?" he asked already knowing the answer.
A couple hours later they both came dancing merrily through the TARDIS doors (River very tipsy from having drunk far too much mulled wine!) to stop dead in their tracks. There, scowling at them was Amy and Rory not impressed to have been left out of the fun.
"When were you planning on telling us that you two sneak out when we're asleep and have adventures of your own without us!" shouted Amy furiously across the TARDIS aimed at the Doctor mainly but also at her very naughty daughter who was standing behind him peeking around looking at her mother all the while hiccupping into the doctors ear making him chuckle. "Oh mummy, mummy, lighten up would you!" River managed to say very giggly. "Melody pond, how dare you talk to your mum like that." Rory said as calmly as he could to try and cool down the scene. "Oh just ignore river, she may have had a drop to much to drink but don't worry I'm going to take her back to our room and look after her." The doctor said very matter of fact. "Is that a promise Doctor!" River flirted outrageously with the Doctor in front of her parents.
The Doctor grabbed River's arm and pulled her to him running down the TARDIS's corridors into their bedroom slamming the door behind them.
"I don't want to imagine what's going on in that bedroom of theirs." Amy said to her loving husband Rory. "Come on, lets go back to bed" Rory muttered to Amy wrapping his arm around Amy's waist and leading her back to their bedroom.
The next morning river woke up in bed with a splitting headache and then remembered what had happened the night before. She looked to the side of her expecting to see her wonderful doctor staring back at her however he wasn't there. At that moment the door swung open with him bringing in a tray of breakfast, a cup of tea and a glass of water. "How 'you feeling today, darling" The Doctor asked her fondly. "Not so great sweetie, how much did you let me drink last night?" River replied questioningly. "A little too much Dear," He chuckled. "Get up and come find us in the control room when you feel up to it Darling."
About half an hour later river managed to pull herself out of bed and saunter in to the control room where she could obviously tell that the three of them were talking about them. River rolled her eyes at them and strolled over to the doctor linking her hand in his. "so where are we going today then sweetie?" River asked softly. The Doctor gave her a side smile, tapping her on the nose "spoilers!"