CH1: "Alliances"

Hey guys! I've succumbed to the evil, I've decided to repost one of the worst fics (or best troll-fics) of Warriors history: dundundun... Starkit's Prophecy. It's not an original idea, but hey, I feel like I could add to this story. This is a revised version of the text, but I will be leaving in typos that are funny.

Please leave me a review on what you think of it. Hopefully, I will get the 2nd chapter up tonight so you guys aren't left with just the allegiances.

Please also note that this version has been edited. The some grammar and some of the spelling has been corrected: the original story was much, much worse. My notes are in Bold-Italics, and The original Author notes are in Straight-up bold.

Allegiances
Ok, so like I said this is my first story. Be nice please (We'll try our hardest)

BTW, it's set after sunset, so...

ThunderClan

Leader: Firestar - ginger tom with a flame-colored pelt

Deputy: Brambleclaw - dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes

Medicine Cat: Jayfeather - gray tom

Warriors:

Squirrelflight - dark ginger she-cat with green eyes (Squirrelflight is the most senior warrior? Interesting...)

Apprentice, Foxpaw

Dustpelt - dark brown tabby tom

Sandstorm - pale ginger she-cat

Cloudtail - long-haired white tom

Apprentice Daisypaw - cream long-furred cat from the horseplace (no comment here)

Brackenfur - golden brown tabby tom

Sorreltail - tortoiseshell-and-white she-cat with amber eyes

Thornclaw - golden brown tabby tom

Brightheart - white she-cat with ginger patches

Spiderleg - long-limbed black tom with brown underbelly and amber eyes

Whitewing - white she-cat with green eyes

Apprentice, Icepaw

Birchfall - light brown tabby tom

Graystripe - long-haired gray tom

Berrynose - cream-colored tom

Hazeltail - small gray-and-white she-cat

Mousewhisker - gray-and-white tom

Cinderheart - gray tabby she-cat

Poppyfrost - tortoiseshell she-cat

Honeyfern- light brown tabby she-cat

Lionblaze - golden tabby tom

Hollyleaf - black she-cat

Foxheart - reddish tabby tom (hang on a moment, weren't "Foxheart" and "Icefire" apprentices a few lines ago?)

Icefire-white she cat

Toadribbit-black—and-white tom

Roseflame-dark cream she cat

Briarstorm-dark brown she cat

Bumbleflower-very pale gray tom with black stripes (very manly name for Bumblepaw)

Blossomwind-pale brown she cat with a dark stripe along her spine

Apprentices:

Foxpaw - flame-colored tom

Daisypaw - cream long-furred cat from the horseplace

Flamepaw - fire-colored she cat with one grnee eye one blue eye

Lakepaw- bright blue-gray she cat with blue eyes

(The last two are Starkit's sisters)

Jazzpaw- red she cat with blue eyes and a black tail (I would make a comment here, but I really don't have anything to say for this name choice)

Queens:

Ferncloud - pale gray (with darker flecks) she-cat with green eyes mother of Dustpelt's kits (which are...?)

Dawnsparkle-bright tortoiseshell she cat with gargantuan blue eyes mother of Jayfeather's kits, formally of ShadowClan (*hums* Keeps getting better)

Kits:

StarKit - gray-ish, blue-and purple she cat with molting orange eyes and a white star on her forehead (I can't even try to think about what "molting" is referring to. Revolting? Let's stick with that.)

Elders:

Longtail - pale tabby tom with dark black stripes, retired early due to failing sight

Mousefur - small dusky brown she-cat

Weaslepelt- big red tabby he-cat (he-cat, I'm dying...I'm using this from now on instead of "tom") with bright yellow eyes (he's Rowanclaw's dad, he came to Thunderclan when Dawnsparkle did)

Leafpool-brown tabby she cat

ShadowClan

Leader: Blackstar - large white tom with huge jet-black paws

Deputy: Russetfur - dark ginger she-cat

Medicine Cat: Littlecloud - very small tabby tom

Apprentice, Flamepaw (ginger tom)

Warriors:

Oakfur - small brown tom

Apprentice, Tigerpaw (dark brown tabby tom)

Rowanclaw - ginger tom

Smokefoot - black tom

Apprentice, Owlpaw (light brown tabby tom)

Ivytail - black, white and tortoiseshell she-cat

Apprentice, Dawnpaw (cream-furred she-cat)

Toadfoot - dark brown tom

Crowfrost - black-and-white tom

Apprentice, Olivepaw (tortoiseshell she-cat)

Kinkfur - tabby she-cat, with long fur that sticks out at all angles

Ratscar - brown tom with long scar across his back

Apprentice, Shrewpaw (gray she-cat with black feet)

Snaketail - dark brown tabby tom with striped tail

Apprentice, Scorchpaw (dark gray tom)

Whitewater - white she-cat with long fur, blind in one eye

Apprentice, Redpaw (mottled brown and ginger tom)

Tawnypelt - tortoiseshell she-cat with green eyes

Flamewind- flame color tabby tom with green eye's

Tigerclaw-huge dark brown tabby tom with long claw's and amber eys

Dawnfeather- cream tabby she cat (shes a different cat than the one in TC ok?) (okay, we got it)

Olivepaw- bright brown she cat (bright brown... I'm going to use this description from now on!)

Queens:

Snowbird - pure white she-cat

Elders:

Cedarheart - dark gray tom

Tallpoppy - long-legged light brown she-cat

WindClan

Leader: Onestar - brown tabby tom

Deputy: Ashfoot - gray she-cat

Medicine Cat: Barkface - short-tailed brown tom

Apprentice, Kestrelpaw (mottled gray tom)

Warriors:

Tornear - tabby tom

Crowfeather - dark gray tom

Owlwhisker - light brown tabby tom

Whitetail - small white she-cat

Nightcloud - black she-cat

Gorsetail - very pale gray-and-white cat with blue eyes

Weaselfur - ginger tom with white paws

Harespring - brown-and-white tom

Leaftail - dark tabby tom, amber eyes

Apprentice, Thistlepaw (long-haired white tom)

Dewspots - spotted gray she-cat

Apprentice, Sedgepaw (light brown tabby she-cat)

Willowclaw - gray she-cat

Apprentice, Swallowpaw (dark gray she-cat)

Antpelt - brown tom with one black ear

Emberfoot - gray tom with two dark paws

Apprentice, Sunpaw (tortoiseshell she-cat with large white mark on her forehead)

Heathertail - light brown tabby she-cat with blue eyes

Breezepelt - black tom with amber eyes

Elders:

Morningflower - very old tortoiseshell queen

Webfoot - dark gray tabby tom

RiverClan

Leader: Leopardstar - unusually spotted golden tabby she-cat

Deputy: Mistyfoot - gray she-cat with blue eyes

Medicine Cat: Mothwing - dappled golden she-cat

Apprentice, Willowshine (gray tabby she-cat)

Warriors:

Blackclaw - smoky-black tom

Voletooth - small brown tabby tom

Apprentice, Minnowpaw (dark gray she-cat)

Reedwhisker - black tom

Mosspelt - tortoiseshell she-cat with blue eyes

Apprentice, Pebblepaw (mottled gray tom)

Beechfur - light brown tom

Rippletail - dark gray tabby tom

Apprentice, Mallowpaw (light brown tabby tom)

Graymist - pale gray tabby

Dawnflower - pale gray she-cat

Dapplenose - mottled gray she-cat

Pouncetail - ginger-and-white tom

Mintfur - light gray tabby tom

Apprentice, Nettlepaw (dark brown tabby tom)

Otterheart - dark brown she-cat

Apprentice, Sneezepaw (gray-and-white tom)

Pinefur - very short-haired tabby she-cat

Apprentice, Robinpaw (tortoiseshell-and-white tom)

Rainstorm - mottled gray-blue tom

Duskfur - brown tabby she-cat

Apprentice, Copperpaw (dark ginger she-cat)

Queens:

Icewing - white cat with green eyes, mother of Beetlekit, Pricklekit, Petalkit, and Grasskit

Elders:

Heavystep - thickset tabby tom

Swallowtail - dark tabby she-cat

Stonestream - gray tom

All in all, I'm rather impressed with this chapter. Had xdarkrosesx broke character? Or had she discovered the wonder of copy + paste? A question that may never be answered.

PLEASE NOTE: This is not my original story. It was first posted on FF by xdarkrosesx sometime back in the day. I have reposted it here for your enjoyment and so you may read this Starclan-awful story without the grammatical horrors and spelling blunders.

Also, remember that bold-italics is me, and bold is her. Got it? :)

I'll post the next chapter ASAP.

Clearflight (bridget)