I wrote this Stargate poem for my English 101 class, and decided to post it. I'll probably have a million of these nifty poems by the end of the semester. Which is really close!!

Jaffa firing

Hot rounds whizzing by

Madness ensues.

Kevlar gives

Force pushes you backwards

Time slows down

As your eyes close.

I hurry to your side,

Praying silently

Hoping you'd live to

See our dream.

Your vest hot to the touch,

I radio, "Colonel's down!"

The color drains from your face

I notice the medics,

Tears and fear stained on their faces.

My mind races my heart,

Two thoroughbreds locked in rhythm.

My mind exclaims

"Take command!"

But my heart screams louder,

"Stay with him."

My weapon's jammed,

I try furiously to clear it

As they carry you away.