Hey, this is a story that I had in my head for quite a while, and I thought that it turned out pretty good. I really hope you review so I can make it better for you to read and criticism is more than welcome too. Thanks and enjoy!
Prologue:
Issa ran toward Leila, who was surrounded by Dracules and looked like she couldn't last much longer. He was halfway there when a Dracule blocked his way. Issa skidded to a halt and starred up at it incredulously. He had never seen anything like it before. This Dracule was bigger and beefier than the others, but what made it stand out was its eyes. They contained little silver wisps in them that moved around constantly. Each time the wisps changed position, it would release a little hissing sound. It was unnerving and took all of Issa's willpower not to cringe.
"What do you want? Can't you see I'm busy?" Issa drawled, adopting an impassive face.
The Dracule grinned knowingly, saliva dripping from its fangs onto the ground. "Busy how? Saving your girlfriend?" The Dracule jerked a finger behind him at Leila.
Issa's face paled. Leila looked in their direction at the sound of her name. The Dracule shot a triumphant grin at Issa before he turned and darted to her. Leila's eyes narrowed and she steadied her sword to meet her incoming foe. Issa groaned and yelled at her to run, but the Dracule was quicker. It raised a claw to strike, but placed it on her head instead. Leila jerked and fell limply to the ground.
Issa charged toward the Dracule, but he swiped air. He grumbled grumpily to himself and knelt next to Leila. She was still conscious and starred at him fearfully.
"Who are you?" She whispered hoarsely.