Well, this is my first ever typed thing for the internet ever. I really stink at this kind of stuff but I thought I'd give it a try. So take it easy on the flamers. I based the format on other fanfics to get a rough idea. Since I don't know much about Naruto I'm putting all jutsus in English and making some up as well. Sadly I find nothing more to say so here it is.
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Legend:
'…thoughts…'
"…normal speak…"
". . .Bijuu thoughts. . ."
". ..Bijuu speak. . . "
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Chapter One:
The Beginning of a Hero:
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"Run" that was all Naruto could think about right now. Today was the same day the Yondaime 'killed' the Kyuubi 5 years ago. The same day Naruto was born.
"Kill the demon!"
"Erase that monster from our village!"
Those were one of the few things Naruto was hearing right now. Ever since he was born the only thing he had ever experienced was hate. Hate was the only thing he knew he could receive. Upon thinking about his past, he ran right into a dead end.
"Dead end for you scum," Naruto only closed his eyes, getting in fetal position, ready for the pain about to be inflicted on him.
The mob rushed to Naruto quickly beating him with whatever they could find. The ninja in the group used every fire jutsu they knew. Some of the more sinester ninja's even used acid. Naruto's extremely fast healing could not save him now. His vision began to fade. Several seconds later he entered an eternal darkness.
When Naruto opened his eyes, he discovered a rare sight. In front of him was the most feared being in all of the Shinobi Nations. It was the Shinigami.
"Don't fear Naruto-kun" Shinigami said in his deep, hollow voice. "I haven't brought you here for any torture, the reason I've brought you here is because I'm giving you the chance to get what you need." "I want to give you a gift Naruto-kun."Naruto quickly looked up not quite understanding what the Shinigami was implying.
"What kind of gift, Shinigami-san?" Asked Naruto suspiciously, knowing something was strange. "And what do you mean when you say 'I'm giving you the chance to get what you need?'?" The great Shinigami sighed.
"Haven't you ever wondered why, the villagers always beat you so badly?" the Shinigami questioned. Naruto thought it over, not knowing why. The Shinigami's face hardened. "Let me tell you about what really happened that night the Yondaime fought Kyuubi." Naruto nodded, not sure what this had to do with his question.
It was impossible for a mere mortal to kill the Kyuubi. When a demon gains its ninth tail, it gains immortality. The Yondaime, knowing this, quickly devised a seal to take the Kyuubi's soul out of its body. The seal was called 'Shiki Fuujin' which summoned me to seal the Kyuubi's soul into a newborn baby whose charka coils had not developed yet. To complete such a jutsu, I have to take the sealers soul as well. Shinigami stopped for a brief moment. The child that had Kyuubi sealed within him, was you. Naruto's eyes were filled with tears. All the pieces were beginning to fall into place. The mobs, the beatings, and all that scorn.
Naruto sobbed. He cried his eyes out knowing that all he was a bloodthirsty demon. He fell on his knees. "Look Naruto, I'm sorry that I had to break it to you,but you needed to know, it's your right to have this knowlage"
"I know Shinigami-san thanks for your help"
"Now then, I think this would be the time I should give you your gift." the Shingami sighed. Naruto cheered up fairly quickly.
"WHAT IS IT, WHAT IS IT WHAT IS IT" Naruto exclaimed. The Shinigami sweatdropped. He blinked once, then twice. It seemed he was temporarily deaf.
"DAMMIT SHUT UP GAKI!" the Shinigami cried out. "Ahem, now then, about that gift we were talking about." "I'm going to train you."
Naruto stared at the Shingami, obviously not believing him. "You? the Shinigami, train me?" Naruto questioned. There was no way this was true.
"Look kid I'm going to train you now get your ass off the ground and lets go"
"Go where? Naruto questioned.
"My weapon stock" the Shinigami smirked.
Suddenly there was a flash of light. In front of them was now a gigantic building large enough for a villaged to fit in. As they entered Shinigami's weapon stock, Naruto gapped. There were at least more than a billion weapons in here!
"Go on kid choose a weapon" the Shinigami offered. Naruto wandered around. Soon there was a sound of metal slashing metal.
"Shisho! I want these!" Naruto came back with two weapons. A black long sword with red trimming and a curved tip. And a sky blue blade with dark blue trimming.
The Shinigami smirked. "And what are you going to name these fine weapons?"
"Hmmm, I'm think im going to call them call them Kokushibyou and Hyorinmaru."
"Fit names for the next Shingami" the Shingami implied. "Well gaki, lets begin your tortur- ahem training shall we?" the Shinigami smiled menacingly.
Naruto just gulped.
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A/N: I know this bears a striking resemblance to some fanfics but I intend to change the rest of the chapters so that it's different. A lot of the names I used are most likely from other fanfics. Used them cause I'm too lazy to think of them. End of first chapter. Hope you liked it.
A/N 2: I'm going to make the other chapters longer, so please bare with me.