I need to know if this is good enough to continue. At the moment, I'm thinking about deleting it.
MYJ, reviewing that much won't make a difference.
Much as I wish, I don't own twilight...
These chapters are more than a little short, because I have taken to giving each POV it's own chapter.
Please review!
From Edward's point of view…
No, how could this have happened? I don't know…
I deserve to die.
But Bella… She made me promise.
Promise to stay, if something happened to her.
But she's gone now. She'd never know.
Would she?
I've sworn revenge on Felix, and he will pay.
I will kill every single soul he holds dear to his heart, if he has one.
When he is all alone, no one left and half-insane with grief…
He will die.
In the most excruciatingly painful way possible.
How could I have let this happen?
The scene is playing over and over in my head like a movie that won't turn off.
I'll go mad if this doesn't end.
"It's all right, Bella, Alice will catch you" I said, as Bella eyed the hole in the pavement with doubt in her eyes.
"Alice?" she asked, her voice trembling with fear.
"I'm right here, Bella" Alice's voice drifted up from far down.
"Edward?" she asked, clearly terrified.
"I'll go down first, if you like…" I was trying to reassure her.
She threw a quick glance over her shoulder, where Felix and Demetri were waiting with evil smirks. Then, at the hole in the ground.
"Yes, please" she said, her voice barely more than a whisper.
I jumped down the hole, waiting for Bella.
Then there was a high-pitched shriek, and a sound like someone slurping soup. I knew that sound.
"Bella!" cried Alice
There was no reply, just what sounded like a chuckle, then the thud of quickly retreating footsteps. I couldn't say anything. I couldn't move. My heart hadn't beat for near a hundred years, but this was different. I was in agony.
It was all my fault. She was gone, gone with the two seconds I left her alone with Felix.
He.
Will.
Pay.
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