Title: Love Can Take You On Journeys

Hi just before you read this story and say, "What a Crappy story I'm not going to

any of the other chapters " I would just like to say this is my first fanfiction I have ever

written. Also if it weren't for my two of my awesome buddies who showed me. Wait I

wouldn't have known about anime if my friend didn't push me over the edge. does that
one cough thing "DEE " She pretty much placed me on a chair, tied me up and turned

on some anime and made sure I was watching the whole time. So check out her story

it's called Winter's Kiss it's really good even though it is her first one. So don't be lazy


get your butts in gear and check out her story and if you don't then I will find you hunt

you down and make sure you read it and give it a good review say all the positives NO

NEGATIVES but you can give helpful hints...

Chapter ) 1: First Real Love

Mitsuki Koyama was sitting in a corner reading a book she checked out from the library. It was a book on the after life ( or some made up crap written by some freak who wrote it down to scare crazy people and send them to an early grave. Mitsuki thinks it was written by Izumi .) Just as she put down the book she saw Takuto standing there staring at the sky ( yes they are outside). She jolted up ran to him and hugged him. He looked strangely at her when she noticed the look he gave her she stopped and blushed. She was so embarrassed She was doing that every day for the past week. He would walk by or she would she him and she would just run over and hug him then of coarse he would start to freak out. She was also thinking about him every waking moment. It had been about six months since they first met and the time she had to live was getting shorter and shorter. She also noticed how pissed Meroko looked lately and every time she would hug Takuto it would be even worse and then she would glare at Mitsuki.
So finally Mitsuki got up enough courage to ask Meroko if something was wrong, " Meroko?"
"WHAT THE HELL DO YOU WANT?" she asked yelling at Mitsuki for no reason at all.
"W-Well-" Mitsuki stammered.
"WELL WHAT I DON"T HAVE ALL DAY " Well now Mitsuki knows that she was right about Meroko being ticked off, but she was ticked off at her.
"OH MY GOD MEROKO WHAT DID I DO TO PISS YOU OFF BECAUSE I COULD RETRACE MY STEPS FOR A HUNDRED LONG YEARS AND I WOULDN'T FIND ANYTHING THAT COULD POSSIBLY GET YOU MAD AT ME ALL I WAS TRYING TO DO A SECOND AGO WAS SEE IF YOU WERE OK BUT NO MEROKO HAS TO GET ALL MAD BECAUSE SOMEONE CARES YOU DON'T KNOW EVERYTHING MEROKO SO JUST SHUT UP " Mitsuki clutched her and fell on her hands and knees and then Takuto came in to the room to see what was going on but then saw Mitsuki on the floor not breathing.
" WHAT THE HELL DID YOU DO MEROKO?" Takuto stared at her but she didn't give her an answer so she ran out of the room crying.
Takuto used up a lot of his energy to make him self visible to other humans then he carried mitsuki outside called a cab then they drove to the hospital.
Mitsuki was not breathing...
That Ends My 1st Chapter Give lots of reviews I wanna make it better so it ain't crappy anymore