Ramen Night
By Duckie Benner
Disclaimer: I own none of these characters but the idea alone.
Memo: This is something I did during class today. It's not very good but I will post to see what you guys think of it.
It was late in the afternoon when training had ended. Sakura and Kakashi-Sensei had left about three minutes ago. Sasuke and Naruto were still standing there.
"I'm Bored and hungry." Naruto whined stretching his hands over his head.
"Ramen?" Sasuke asked, Naruto jumped up and screamed for joy.
"YES! I love Ramen, Sasuke Lets go!" Naruto yelled grabbing Sasuke's arm and dragging him toward the Ramen shop. They both order their favorite Ramen and waited.
"I want the biggest one ya got."
"I'll have the same as Naruto." While they waited they started to talk about Random things, like people they like…..
"So Sasuke you like anyone?"
"Not telling." Sasuke said turning away a feint tint to his pale cheeks.
"Aw come one. I'm trying to bond here."
"No!"
"Please? Pretty please?"
"No."
"Fine, hints then, age?"
"Same as mine."
"Boy or girl?"
"Not telling" The blush deepened on his face.
"Erg Fine, what are they like?"
"Loud, Annoying, and Cute as Hell…" Sasuke trailed off. Then their Ramen came. All through eating Naruto was trying to figure out who it was. Then he had an idea.
"It's Sakura, isn't it?" he looked disappointed. Sasuke looked at him like 'WTF?!'
"No, now finish your Ramen."
"Ino?"
"Nope, finished?" they finished and Sasuke paid. They walked down the road toward Naruto's house.
"Oh come on and tell me before we get to my house."
"Blond hair, from the leaf village….."
"No clue…." Naruto pushed his headband up and sighed. "I need a shower." They reached Naruto's house. Sasuke stopped at the door. He leaned in and looked naruto right in his bright blue eyes.
"You" Sasuke said and he kissed Naruto on the lips. Naruto kissed him back. It was just a simple, quick, kiss.
"You wanna come in?" Naruto asked pointing to his front door, Sasuke nodded. Naruto opened the door and the both walked in. Naruto closed the door but this could be heard.
"But first I need a shower."
"As long as I can join you." Sasuke said.
I rewrote it...What do you guys think of it now? I didn't add much but I did fix the narrition thing.