AN: Okay folks here is the ReWritten Version of Chaotic: The Shadow Of Mellnadark this one will be different from the original, main plot will be the same though. Without further ado let being the story.

Disclaimer: I do not own Chaotic or any of the it's characters. Nor do I own any of the characters you will see here.

Chaotic: The Shadows Of Mellnadark

Chapter 1: A New player, And New Creatures.

A young man named Tom Majors was sitting with his friends in an interdimensional world known as Chaotic. Where players of the world's best trading card game can transform into their own creatures and battle in reality. To the real world, it's just a regular card game where people can upload their cards and battle with them online. However, when a player receives a code through the Chaotic online mail system, they think that when they enter it in their Chaotic Scanner they will get an Ultra-Rare card that no one else has, but really, it takes their game to a whole new level of fun.

Tom and his friends Payton, Kaz, Sarah were watching a Chaotic match of that was indeed interesting. It was Sam Shaddy a top notch underworld player vs. a player called Chaotic Master. Sam was Takinom an Underworlder and she/he was fighting against well nothing, Sam looked around and thought 'where is he? I have looked all over this place for five minutes and no sign of him' Sam got his answer when she/he got blasted by a beam of darkness.

"Found you!" Sam said in Takinom's voice

Sam then blasted the attacker but didn't hear anything to confirm it got hit. He looked around when "Stone Toxin!" Sam heard a voice say and then Takinom's wings were hit by some kind of ooze which turned them to stone

"What? No!" Sam said as he plumed to the ground getting coded, it then showed Sam back at the drome and his opponent he had blue eyes, brown hair, a heavy blue jacket, grey shirt, blue jeans and black shoes, he looked to be 15 years old.

"Thanks for the match Sam I had a blast" said the male

"I would like to know where you got that creature" Sam said with no emotion in his voice

"Sorry can't tell you it is a secret" Chaotic Master said as he went back to the port court

"I can't believe Sam lost to a beginner like him" Kaz said surprised

The group then saw Chaotic Master walking up to them but he got stopped by Clay one of the most slimiest Chaotic players you could meet

"Excuse me Chaotic Master but I would like have a trade for that creature of yours" Clay asked

"No" Chaotic Master refused and started walking away

"No? I can give you any of my Scans you want" Clay offered

"No and the answer will still be no matter what you have to offer" Chaotic Master then walked away leaving a stunned Clay. He then resumed walking to Tom and his friends and introduced himself to them.

"Hello Major Tom my name is Chandler Ritter, aka Chaotic Master I have been looking for good opponents for Chaotic matches and I saw that match you had the other day so I would like to have a Chaotic battle with you in a week what do you say?" Chandler asked

"Sure thing." Said Tom as he checked is Scanner that scheduled all their matches. "Ok we are all set."

"Great see you in a week" Chandler said as he walked away

After he was gone, Sarah, Kaz and Peyton looked at Tom with a serious looks.

"Hey, what's the matter?" Tom asked.

"Tom you are going to need to bring your triple A game to with this time" Kaz replied.

"Kaz is right, you are going to need to take out all the stops to beat him" Sarah said.

"Is he that good?" Tom asked with a concerned look.

"GOOD?" They all shouted.

"He beat four of the seven codemasters!" Yelled Sarah

"And I've heard he's got creatures that no one else has!" Kaz shouted

"Yeah! He's got this blue dude that can disappear in the light" Said Peyton. He then concealed himself with his arms. "He also got this old dude that can fly! And this guy that's super strong! This other gu-."

"Peyton, calm down." Tom cut him off. "He can't be that good."

"Did you even listen to the fact that he beat four of the seven codemasters? Sarah Snapped.

Tom then showed some nervous signs in his eyes. "Yikes. That is good."

"Tom you got to have a crazy strategy if you even want a fifteen percent chance of beating him!" Said Peyton.

Do you guys really think we should be talking about strategy when Krystella and Klay are watching us?" Tom said as he turned his head towards another table in the port court. The group noticed they turned their heads quickly towards each other. They obviously were listening in on their conversation.

"Why don't we talk about this later guys." Tom said as he left the table and started walking off.

"Tom! Where are you going?" Kaz asked.

"I'm porting to Perim!" Tom replied. "I promised Maxxor I'd test this new Mugic for him in battle."

"Tom wait!" Kaz called as he ran up to him. "He is no laughing matter, he's one of the toughest Chaotic players ever!"

"So am I Kaz, don't worry I'll put up a decent fight against him." Tom replied as he stepped on one of the transport circles in the Transport Center in Chaotic, a part of Chaotic that can transport you to the world of Perim, a place that has the lives of the creatures of Chaotic. Players are allowed to transport there and scan any Creature, Battlegear, Mugic, or Location. Tom then pushed a button on his scanner and transported to Kiru City: The capital of the Overworld.

However one night a fire ball descended from the heavens and came down on Perim it also split off into five parts and landed in different locations.

One week later, it was time for the match between Major Tom and Chaotic Master.

"So Thomas?" Peyton asked in a mocking tone. "You ready to take on Chaotic Master?

"Don't worry guys! I've worked out my entire strategy and a backup plan, so there is no need to worry!" Tom replied as he made his way into the Imthor drone. Tom locked his scanner in place as he watched Chandler enter.

"Hello Tom, ready to get a major defeat?" Chandler asked.

"Don't count on it." Tom shot back as they built their armies. When they finished, Tom then saw the creatures that Chandler had. Without a doubt he never saw them before. Tom also noticed that Chandler had no Mugic on his board.

"Why didn't you put any Mugic on?" Tom asked.

Chandler shrugs and says "I work best without it"

"CHAOTIC MASTER, YOU WILL BE THE ATTACKER. ACTIVATE YOUR LOCATION RANDOMIZER" Instructed the Chaotic voice. AN: I don't really don't know who that voice is. Who knows maybe it's the codemaster but I don't know, so I'm calling him the chaotic voice. Since his voice is big, robotic, and booming he will be in all caps

Chandler then spun his Randomizer. "THE NEXT LOCATION: LIGHT'S HAVEN. CHOOSE YOUR ATTACKING CREATURE AND TARGET CREATURE"

"Xanker attacks Maxxor!" Chandler declared.

Tom and Chandler then touched their cards on the screen, and became creatures.

"You'd best be prepared Chandler. I've been working on my strategy all week." Said Tom in a perfect voice of Maxxor

"Sure, but Xanker knows Light's Haven like the back of his hands!" Chandler shot back in a deeper voice that is similar to his.

Tom, Kaz, Sarah, Payton were surprised on how much Xanker looked like Chandler

Xanker had pale skin, chest nut brown colored hair, he was wearing a strange light blue armor and had an odd symbol on his chest

Chandler exclaims "Let's get Chaotic"

A second later, Maxxor found himself in Light's Haven. It was a very strange place compared to Perim. The location was a castle and tower like structure and the only color was white.

Almost 10 seconds after looking at the scenery, Tom was then hit by a blast of energy blue colored energy.

"Finding you was easy, I just looked through the mirror." Chandler said.

Tom showed no hesitation as he fired a huge Flame Orb right at Chandler. However to Tom's dismay, Chandler had sliced it in half using a strange yellow sword and launched an energy attack right at Tom, knocking 20 energy off him. Tom tried firing Lavalanches in Chandler's path but Xanker had good reflexes as he dogged each and every one of them responding with an energy attack every time.

Back in the Port Court, Kaz, Sarah, and Peyton were watching the match in horror.

"Major T's in major trouble!" Peyton yelled.

"That Xanker creature is stealthier than I expected." Kaz said.

"At this rate, Tom will lose his Maxxor without even landing a hit on Chandler!" Sarah stated.

Tom knew he had to do something before all his energy was depleted. Tom then decided to use his Mugic.

"Song of Resurgence!" Tom yelled as the Mugic started playing.

Chandler responded immediately. He took out a mirror and said "Twilight Mirror" in a flash the Mugic went into the mirror and he then said "Dark Reflection" the mirror rose up and in a Mugic like fashion went over to Tom and hit him with a black blast coding Tom's Maxxor, thus ending the match.

Tom, Kaz, Sarah and Payton were shocked. Tom asks "H-how did you stop my Mugic from healing me and code me?"

Chandler smirked and explained. "I just used the Mirror of Twilight, a powerful mirror that can give you a good or bad reflection, when I used it on your Mugic it was absorbed into the mirror and it's Dark reflection was released back at you causing you to lose 30 energy rather gain 30 energy got that".

"WHAT?" Tom and his friends all yelled.

"I didn't even know that something like even existed!" Kaz panicked.

'What's he going to do now?' Sarah thought.

"You better get ready for more" Chandler said. "Because that was just one thing in my bag of tricks, so I predict this match will be over in no time." Tom had no idea what to do, he was in a bad situation. He was trapped.

AN: Oh a cliffhanger this should be interesting like last time also if you have any creature ideas PM me and it might be accepted, any Storyteller signing off

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