The beginning is a drag, but it gets interesting later on. Give me some twisted ideas if you would like, who knows they may be used later on in the story...
What is the killers conspiracy, why hasn't he been caught? The answer will come in due time.
Prologue
Nara walked in and sat on the seat opposite Daman in the living room of the old mansion.
Nara: Hello sir, you know why you're here.
Daman: For the evidence, which I have right here. (Daman held up a tattered book with all the pages written in latin) And people say latin is a dead language. (he laughed)
Nara: I don't want to take up tour time, I just want to know who the killer is.
Daman starts to read near the end of the book.
Chris hit Mad Man in the side of the face with his remaining energy and held the gun to his own head with his remaining finger.
Chris: I can't deal with this torture any longer!
Mad Man: Foolish Chris, killing yourselfwhen you could kill me.
Chris: You can't die, and this torture will just continue unless I kill myself! I know your plans now! I know why I'm here!
Nara: So the killer is Mad Man?
Daman: He just calls himself that.
Nara: What plan was Chris screaming about?
Daman: Let me start from the beginning.
Chris was running down the street in fear, his daughter went missing earlier in the day.
Daman: What's going on?
Chris: Pamilea, have you seen Pamilea?
Daman: Last I saw she was playing near the old mansion.
Chris ran to the mansion screaming her name and heard her screaming in the second story, then the screaming stopped. Suddenly, Pamilea flew out of the second story window and hit the ground in front of him. Her head was cracked open and her brains were splattered across the ground, her eye was hanging out of its socket, one of her arms was just bone, one of her legs were completely gone. She tried to speak but no sound came out for her vocal cords were ripped out of her throat. Chris ran up to her to comfort her last few seconds, her eyes hazed over, and Chris broke into tears. Someone was looking in the upstairs window, the person grabbed a bat and jumped out of the window. The last thing Chris saw was glowing eyes, then everything faded to black...