It's me, the old Luci, I changed my pen name, because I didn't liked my old one. Don't ask me why I put that name and what the "t" means. It's a long story.
The thing is: I'm starting a new story, even though I have another one and is not even finished! But I won't post more chapters for "A hidden place" until I get at least... 25 reviews. That's not so much to ask, right? Or 20, I don't know, it's just that I got 1, only ONE review for my last chapter and I'm very decepointed.
Anyways, here's the plot: Sakura and Syaoran ended highschool and moved to California, so they are studying there. The rest of the gang are in their own bussiness, and they will be appearing only in a few moments. But I can't tell anything else, I want you to discover this by yourselves. There's gonna be a bit of magic, nothing hard to understand. Here's my first chapter!
WAITING FOR AN ANGEL (chapter1)
Sakura placed a blue tank top in her closet, closed it and let go a deep sigh. She felt exhausted, but glad, because she was done with all the moving and she could start college at the next day without problems. There was a knock on her door.
"Come in" said the auburn haired girl. A young boy with chestnut hair and deep amber eyes entered the room. She smiled when she saw him.
"Are you done with it?" asked Syaoran. She nodded happily. "So did I. We can go to eat or something. What do you think?" he asked again, going to where she was.
"I don't know. I'm a bit tired, and I wanna call Tomoyo to see how she is and to see how Kero is doing" she said, picking up the phone. Syaoran went there and hugged from behind by her waist and placed his chin on her shoulder.
"Hello" said a voice inside the phone.
"Tomoyo? It's me" said Sakura
"Oh my gosh! Sakura, how are you?" said Tomoyo, very excited on the other side of the line. Eriol raised his head from the book he was reading.
"I'm fine, we got here yesterday and everything's going perfectly. How about you?"
"I'm fine too. I already started my classes, and so has Eriol. By the way, is Syaoran there?" asked Tomoyo. Eriol was next to her and was asking her to give him the phone.
"Yes, I'll pass him to you now. Syaoran, honey" said Sakura, and he looked at her. "Tomoyo wants to talk to you"
"Me?" whispered the boy. She nodded. He shrugged and took the phone.
"Hello?"
"Hello, my cute little descendant, how are you doing!!!!!"
"Stop it, you four eyed freak!!!" yelled Syaoran at the phone. Tomoyo laughed, because she heard what Syaoran was saying. Eriol laughed as well.
"Why such temper, cute descendant, you might get a heart attack or something" said Eriol, holding back the laugh, only imagining the face Syaoran must have putting in that moment.
"Why you....?!!!" Syaoran was abruptly cutted by someone. "Sorry for that Eriol, you gotta stop doing that to poor Syaoran" said Sakura. Syaoran was trying to get the phone, and on the background you could hear something like: "I'm gonna kill you if I see you and you call me that again, you hear me!!!! I'm gonna track you down until I find you!!!!"
"So, how's my little cherry blossom? Let me tell you Cerberous is having a great time with Yukito, you know?" (I don't know how you spell Kero's real name. Can anybody tell me? Pleeeeaaaseeee)
"Really? Thank God. I didn't wanted to leave him there, it's just that I would have to deal with his fights with Syaoran all day and..."
"Yeah, that would be bad. Well, Sakura, good luck on UCLA" said Eriol.
"Thanks, good luck to both of you" said Sakura, with a smile.
"One more thing"
"What?" asked Sakura, surprised.
"Can you make Syaoran to listen to one thing?"
"I'll try" said Sakura. She walked to the bed, Syaoran was sitted there and he looked defeated. "Here" said Sakura. He looked at it, sighed and took it.
"What do you want, Eriol?"
"Only to tell you one thing: respect your elders. See you later, cute little descendant!!!"
"GRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!" Syaoran stared at the phone, and took his jacket. "I'm taking a plane to Japan right now, I wanna kill him!!"
Sakura just laughed, with that pure smile that made Syaoran melt. He relaxed a bit. "Sorry. I overreacted" said, and took a few steps, so he was in front of her.
"If you get mad, that encourages him. That's the point of it. You gotta calm down." she said, playing with his hair. He looked at her emerald orbs. She was as beautiful as ever, and even more. She had grew up and now was a beautiful young woman. Her body was perfect, her face was pure and was filled with happiness. Every guy that saw her melt and couldn't stop looking at her until she was out of sight.
"It drives me mad" he said, answering to her, but also to his thoughts. She drove him crazy, with the way she moved, with the way God had wanted her body to be like. He could barely keep his instincts from playing bad tricks in him, but it wasn't just that. Her smile, her eyes, the sound of her laugh, since they were 10 years old, he loved all that and more about her.
Sakura started to giggle. He came back from his thoughts
"What's wrong?" he asked.
"You were just stared at..." started Sakura, but got lost into his eyes, that were looking at her, and they were shining. She smiled, because she knew that when they were shining it was because he was thinking about her. She couldn't believe that someone like him could put his eyes in her. He was a great guy, was kind, and in the past years he was also a bit cheerful. Not as much as her, of course, but he smiled a lot more. He was great at sports and in school as well, so he was very popular at highschool. When he grew up, he became one of the hottest guys at their school, and he was; he had an awesome body, and all the girls were drooling over him. But he chose her. She was still surprised and sometimes she wondered how lucky she was to have someone who loved her so much.
Syaoran placed his arms around her waist and drew her closer to him.
"Have I ever told you how lucky I feel to have someone like you in my life?" she said, speaking her mind.
"No" he said. "Have I?"
"Yes" she said, placing her hands around his neck. "But it would be good to hear it again" she said, smiling. He gave her one of his special smiles (I love them!!! They are so kawaiii!!... Oh my God, I'm becoming Tomoyo!!! This can't be happening!!!)
"Well, I'll tell you" he said, hugging her completely. "I think you are the most beautiful girl in the entire world. You are beautiful" he whispered in her ear and kissed her neck. "You are smart... kind... sexy" he said all this while he kissed her neck and his way to her lips. She giggled at his last word. He heard it and smiled. "And..." he said and faced her. "I don't know what I would do without you"
Sakura smiled. She didn't knew either.
"I think I would rather to die than to stay by myself" her smile fainted at the thought of it.
"You can't do that" she said, seriously. "We have eachother now, and that's what matters. And if anything happens to any of us" she said, while caressing his cheek. "We'll move on. Promise me that, ok?" she said.
"Ok. I will" he said. "But if I do, I don't think I can survive a long time"
"I'm gonna be around if anything goes wrong. And I know you'll be around too..." she said smiling.
"Because I love you" he ended her sentence. They smiled. They were used to finish each other's sentences and such. He drew his face closer to her and closed his eyes. She closed them too. Their lips met in a sweet kiss. Syaoran placed even closer to her as he deepened the kiss. Their tongues met and the kiss went on and on, until they needed the air so they could breath.
"I love you too" she said, when he broke the kiss. He smiled again.
"Wanna eat something?" he asked.
"I'd love to" she smiled, and they left the house.
(Three weeks later)
"Sakura, why is it so hard for you to understand this?"
"You don't know this, but in highschool Maths wasn't my best subject" said Sakura. Anna took her head into her hands.
"Then why did you took Agronomy? You knew this had Maths on it" she said, taking a book and placing it in her lap. (Agronomy IS a career, I don't know if exists in the US or other countries, but it does here. For those who may not know, it's a career for those who wants to take care of the fields and stuff)
"Well, my boyfriend is here and he helps me, but I forgot to study this last night and he has classes now" said Sakura, and she got desperate. "I need your help!"
"I'll explain you with apples and oranges" said Danielle.
The girls were sitted in the big yard of their faculty. Anna, with her legs crossed, let go a big sigh.
"Prepare yourself girls, the members of the Official Bitches Club are here" said. Sakura, Danielle and the other girl with them turned their heads to that direction.
A group of five girls was walking towards the building. Looked like two of them were leading the way. One of them turned her head and saw Sakura and her friends. She said something to the other girl and she nodded. They started to walk towards them.
"Remember girls, don't let them beat you" said Sakura. She was not the kind of girl that didn't like people, but this five girls had went far from it and Sakura really hated them. The first days of classes they had been really bad at her. She didn't knew why, but she found out soon. She was becoming really popular between the students and had made friends: Danielle, Madison and Fran were her best friends there, but not for that she forgot Tomoyo and the others. The thing is that this five girls were mad at her: one, because she was popular with the boys and such, and they weren't; and two, because in Faculty of Medicine was the rumour that a very hot guy had entered that year. Yes, none other than Syaoran Li. When the girls found out that she was his girlfriend, their anger grew up to levels never imagined. But her friends weren't jealous. They had their own boyfriends.
"So, the new girls are here. I can't believe UCLA went so low accepting you" said Natalie, a blond girl with blue eyes. She was one of the leaders of the group.
"I can't even believe you passed highschool" said Liz, another leader. She had straight black hair, that fell to her waist and dark red eyes.
"If you hate us so much, why are you even here?" said Danielle. She had shoulder lenght black hair and dark eyes.
"We just came around to make your lives a living hell, but we don't wanna waste a lot of time on it, right, Nat?" said Liz.
"Of course. I can't believe Syaoran went so low by dating someone like you" said Natalie looking at Sakura up and down. Sakura went mad and was gonna yell insults at her but...
"It's Li for you" said a deep male voice.
The five girls turned around and they met the super hot Syaoran Li, giving them his famous death glares. He had been practicing for when he could see Eriol again, so they were even worst than before.
The girls started to get scared, but Natalie was decided to get into Syaoran's heart (and pocket), so she took a deep breath and approached him.
"You don't mind if I call you Syaoran, right, sweety?" she said, placing her hand in his neck, but he took it gently and let her go.
"Only my friends can call me Syaoran, and only my girlfriend can call me "sweety". Who do you think you are?" he said. Natalie looked at him horrified. He went to where Sakura was and greeted her friends.
"Danielle, Madison, Fran, how are you?" he said, smiling at them, while hugging Sakura from her shoulders.
"We would be better if this bitches would leave, but besides that, we are ok, Syaoran, thanks for asking" said Madison. Syaoran just smiled. Natalie got even more mad when he saw that Syaoran wasn't telling anything to Madison for calling him Syaoran.
"Let's go, girls" she said, and they left.
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Great! I'm done with chapter one. What do you think? Tell me your opinions. One thing, this is not the usual fic of "she wants him and she will do anything, so she makes something happen, there's a misunderstood and they break up" thing. There's a lot more in. I wasn't even planning to put someone to fight for Syaoran, but I was writing and it came up. So, send me your reviews and everything, I'll be waiting, and I won't post another chapter if I don't get reviews!!!!
The thing is: I'm starting a new story, even though I have another one and is not even finished! But I won't post more chapters for "A hidden place" until I get at least... 25 reviews. That's not so much to ask, right? Or 20, I don't know, it's just that I got 1, only ONE review for my last chapter and I'm very decepointed.
Anyways, here's the plot: Sakura and Syaoran ended highschool and moved to California, so they are studying there. The rest of the gang are in their own bussiness, and they will be appearing only in a few moments. But I can't tell anything else, I want you to discover this by yourselves. There's gonna be a bit of magic, nothing hard to understand. Here's my first chapter!
WAITING FOR AN ANGEL (chapter1)
Sakura placed a blue tank top in her closet, closed it and let go a deep sigh. She felt exhausted, but glad, because she was done with all the moving and she could start college at the next day without problems. There was a knock on her door.
"Come in" said the auburn haired girl. A young boy with chestnut hair and deep amber eyes entered the room. She smiled when she saw him.
"Are you done with it?" asked Syaoran. She nodded happily. "So did I. We can go to eat or something. What do you think?" he asked again, going to where she was.
"I don't know. I'm a bit tired, and I wanna call Tomoyo to see how she is and to see how Kero is doing" she said, picking up the phone. Syaoran went there and hugged from behind by her waist and placed his chin on her shoulder.
"Hello" said a voice inside the phone.
"Tomoyo? It's me" said Sakura
"Oh my gosh! Sakura, how are you?" said Tomoyo, very excited on the other side of the line. Eriol raised his head from the book he was reading.
"I'm fine, we got here yesterday and everything's going perfectly. How about you?"
"I'm fine too. I already started my classes, and so has Eriol. By the way, is Syaoran there?" asked Tomoyo. Eriol was next to her and was asking her to give him the phone.
"Yes, I'll pass him to you now. Syaoran, honey" said Sakura, and he looked at her. "Tomoyo wants to talk to you"
"Me?" whispered the boy. She nodded. He shrugged and took the phone.
"Hello?"
"Hello, my cute little descendant, how are you doing!!!!!"
"Stop it, you four eyed freak!!!" yelled Syaoran at the phone. Tomoyo laughed, because she heard what Syaoran was saying. Eriol laughed as well.
"Why such temper, cute descendant, you might get a heart attack or something" said Eriol, holding back the laugh, only imagining the face Syaoran must have putting in that moment.
"Why you....?!!!" Syaoran was abruptly cutted by someone. "Sorry for that Eriol, you gotta stop doing that to poor Syaoran" said Sakura. Syaoran was trying to get the phone, and on the background you could hear something like: "I'm gonna kill you if I see you and you call me that again, you hear me!!!! I'm gonna track you down until I find you!!!!"
"So, how's my little cherry blossom? Let me tell you Cerberous is having a great time with Yukito, you know?" (I don't know how you spell Kero's real name. Can anybody tell me? Pleeeeaaaseeee)
"Really? Thank God. I didn't wanted to leave him there, it's just that I would have to deal with his fights with Syaoran all day and..."
"Yeah, that would be bad. Well, Sakura, good luck on UCLA" said Eriol.
"Thanks, good luck to both of you" said Sakura, with a smile.
"One more thing"
"What?" asked Sakura, surprised.
"Can you make Syaoran to listen to one thing?"
"I'll try" said Sakura. She walked to the bed, Syaoran was sitted there and he looked defeated. "Here" said Sakura. He looked at it, sighed and took it.
"What do you want, Eriol?"
"Only to tell you one thing: respect your elders. See you later, cute little descendant!!!"
"GRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!" Syaoran stared at the phone, and took his jacket. "I'm taking a plane to Japan right now, I wanna kill him!!"
Sakura just laughed, with that pure smile that made Syaoran melt. He relaxed a bit. "Sorry. I overreacted" said, and took a few steps, so he was in front of her.
"If you get mad, that encourages him. That's the point of it. You gotta calm down." she said, playing with his hair. He looked at her emerald orbs. She was as beautiful as ever, and even more. She had grew up and now was a beautiful young woman. Her body was perfect, her face was pure and was filled with happiness. Every guy that saw her melt and couldn't stop looking at her until she was out of sight.
"It drives me mad" he said, answering to her, but also to his thoughts. She drove him crazy, with the way she moved, with the way God had wanted her body to be like. He could barely keep his instincts from playing bad tricks in him, but it wasn't just that. Her smile, her eyes, the sound of her laugh, since they were 10 years old, he loved all that and more about her.
Sakura started to giggle. He came back from his thoughts
"What's wrong?" he asked.
"You were just stared at..." started Sakura, but got lost into his eyes, that were looking at her, and they were shining. She smiled, because she knew that when they were shining it was because he was thinking about her. She couldn't believe that someone like him could put his eyes in her. He was a great guy, was kind, and in the past years he was also a bit cheerful. Not as much as her, of course, but he smiled a lot more. He was great at sports and in school as well, so he was very popular at highschool. When he grew up, he became one of the hottest guys at their school, and he was; he had an awesome body, and all the girls were drooling over him. But he chose her. She was still surprised and sometimes she wondered how lucky she was to have someone who loved her so much.
Syaoran placed his arms around her waist and drew her closer to him.
"Have I ever told you how lucky I feel to have someone like you in my life?" she said, speaking her mind.
"No" he said. "Have I?"
"Yes" she said, placing her hands around his neck. "But it would be good to hear it again" she said, smiling. He gave her one of his special smiles (I love them!!! They are so kawaiii!!... Oh my God, I'm becoming Tomoyo!!! This can't be happening!!!)
"Well, I'll tell you" he said, hugging her completely. "I think you are the most beautiful girl in the entire world. You are beautiful" he whispered in her ear and kissed her neck. "You are smart... kind... sexy" he said all this while he kissed her neck and his way to her lips. She giggled at his last word. He heard it and smiled. "And..." he said and faced her. "I don't know what I would do without you"
Sakura smiled. She didn't knew either.
"I think I would rather to die than to stay by myself" her smile fainted at the thought of it.
"You can't do that" she said, seriously. "We have eachother now, and that's what matters. And if anything happens to any of us" she said, while caressing his cheek. "We'll move on. Promise me that, ok?" she said.
"Ok. I will" he said. "But if I do, I don't think I can survive a long time"
"I'm gonna be around if anything goes wrong. And I know you'll be around too..." she said smiling.
"Because I love you" he ended her sentence. They smiled. They were used to finish each other's sentences and such. He drew his face closer to her and closed his eyes. She closed them too. Their lips met in a sweet kiss. Syaoran placed even closer to her as he deepened the kiss. Their tongues met and the kiss went on and on, until they needed the air so they could breath.
"I love you too" she said, when he broke the kiss. He smiled again.
"Wanna eat something?" he asked.
"I'd love to" she smiled, and they left the house.
(Three weeks later)
"Sakura, why is it so hard for you to understand this?"
"You don't know this, but in highschool Maths wasn't my best subject" said Sakura. Anna took her head into her hands.
"Then why did you took Agronomy? You knew this had Maths on it" she said, taking a book and placing it in her lap. (Agronomy IS a career, I don't know if exists in the US or other countries, but it does here. For those who may not know, it's a career for those who wants to take care of the fields and stuff)
"Well, my boyfriend is here and he helps me, but I forgot to study this last night and he has classes now" said Sakura, and she got desperate. "I need your help!"
"I'll explain you with apples and oranges" said Danielle.
The girls were sitted in the big yard of their faculty. Anna, with her legs crossed, let go a big sigh.
"Prepare yourself girls, the members of the Official Bitches Club are here" said. Sakura, Danielle and the other girl with them turned their heads to that direction.
A group of five girls was walking towards the building. Looked like two of them were leading the way. One of them turned her head and saw Sakura and her friends. She said something to the other girl and she nodded. They started to walk towards them.
"Remember girls, don't let them beat you" said Sakura. She was not the kind of girl that didn't like people, but this five girls had went far from it and Sakura really hated them. The first days of classes they had been really bad at her. She didn't knew why, but she found out soon. She was becoming really popular between the students and had made friends: Danielle, Madison and Fran were her best friends there, but not for that she forgot Tomoyo and the others. The thing is that this five girls were mad at her: one, because she was popular with the boys and such, and they weren't; and two, because in Faculty of Medicine was the rumour that a very hot guy had entered that year. Yes, none other than Syaoran Li. When the girls found out that she was his girlfriend, their anger grew up to levels never imagined. But her friends weren't jealous. They had their own boyfriends.
"So, the new girls are here. I can't believe UCLA went so low accepting you" said Natalie, a blond girl with blue eyes. She was one of the leaders of the group.
"I can't even believe you passed highschool" said Liz, another leader. She had straight black hair, that fell to her waist and dark red eyes.
"If you hate us so much, why are you even here?" said Danielle. She had shoulder lenght black hair and dark eyes.
"We just came around to make your lives a living hell, but we don't wanna waste a lot of time on it, right, Nat?" said Liz.
"Of course. I can't believe Syaoran went so low by dating someone like you" said Natalie looking at Sakura up and down. Sakura went mad and was gonna yell insults at her but...
"It's Li for you" said a deep male voice.
The five girls turned around and they met the super hot Syaoran Li, giving them his famous death glares. He had been practicing for when he could see Eriol again, so they were even worst than before.
The girls started to get scared, but Natalie was decided to get into Syaoran's heart (and pocket), so she took a deep breath and approached him.
"You don't mind if I call you Syaoran, right, sweety?" she said, placing her hand in his neck, but he took it gently and let her go.
"Only my friends can call me Syaoran, and only my girlfriend can call me "sweety". Who do you think you are?" he said. Natalie looked at him horrified. He went to where Sakura was and greeted her friends.
"Danielle, Madison, Fran, how are you?" he said, smiling at them, while hugging Sakura from her shoulders.
"We would be better if this bitches would leave, but besides that, we are ok, Syaoran, thanks for asking" said Madison. Syaoran just smiled. Natalie got even more mad when he saw that Syaoran wasn't telling anything to Madison for calling him Syaoran.
"Let's go, girls" she said, and they left.
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Great! I'm done with chapter one. What do you think? Tell me your opinions. One thing, this is not the usual fic of "she wants him and she will do anything, so she makes something happen, there's a misunderstood and they break up" thing. There's a lot more in. I wasn't even planning to put someone to fight for Syaoran, but I was writing and it came up. So, send me your reviews and everything, I'll be waiting, and I won't post another chapter if I don't get reviews!!!!