Hello faithful readers. I'm interrupting the flow of this story to let you know of a few new developments.
1. I had a dream last night, I was rereading Breaking dawn and some things in it sparked my imagination and I had this rather stunning dream. In the morning I got up and made a short video to it. From there my imagination took it and ran off. In short the direction of this story is better! I found the depth I was looking for (i was worried that it centered far too much on the angst romance of Jacob/Ness). I've changed the summary to the story and the first two chapters to fit my ideas for the third chapter so Go back and reread those. Also to get an visual of some of the plot bunnies this dream inspired you can check out the video at: /watch?vEWmJMvw5fLk