Take My Hand
Take my hand.
We'll return
To a simpler way of life,
When things were good
And you could be happy, too.
I don't understand
How people
Can hate so much.
Learn to let go;
Forget the painful wound.
Take my hand.
Come with me!
We'll go home again,
Where things are good, and right.
Then I can be happy, too.
an: Pleeeaaase, pleaseplease let me know what you think of this! My attempts at writing fanpoetry are limited to the three posted on this site, and while the first got quite a few positive reviews, the second, by comparison, was a flop. :P (Maybe I expect too much from readers? I want to know if it's not likeable, too!) So, yeah. Please tell me if you like it or not, and, if it's not too much to hope for, the reason(s) why!