A Tainted Love Story
By: tomoya-542002
Disclaimer: I do not own D-N-Angel, from which I'm borrowing characters, or Romeo and Juliet, from which my basic story line comes from… I don't own Spiral either (but I love Kousuke, so I added him to the story!).
A/N: This is sort of a modern-day version of Romeo and Juliet (don't worry, they won't speak Old English!) with a D-N-Angel twist. Since this damn ass cite won't keep my symbols i had to go put them all back, and just in case, i also put the meaningsin these ()... no i won't attempt to spell the damn word... and i hate the fact that it wasnice and pretty, centered and everything, in my doc, but it all changed when uploaded! sigh, guess i shouldexplain who is who, or who is acting out what part, so it's basically it's 1 is 2 but will still be called and look like 1. I'm confused 0.o; umm, never mind… here it is:
D-N-Angel character to R&J character:
Daisuke is Romeo
Satoshi is Juliet
Risa is Rosaline
Riku is Paris
Takeshi is Mercutio
Dark and Kousuke are Benvolio and Balthazar
Krad is Tybalt and Lord Capulet
Inspector Saehara is The Prince
Emiko is Lady Montague
To-To is The Nurse
Masahiro is Friar
Yep, that's everyone! So, umm, on with the fan-fic, I guess. Oh, the … that appear during the prologue are like flashes, but that's just for the prologue part, 'k? Oh, and just because Satoshi is Juliet does not mean that he is now a girl (he's still a boy, and he's still Satoshi), it means that he's is talking Juliet's place in the story. I'm telling all of you this now so that you don't yell at me later: I agree that Satoshi would make a better Romeo then Daisuke and that Daisuke should be Juliet, but I had to make Satoshi be Juliet or else all the other characters would be screwed up. If Satoshi were Romeo then I would have to make Krad be someone like Benvolio and make Dark be Tybalt and that just doesn't go with the story line, so I had to make Satoshi be Juliet. Now that I've told all of you this, I had better not get any reviews yelling at me because of who is who, 'k? I will be highly pissed off if you lovely readers send in reviews asking why I made Satoshi be Juliet because I just got done explaining it to all of you (just a heads up!).
-----------A Tainted Love Story: Chapter One- A Lovers' Quarrel-----------
Two households,
Dark and Krad fly towards
each other through the dark
night sky…
both alike in dignity,
"Krad," Dark shouts
as he closes the
distance between
the two…
In fair Verona where we lay our scene
Krad smirks, causing
Dark to punch him…
From ancient grudge, break new mutiny,
A crowd gathers
below the brawling
enemies, watching in
sick amusement as
the two angels begin
what is sure to be a
fight to the death…
Where civil blood makes civil hands unclean:
The crowd cheers
wildly as Krad
grabs Dark by
the throat…
From forth the fatal loins of these two foes,
Daisuke and
Satoshi fight
through the mob
as they desperately
try to find some
way to stop Dark
and Krad…
A pair of star-crossed lovers take their life:
They stop in the
middle of the crowd
and begin to yell at
the fighting angels,
telling them to stop…
Whose misadventured piteous overthrows,
Dark slams Krad
into a window.
The thick glass shatters
and they fall through
it, continuing their fight
inside the building…
Daisuke and Satoshi rush
inside to stop them…
Doth with their death bury their parent's strife.
The two teens
run up the stairs
to the floor that
Dark and Krad are
on… They enter the
room just as Krad
is throwing an
energy ball at Dark.
The dark haired teen
dodges it and it
hits Satoshi in the chest,
sending him into the
wall…
The fearful passage of their death-marked love,
"Satoshi!" Daisuke
and Krad scream
as they run to the
blue haired teen…
Tears slide down
Daisuke's cheeks as
he kisses Satoshi on
the hand…
And the continuance of their parents' rage,
Krad, also crying,
turns back to Dark
and punches him…
Daisuke shakily
stands up and looks
over at Dark and
Krad, who are
fighting once
again…
Which but their children's end nought could remove,
The red haired
teen walks to
the window
and looks out
at the now
empty streets…
Is now the two hour's traffic of our stage.
"No!" Dark
shouts, rushing
over to Daisuke…
The which if you with patient ears attend,
What here shall miss, our toil shall strive to mend
Prologue to Romeo and Juliet
By: William Shakespeare
# # # # # # # # # # # # # # # #(Flash)
He is a lamb, she is the slaughter,
Daisuke and Risa fell back onto Daisuke soft bed, kissing passionately in the dimly lit room.
she's moving way too fast and all he wanted was to hold her,
Risa moaned, pulling her tight pink shirt over her head and tossing it aside.
nothing that he tells her is really having an effect,
Daisuke whimpered. "Hey, Risa, slow down…" he murmured, "don't you think that's going a bit too far?"
Risa ignored him, taking off his shirt as well. Daisuke shivered, grabbing his girlfriend's hand and stopping her as she started to pull down her skirt. "Oh, come on Dai-chan, I love you," she whispered, pushing his hand away. She began to undo his pants instead. "Let me love you…"
he whispers that he loves her but she's probably only looking for se—,
"Risa, stop," Daisuke pleaded, once again pushing the brunette's hand away.
so much then he can ever give,
(up the stairs)
a life full of lies and meaningful relationships,
(the station where the)
"Oh c'mon Dai…" Risa whispered, running her hand down his chest and into his boxers, causing the boy to gasp.
he keeps his hands pinned down at his sides
(act becomes the art)
he waits for it to end and the aching in his gut to subside
(of growing up)
"I said stop!" Daisuke shouted, pushing Risa off of himself. He pushed a little too hard and she ended up on the floor.
Risa glared up at him, a hurt look in her pretty eyes. "But Dai-chan," she whispered, smiling as she stood back up, "I thought you said you loved me…"
"I do, but I'm not ready for this," Daisuke sighed as he buttoned his pants. He looked up at the brunette pleadingly, "I told you that already…"
"If you really did love me, then you wouldn't argue about having sex with me, you would just do it," Risa remarked, sitting back down next to her boyfriend. She gently took the boy's hand and brought it to her shoulder, placing it onto her bra strap.
Daisuke shivered, pulling away from Risa's touch. "And if you loved me then you wouldn't try to force me to have sex with you," the red haired teen hissed, scooting farther away from his girlfriend.
The brunette shrugged, smiling slightly. "Well then," she said, reaching over the bed and picking up her shirt, "I guess I don't love you." Risa slowly put her shirt back on before standing up and walking over to the door. "Bye Dai-chan," she whispered with a wink, blowing him a kiss as she left his room.
Daisuke sighed in a mixture of exasperation and confusion as he lied back down. "Damn whore," he whispered. He and Risa had been dating for a year now, yet she still couldn't get it through her thick head that he just wasn't ready for sex! 'Just because I'm sixteen doesn't mean I have to sleep with everything that moves!' he thought, rolling over and punching his pillow angrily.
Shaking his head to clear his mind, he turned off his lamp and went to sleep.
(Passing time)
Daisuke sat at the kitchen table, staring moodily into his cereal. 'I'm too depressed to eat…' he thought, pushing the bowl away and laying his head down on the table. He was considering washing the dishes in the sink behind him, or at the very least turning on the dishwasher, when Dark and Kousuke entered the room. Both teens were wearing their school uniforms, but class seemed to be the last thing on their minds; they were avidly discussing their next mission. Since they were the oldest, Emiko trusted only them, or herself, to go steal from the Hikari family.
"But that damn Satoshi kid would recognize us!" Kousuke was saying, his cat-like green eyes flashing angrily behind his yellow tinted emo-glasses as he glared at Dark.
Daisuke sat up. "Hey Dark, Kousuke, what's up?" he asked, smiling. He was glad to see them, Emiko kept the two boys so busy that Daisuke rarely got to talk with them. But none of them really minded; Dark and Kousuke felt honored to be chosen to carry out the Niwa clan's missions, a privilege they had been training for since they three. Daisuke idolized his older brother and cousin, following in their footsteps to become a great thief.
Dark shook his head, ignoring his younger brother as he crossed the room and opened the fridge. "He would only recognize us if he saw us," he insisted, reaching into the fridge and pulling out two Cokes™. Handing one of the drinks to Kousuke, the older teen continued, "It's a costume party, so all we need to do is find really, really good costumes, go in, and swipe the painting."
"Believe it or not, the Hikari kid isn't stupid. Unlike with you, a cheep costume wouldn't fool him; he'd know it was us!" the red-head argued as he sipped from his drink. He winced, looking at the can accusingly. "Dammit, why'd they have to tear down the Starbucks?" he mumbled, setting the Coke down on the counter.
"Hey guys, why don't you let me steal the painting? The younger Hikari's never seen me before," Daisuke piped up, drawing the older teens' attention to him.
"NO!" Dark and Kousuke shouted simultaneously. Kousuke shook his head, running his fingers through his dark red hair. "Hikari would recognize us," he sighed, leaning against the kitchen counter as he turned his attention back to Dark. Unfortunately for him, the purple haired teen was too busy searching the dishwasher for a clean glass to care much.
"But not me!" insisted Daisuke, taking advantage of Dark's distraction. He pushed his chair back from the table a bit so he could face Kousuke.
"No, Daisuke," Kousuke repeated. "You're too young."
"I am not!" the younger teen whined. He gave a cute pout and crossed his arms, not helping his case in the slightest. "You were only twelve when you started stealing for Mom, that's four years younger then I am now!" he argued, glaring at his cousin.
"Did anyone even turn this thing on!" Dark interrupted, picking up yet another dirty glass from the dishwasher. He angrily closed the machine and began raiding the cupboards from some sign of a glass.
"You might have the body of a sixteen-year-old, but you have the mind of a ten-year-old," Kousuke teased, walking over and giving Daisuke a playful smile as he ruffled the smaller boy's hair. "And why don't you just use one of those plastic cups?" the older redhead asked, looking over at Dark.
Dark glanced his cousin and rolled his eyes. "Because I want a glass," he said before returning to his task.
"Come on," Daisuke pleaded, tugging on the sleeve of Kousuke's blue school jacket to get his attention again, "I've been training really hard and I kn—"
"No, Daisuke, end of discussion! Aunt Emiko would kill us if we let you go!" Kousuke stated firmly.
Dark however, was starting to agree with Daisuke. "If we don't tell Mom," he started, abandoning his search and walking over to Daisuke, "then she can't say no…"
"I say no!" yelled Kousuke, but the two brothers ignored him.
"You and Hikari have never seen each other, so there's no way he would know it was you…" Dark continued, amethyst eyes glinting mischievously, "He'll never know it was a Niwa who did it; all you have to do is sneak in and steal it."
"You're willingly going to send your only brother into the battlefields!" Kousuke practically screamed, slamming his palm onto the table. "Even if Satoshi doesn't know who he is, Krad does! Krad's seen him before and knows he's a Niwa, he will not hesitate to kill him!"
"If I get caught, and I won't," Daisuke hissed, glaring at Kousuke. "Besides, I heard Mom say that Krad's going on a business trip or something, so he won't even be there," he added smugly.
Kousuke chose not to vocally reply, instead casually using his middle finger to push his emo-glasses a little bit higher up on his nose. The smaller boy gave a murderous look and kicked his cousin in the shin.
Dark quickly moved in-between the two. "It's settled then, Daisuke will go steal the "Painting of Lost Souls"!" the purple haired teen declared, banging his soda on the table like a gavel. It popped open, spilling soda everywhere. "Oops…" he said, smiling sheepishly and ducking away as the other two boys glared at him threateningly.
"So Dark and Kousuke finally trusted you with a mission?" Takeshi asked, hoping onto the street curb and walking it like a tightrope. School had just ended and he and Daisuke were walking home together as usual; since they lived a few blocks away from each other, it was only natural.
"Yeah, all I have to do now is find some way to get into the party… maybe I can borrow Kousuke's grappling hook," Daisuke said with a shrug.
Takeshi stopped walking and swung his book-bag from his shoulder to look through it. Daisuke also stopped, turning to see what his friend was doing. A few seconds later, Takeshi smiled and pulled out two invitations to the Hikari's costume party from his bag.
"Where did you get those?" Daisuke asked, reaching forward to take the invitations.
"Got them from Risa," Takashi laughed, holding the papers higher up so Daisuke couldn't reach them. "Her sister's engaged to the one and only Satoshi Hikari…" He quickly brought his hand down and took a step backwards as Daisuke jumped up to reach the invitations. "Speaking of Risa," the black-haired teen casually remarked with a smirk, placing the invites behind his back as his friend lunged at them, "she told me that you left her very unsatisfied last night…"
Daisuke flinched, stopping his attempts to get the invitations at the mention of his girlfriend. "She's upset because I won't put out for her," he mumbled uncomfortably, taking a step back.
Takeshi laughed and threw an arm around Daisuke's shoulders, holding out one of the invitations to him. "Dude, you're going to die a virgin if you keep this up. You've shot down almost every girl in our grade! How do you do it?"
"Do what, say no?" the redhead asked, accepting the paper.
"Yeah."
"I just do," Daisuke said, shrugging off Takeshi's arm as they continued to walk. "I'm not ready for an intimate relationship, and I won't be until I find the right… person…"
Takeshi smiled, reaching over and ruffling his friend's spiky red hair. "You know, you're going to have to tell them sooner or later," he commented, referring to Daisuke's family.
"I know," Daisuke sighed, "but not yet, okay? I'm not even completely sure if I am or not…"
-----------------------------------------------------End Chapter 1-----------------------------------------------
Disclaimer: I do not own the song that was in the background (it's Sic Transit Gloria by: Brand New) or Coke ® (or is it ™?), Coke by-products, Starbucks, or any other songs or name-brand items mentioned now or later.
A/N: So I'm sitting here bored as hell cuz my computer's being an ass and won't fully load the Sukisho episodes… Yeah, I know I'm repeating past mistakes by starting to post a fic before it's finished (hell I feel bad for the people who are waiting for Dangerous Liaisons to be taken off of hiatus…), but I'm bored and need feedback on this thing. I've started it two years ago and placed it on hiatus, but Courtney kept telling me it was best on and to finish it, so here I am. I went back and revamped it, so it's a lot different from the original (not really, all I did was try to add more detail… I hope I didn't completely slaughter the fic by doing that.). anyways, please review! I don't care what you have to say because I personally think this is crap, but whatever. God I reread my other stories shivers, it was all I could do to stop myself from taking them off the net! Oh… wow, sorry for the ramblings, I'll stop now …