Protective Brother

by ElsaTheSnowQueen2

Hansel is worried about Gretel. He knows more happened than what she's letting on and he wants to know. But what will happen when she tells him and what happens if Ben happens to overhear them talking? Title may change( need help) maybe incest not sure yet

1. Chapter 1

Plot:

Hansel wants to know why Edward saved Gretel besides "trolls serve witches". And Hansel further questions Gretel about what happened and how she got the marks on her face. Edward answers but it's the not the answer he expects to get. Afterwards he questions Gretel and she answers him after she tells him that Edward has already killed the ones that hurt hear. Ben ends up hearing the conversation between brother and sister. He doesn't want them to know that he heard their conversation.

Characters: Town left: Augsburg

Hansel

Gretel

Edward

Ben

Ben's possible reactions:

Gets sick

Doesn't say anything

tires talking to Gretel and gets punched

tires to talking to Hansel and he gets yelled at and threatened

Edward tells him to be quiet

Gretel actually talks to him when he talks to her

So I have most of this typed out already let me know if you think i should add on because so of my friends really like this so far. And I'll be willing to take more ideas on how Ben reacts to overhearing their conversation.