A new hope
~Hi I'm new to Fanfiction so this is going to be my first story. And I really want to know if my stories are good, so you can review after your done reading my story. And I want your honest opinion on my story, please? TRANSFANLUVER DOESN'T OWN TRANSFORMERS! I wish I did but I don't.
and a special thanks to Nexia Jazilynn Prime for beta-ing my story.
A new hope chapter one
? POV
I was walking back home. It was lightly raining, the sun was setting. If only it wasn't raining the day would have been nicer. My mother is probably done making dinner. My Father is probably on his way home from work. I'm good kid, I do my homework to get good grades and I respect my parents' rules. I've noticed that my parents ignore me a lot but I just carry on with life. I started to walk up the pathway. My father's car was here. I walked into the house.
"Mom I'm home." I said.
I walked upstairs and put my backpack down. Then I noticed the strangest thing, there were boxes in my room and some of my stuff was already in it.
I walked downstairs.
"Mom what's with all the boxes in my room, are we moving again?" I asked my mom.
My mom looked at me and my father was there.
"Yes were moving again. But your dad has a few things to take care of at his old job." my mom told me.
I looked to my dad.
"That's why you're coming with me tomorrow to pack up my stuff." my dad said to me.
"Ok, but I thought the government didn't want kids going to the lab?" I said.
"I got you clearance. Go to bed, we're leaving early tomorrow." my dad said.
His voice had the tone of don't disobey me. I ran upstairs and I put on some jogging pants and a blue t-shirt. I lay down and let sleep overcome me.
I woke up with my father pounding on my bedroom doorway.
"I'm up!" I called to my father
I got out of bed and got my white top on and my jeans. I walked downstairs and I had an apple to munch on and we left. My father said nothing on the whole drive to the lab. I've never been to this lab. We came to Hoover Dam?
"Uh dad... why are we at Hoover Dam?" I asked very confused on why we were here.
He said nothing and parked the car and we got out. My dad didn't look at me and we came to some gates. I read the sign, Sector Seven. And then two people in white lab coats came out. My dad nodded to them. I felt my fear rising, my heart was beating fast. And then they grabbed my arms and I started to struggle, screaming for them to let me.
"Don't struggle amber." my father told me
I kept on struggling.
"Sedate her!" yelled one of the people in the lab coats.
I felt something jab my arm and I started to feel tired and then darkness.
no ones POV
day 3
"Video log, day 3. Project amber has been started and she's still in stage 2. Stage one of the project was just to get her used to being in the tank. It only took 2 days for her to finally adjust. So far for stage two we've gotten her to almost come to death, buts it's tricky for her to die and come back fast enough so she won't die forever. When she does die and come back she will be reborn. It's painful for one to be reborn when there a young adult. After she's reborn we'll take her onto stage three, which would be to alter her DNA. We plan on altering her DNA for her to have abnormal speed and strength and to be immortal. There might be side effects to altering her DNA, so we have to be careful. After were done with altering her DNA we'll zap the tank water she's in with the cubes radiation to see what reaction we will get from that. Hopefully we won't kill Project Amber with the cubes radiation. End of video log, day 3."
day 53
"Video log, day 53. Project Amber has been going extremely well up until yesterday. She had a heart attack and well died, but she came back to life. We had to pull her out of the tank and restrain Project Amber till we were done checking what caused her to have a heart attack. The reason for her heart attack is that her heart has been replaced by what we think is like a heart that NBE-1 has. And her eye color changed to a silver and aqua color. Project Amber is still in a coma like state that were keeping her in. She hasn't aged at all, so we know that the immortality works in her DNA. So far we've zapped the tank with the cubes radiation about 17 times and she has the same radiation from the cube but the signal is weak so we must keep zapping her with the cubes radiation. End of video log, day 53."
day 78
"Video log, day 78. Project Amber has woken up from coma like state, and from the information we got she doesn't have any memories and only knows her name. Project Amber destroyed a wall by blowing it up with a grenade and she got away. She has the cubes power, to create electronics into NBE's. As far as we know Project Amber is a closed case. End of video log, day 78."
End of chapter one of A new hope
