Dragonball AF-New Pupils-Xicor Saga
Before info
I created this one day because I got bored while reading others. I read a bunch of others, all of which were all pretty much the same with a lack of detail, except for one that I found on FanFiction and fell in love with. I made this version off of the same beginning story line, but changed it up. I may add a new character or two in the future just to keep things fresh. I'm hoping to become an author so feel free to post some constructive criticism or comments about your opinions about this. Tell me any suggestions for the next chapter or part and anything I can work on. I'll be starting each part off in bits of at least five, but I will be adding to it regularly. Hope you enjoy this!
Chapter 1-The Conceiving
It has been 25 years since the end of Dragonball GT and Goku, the great saiyan hero from Earth, is traveling the Universe training on each of the new planets he finds.
Goku marched down the streets of an unfamiliar planet, rubbing his stomach after a delicious meal from one of the stalls. The temperature was burning but he didn't mind too much. Eating all that food and walking through the market streets were the most physical actions he did today. He came to the desert planet in hopes of some more training, but soon found that the people were by far weaker than any enemy he had to face in the past and none wished to fight him. He was even more disappointed to find that the gravity wasn't at all as strong as he expected it to be.
The three suns beat down on him from up above in the cloudless sky. Despite the three suns, Goku could tell it was around midday. Goku walked on with his hand behind his head almost as carefree as was over a hundred years ago, with Gohan only a young boy, on earth. Despite the many years that had passed since his departure, he hadn't aged past looking in has maybe mid to late thirties.
He looked down as he felt someone bump into him. It was one of the reptilian natives. They weren't much taller than four feet and had scaly skin that could be completely a shade of yellow, green, or red. They had three claws like fingers and toes and many sharp little teeth. The small being he had bumped into had dark green scales like that of healthy looking grass back on his home planet. It was covered in red freckly spots that started at its hairless head and ended at the end of its stubby green tail.
"Sorry about that," Goku apologized. The little creature narrowed its orange eyes at him but soon let it go and continued its conversation with its similar companion, walking down the street with many other natives like it. Goku didn't usually listen in on other peoples conversations, but he couldn't help but over hear.
"Did you here? The scouts have returned with news about that strange planet that has appeared near ours. They say it's supposed to have gravity near 1000 times our own!" one of them exclaimed.
"What! No way! Where is it? I mean, can you see it from here?" questioned the other.
"Yah. You can see it from the top of the Lone Mountain." Goku prospered at the thought of a real place to train. He had gotten far stronger than he was when he departed from home to go on his journey and train. He now lacked a real challenge that was great enough to help him train successfully.
Goku wasted no time making his way towards the tall brown mountain on the horizon to the east. It was no trouble figuring out that this single mountain would be his destination with it being the only one that reached higher than a steep hill on this desert planet. He touched two fingers to his head and used Instant-Transition to travel in only seconds. He peeked out searchingly into the sky to find the civilians information prove true. Up in space was a lush green planet that was enveloped halfway in shadow as one side experienced night time. In seconds Goku had Instant-transitioned himself to the foreign location.
Goku noticed that the land was dotted with bright green grass and trees baring large fruit. He hadn't a chance to enjoy the scenery as he soon crashed down to the ground and felt tons weighing him down. Right the gravity, Goku remembered. After a few moments of struggle he felt the weight lift somewhat as his body grew used to the pressure.
He practiced a few punches and kicks until he noticed a pretty young woman in the distance watching him intently. He looked back with a smile, not noticing the way she watched like an animal might watch prey. Her eyes were sharp and blue while her hair was white like snow peaked mountains. She came towards him and he greeted her kindly. The kind warrior is so manipulatable. His kindness blinds him from deceit, thought the woman. "Hello Goku."
He gave a shocked expression. "How do know my name?" he asked curiously.
"I know a lot about you Goku. My name is Princess Lila. You are welcome to stay with me at my castle during your stay. Perhaps you could join me for supper?" She offered. Goku, unable to reject a free meal or the rumbling in his stomach, he accepted happily. She led him to her castle were she gifted him with new clothes and a place to bath.
After a quick bath and a change he met her in the dining hall where she let him devour a feast fit for kings the size of giants. When he felt unable to continue eating she led him to his room. "This was very nice of you, though I'm not sure if I could repay your kindness." Kindness. She corrected that word with deceit in her head.
"There is a way you can." There she would shock him with her request. "You see Goku I am a goddess with a wish to create the ultimate fighter." He just stared at her confused. "The mixture of a goddess and the saiyan blood of the greatest fighter in the universe would suffice to create an unbeatable being." Understanding awoke in him. "One that would be unstoppable."
He had turned away from her and had started rubbing the back of his neck. "Oh, well, um, it was nice of you to offer but I have a wonderful wife at home with my family," he stated. He felt awkward. You would too if a near complete stranger asked you this out of the blue.
He heard an aggravated screech and turned in time to feel the impact of something hard collide with his head before blacking out. As he lay unconscious on the ground she gave a smirk. "Finally something will go my way."(For you pervs and curious people, stuff happens. Just resort to some other version of Dragonball AF to find out. I know of only two versions.)
Goku later awakens alone on the cold floor and remembers the violent conflict between him and the princess. He then leaves the castle and the planet, leaving behind the dark deed he did not know he committed. When he was long gone from the wretched land the paradise for Goku vanished without a trace but the memories clinging to the Natives of a foreign planet and those that will haunt Goku in a couple years to come.
