Forward:
Disclaimer:
I own none of the original Twilight Saga characters… and can only take the blame for my original characters, and the mess I'll probably make of the Twilight world (not on purpose though!)
I'd like to take this chance to thank Stephenie Meyer for allowing her fans to play in her world.
I'll try and not knock all the sand out of the sandbox.
This is not my usual genre for fanfic writing, and its my first venture in the Twilight Saga Realm… so please have some patience with me, as I only had two of the books under my belt so far when I started this story. I have however since then finished the series, and wow, what a ride!
I apologize beforehand if I don't get some of the cannon facts exactly right, and for having to tweak things a bit and make some stuff up to fit the story I have in mind, so I'm pitching that this story happens in a Alternate Twilight Universe that differs slightly from Ms. Meyer's vision.
Any reviews and advice into the TS Universe will be helpful and useful during any future edits to the story… not to mention greatly appreciated.
I seem to have a thing for tiny girls with wild spiky hair, so its not surprising that I find the Alice Cullen character the most interesting in the books… rather than the more main characters of Bella and Edward.
The story I've written, I'll guess would take place somewhere after "New Moon", probably in an alternate universe as I already stated.
I hope to improve my handle on the series as time goes on. I hope you enjoy my attempt.
Thanks all.
Updates 11/15/09 to 03/20/10:
I've change a few things in the way I will be posting this story from now on. I will just be giving the post Chapter Numbers for the most part, instead of trying to come with individual titles for each.
Mostly because I have large blocks of this story written out, that are eventually connected together as I go. In some cases 40 or 50 pages of material end up as 14 chapters. (Like today's post will be.)
So starting at Chapter 16, they will all be numbered that way from now on. I am also currently reviewing old chapters and correcting any minor mistakes I find in them as far as spelling and such, and the titles being marked with Chapter numbers. For the most part they will remain generally unchanged unless otherwise noted. Chapters that have been edited to smooth them out, or new lines added to better fit the story line are listed below:
CHAPTERS THAT HAVE BEEN SLIGHTLY ALTERED/EDITED SINCE ORIGINAL POSTING:
Chapter 1 - 03-20-10 (Due to more missed typos), Chapter 2 - 03-03-10, Chapter 3 - 03-03-10, Chapter 4 - 03-03-10, Chapter 5 - 03-03-10. Mass Edit 03-20-10: Chapters 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 18.
I also still have trouble figuring out how to get the paragraph format to transfer from MS Word over to what the sites uses, and often different scenes run into each other without a space separation because they don't show up in the transfer. So from now on I'll probably be breaking scenes down into their own chapters. In that regards, some chapters will be shorter than others but I hope this will make the story easier to follow.
I hope everyone is enjoying my attempt in a Twilight FanFic (and hope I'm not screw thing up too far outta whack.) There is a whole bunch more coming to this story just yet. I have huge blocks written out, and they morph on me as the story unfolds along. I just got to write up to the parts I have waiting to go and then update those exsiting parts to fit better into the story line. Angel and Kage (AKA Lucifer, which older vampires had dubbed him during his long years at war with the race) are not done with me just yet it seems, as this story has grow larger than I originally intended it to be. (Angel & Kage just keep whispering more of the story in my ear.)
I've also began writing sections for a Part II to this story line – that may or may not continue on to sometime after the first 4 original books leave off… (I wasn't sure in the beginning, but Part 2 of this story line will be taking place sometime after Book 4, "Breaking Dawn" - or some similar version of the events of the last two books, in this alternate universe.)
For those die hard fans that have written with some concerns about poor Alice, please keep in mind, in this story line she's not really left as herself at the moment. She's lost and hurt in more ways than one, and as Angel... she's doing the best she can with what little she knows about herself and her current situation. I just hope I'm getting across that I believe no matter what befalls her, that kindness in her soul will always shine through in some manner… and it's her soul that brings Archer (another of Kage's aliases) back to "life". (Yes, I'm throwing some Evanescence in there!) I warn you now; Alice's recovery from this is not going to be a smooth one and probably won't be fully resolved until Part 2… if it ever really is. (Insert evil laugh here.)
New 03/20/10: A 3rd Story is in rough outline stages, and will probably take place after Story 1 & 2 wrap up. One new interesting original character in development. More later.
Of course again, any feedback or helpful advice is always greatly appreciated. At the moment, I'm using the rest of the Cullens sparingly, as I don't want to write anything that's too far out of character for them... just yet anyway.
Please let me know how I'm doing on this.
Thanks again all,
Chant99
