Ok so this is my first story, I really hope I get some reveiws. I'd love your guy's advise. please R&R!!!
Long white hair whipped into a pale peachy purple face. Midnight blue eyes flicked around the snow covered forest. A black hood was pulled over long ears, covering part of blade markings. Dark purple armor shown under the black cloak around the elf. Her instincts told her to run, but she refused to run from an enemy that her race despised.
Her enemy stood a little ways in front of the tree she hid behind, looking around. The sun was out, glinting off his plate armor, but never the less still very cold. His black hair was half hidden by his black hood, which was attached to the black cloak that swayed in the wind. His evergreen eyes darted to every tree around him.
'What's a paladin doing out here?'
What's a druid doing out here either?
'Who asked you?'
You did.
'Whatever.'
The male elf shifted his sight to the tree she hid behind, her cape fluttered a bit, making the noise he heard. She heard him stalking up to the tree she was at, she made a dash for it, hearing him grunt in surprise and run after her.
'I'M SO DEAD!' she yelled at herself in her mind. She spotted a clearing up ahead, and dashed for that. Once on the outside of the trees, in the clearing, she gasp and stopped dead in front of a mountain. She stared up it in amazement. She was still looking up when the paladin arrived a couple seconds after her.
Keltree turned swiftly around when she heard his gasping breathes. She backed up into the mountain as her mind registered her only way out was blocked by him. She saw him smirk at her stupidity. She groaned silently as he took a few steps towards her, she growled when he was only 7 feet away. He probably just noticed she was a night elf, it would explain his eyes glowing a brighter shade of green when he saw her markings. He surprisingly didn't seem very hostile towards her. It was strange he hadn't attacked her but she knew that he was just judging her, biding his time.
Keltree crouched down in a defensive stance as he moved closer to her, her black cloak swaying with the motion. The paladin stopped 3 feet in front of her crouched form, his own black cloak shifting restlessly in the thick piercing wind. Silently, he pulled out his large axe and gently set in the snow a couple feet in front of her. Backing away, he sat against a tree as he watched her closely, her every move not going unnoticed by his sharp evergreen eyes.
The druid peered at the paladin then the axe, she decided she didn't want to touch the clean weapon. She instead relaxed her stance and spoke in common, "Why leave yourself defenseless?"
Peering at her for a moment, choosing his words carefully, he remarked slowly, "Did you wish for me to keep it and you in here for the rest of the night?" She blankly stared at him, fuming slightly, but agreed it was getting late.
"Allow me to introduce myself," she said mockingly, "I am Keltree Blackwolf, druid of Ashenvale." She did a mocking bow to him and leaned against the steep mountain wall.
"Talvron Redwing at your service, malady" He said, taunting her. She growled at his stupidity and grabbed the axe.
"Well then, Talvron, would you be kind enough to step aside and let me pass? I need to head back to Everlook... And I think I'll just take this weapon with me." She remarked and dashed away with the heavy axe hanging on her black cloaked back, surprisingly swift.
"Hey! That's my axe! Get back here you little..!" Talvron howled after her. He then dashed after her cursing himself for forgetting his mount.
I know, I know, it's really short. I'd love to write more but I'm gunna stick with this for a while. TY sooo much for reading my first story. Reveiw plz!!!
