Hi guys and of course gals too… this is my first story i have written on my own… please review and … TADA the prze will be adding New chapter one bye one . So I'll stop talking (actually typing) and you go read it !
~Alagaesian
Chapter 1 : A sudden change
The day after the siege laid on Feinster , and a long needed rest Eragon and his mind partner – Saphira , set out to the ancient forest . There were great festive held for him and his sapphire dragon. Elves from the furthest parts of the wood came to celebrate their victory under Feinster, also to mourn the death of their mentors : the golden dragon – Glaedr, and his rider – Oromis. After a brief meeting with the solemn elf qeen , he went looking for Arya. It seemed to him as if she was avoiding him.f
Before long the victorious battle of the Varden he felt something towars Arya stir in him. Every minute of an hour, every hour of a day he kept thinking of her. But after the Cripple Who is Whole and his dragon died , slain by the traitor – Murtagh, he recently clad his mind in silver armour. He talked to nobody but Saphira , Arya, Roran, and Nasuda – the ones closest to him. Rarely he would respond to one or another elf greeting him with the proper elf welcome.
He thought of talking freely with the princess , but that thought would be simply blown away by a memory of her rejecting his affection to her.
While deliberating about these matters, he didn't notice Arya approaching and bumped into felt blood running to his cheeks and hoped that she didn't take notice of it… She didn't.
-Oh it's you! I have been looking for you for a pretty long time. After
the feas tyou just disappeared. We have much to discuss … but not here , come with me.- While saying thisshe grabbed his forearm and led him to the Tialdari Hall Gardens. A shy smile on her lips,a cloud of lavender perfume surrounding her. Eragon could not read the emotions from her face, suspicion running through his head.
Then she stopped , and turned her cherry face towards him. He felt a similar touch his… It was Arya. He looked at her , she was smiling.
-I wanted – she started- to tell you this the very moment you first told me what you fell to me but, … I Didn't find the courage. Now that I know that you are leaving, and I may not see you again, I want you to know… It's hard for me to say it by words… Just look.
At that moment a steady flow of images , feelings , sounds and smells struck him by surprise. She let him know that from the moment she first denied her love to him , she regretted it.
Their eyes met. They smiled. The bond between their minds ceased. He looked at her with a questioning smile. She kissed him gently , said her googbyes and left. He stood there till night fell night fell on the ancient wood and Saphira took him to the house whre over a century ago the elder Vrael and his dragon lived. Eragon didn't have to tell the partner of his heart what happened between him and Arya. She already knew everything from the emotions emanating from him…
HATE THIS CHAPTER ! I hope the next one is gonna be better . I 'll add it tomorrow. REVIEW !
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