Attention! This is my first FMA fic so please be nice!

I'll try to accommodate everyone's wishes except for those of you who like lemons...Sorry...I'm not a lemon writer...

Chapter 1- Thief on Train!

Ed sat on the train quietly watching the trees fly by the window as Al sat next to him contemplating whether or not he should ask Ed about his idea about returning to Lior...

" Brother are you sure you want to return to Lior? After all Mustang did say he didn't want us going back because of Envy..." He finally said. Ed turned and looked at him. "Al since when do I ever listen to what Mustang says?"

Al looked at him then shook his head. "Never mind..." Ed turned his attention back to the window when all of a sudden there was a loud explosion and screaming on the train. Ed quickly stood up along with Al and opened the compartment door. "What the hell?..." Ed shouted. Just as

he stepped into the hallway somebody ran into him and knocked him to the floor falling ontop of him.

" HEY WHAT'S THE BIG IDEA! " Ed shouted as he looked at the person which turned out to be a girl. The girl had long black hair,chocolate colored eyes, and she was wearing an all black out fit. The girl quickly stood up and ran pass Al who was all but flabbergasted by the whole thing. Just then a large group of people ran after the girl.

Ed stood up angerly and followed after the mob with Al in pursuite. "Brother why are we chasing that girl?..." Al asked. Ed looked at him. "Because she is Serena Yamagata...Mustang told me about her, she's a thief and a murderer...Not only that...Her father was Nicolas Flamels' brother..."

Chaper 1 end-----------------

Shadow: Sorry so short. This is just a test to see if ya'll like it. If anyone has any ideas please let me know! I need 3 reviews to post again! Please no flames!