A sample of courage.
WARNING READ THIS FIRST: First of all, the characters and all the elements of Naruto not belong to me, unfortunately they are property of Masashi Kishimoto, and I say unfortunately because anyone can make this story better than him.
The reason for my previous statement is because I discovered why the story of Masashi has so many plot holes, failure of character development, and most importantly, the terrible execution of history, those details will be in a section that is in the end of each episode, and I realize now that the name of this section will upset all the fans of Masashi Kishimoto but is the phrase that best serve to describe it, because the reason that ruined his own story is incredibly stupid.
Second, I am Mexican, and my native language is Spanish, and for that reason if you found problems with my orthography and grammar, please, tell me in the comments, to make the necessary corrections.
This is one of 2-story I'm doing and I try to publish these two stories at the same time, this story is naruhina, and the other one is a narusaku story and I recommend to fans of these couples to read the two stories even if you hate the other couple, because later you will understand why that's important.
Summary: After losing his first fight with his sister, Hinata Hyuga felt like a failure because of the allegations of her clan, and she felt it would always be a failure and should surrender, but after a blond child of a rescue attempt bullies, he began to see things differently, if he shows courage in adversity, why not her?
Hinata Hyuga felt shattered today at the age of 9 years, Hinata by orders of her father and clan council should have a duel with her 4 year old sister Hanabi, she wants to be a strong kunoichi and strong to defend ninja everyone loves, wanted that since her mother died, however, she didn't want to hurt her sister, but that did not care for the council or her father and what happened even to her sister, the loss was terrible, she saw her father leave the dojo without even looking, she saw the disappointment on his face, that was pretty demoralizing, she didn't learn the techniques of Juuken as quickly as the council demanded, she never received a compliment by learn a new technique, it was just treated as a disappointment and a disgrace to the clan, it was sad for her, more because today reaffirmed that by your defeat.
She could not bear the sadness of that defeat, began to cry, "Hinata-sama" said Ko, his bodyguard, who was the only one who stayed in the dojo after the fight, Hinata in an impulsive act, she gave Ko hit with a Juuken's strike in the stomach knocking the breath from the lungs, and she ran as fast as possible to the dojo and Hyuga compound "Hi... na... ta... sa... ma..." Ko said while trying to gain breath, Hinata hear Ko's worried voice, but she don't care, she wanted to be far away from the clan council, far from his father, far from the clan, she didn't care where she go, she just wanted to go as far as possible, where no one despise her, running and blinded by tears, not realized where she was, until she ended up colliding with 3 older children, even worse, she saw that due to its collision with these children had thrown the ice cream of one of them, the children Angered dragged the helpless girl to a small clearing in the forest for adults not to see.
"Hey you!" Yelled the boy who had thrown his ice cream, "I-I'm sorry," said the frightened child, "Look, she's a Hyuga" said one of the bullies, "it's true, she has those eyes" said the second, "I think she is Neji's cousin" said the third as he watched the girl, "maybe she's as arrogant as him" again said the first "people of noble families always have a personality so cocky" he said again another bullies "I-I-I'm not li-li-like them" a scared Hinata said while trying to escape "Where are you going?" said the bully caught the girl before she could escape, "trying to get away without apologizing, Have you no shame" said another child, "she angered me" said one of the bullies as he forced the girl to kneel "apologize girl," said one, "and do it well" said another "apologize" said the last "sorry" said Hinata softly "That was pathetic" said the first "do it again" the second said "and do it right this time" said the third, "I'm sorry * sob * sorry * sob * sorry" said the poor girl sobbing.
Hinata didn't know what to do, she doesn't feel able to fight against them, 'they are bigger, they are 3 and I'm alone, perhaps the clan is right, maybe I am a failure, maybe I should just give up and be sent to the branch family, perhaps Neji Nii-san was right, and I can't fight fate, maybe I'm fated to be a failure for life'. All these thoughts were traveling at high speed inside the head of Hinata in just a few seconds.
"Stop" said someone who was coming out of the bushes to attract the attention of bullies and girl kneeling "Who are you?" Said one of the bullies "Oh! It's that kid, he is that good for nothing that everybody hates because he's always causing trouble" said the second "Ah! is "it"" end up saying the third and the three began to laugh, she recognized the blond boy, she saw every time that child away each leaving the mansion next to his bodyguard, Hinata always saw that child, sometimes just screaming, sometimes making pranks to some people, and others just she saw a face in him that reflected sadness and loneliness, and whenever asked to Ko about that boy and why he was always alone, she only received evasive, that rather diminish her curiosity only grew more and more.
"I'm not 'it'! I'm Uzumaki Naruto, future Hokage of Konoha, do not forget" the boy said with confidence "Hokage?" shouted the 3 children in unison before they laughing by the ridicule claims of the pariah of the village, Hinata looked surprised at the blond boy by that statement 'How can someone who has been treated so badly craved something so big?' thought the girl "Someone like you can't become that!" said one of the bullies as he gave the boy a punch so hard shooting little blond down, however as soon as fall, Naruto got up and even with the pain of the blow and wiping his face, "So you want to fight?" said the same bully who knocked him down "well, but do not go crying after" Naruto said as he was making a hand seal "that seal is ..." one of them said "bunshin no jutsu" Naruto said with force "NO WAY" the bullies said in unison as a cloud of smoke formed and dissipated, a Naruto clone appeared, but this clone looked terrible, pale, weak and almost seemed to be dying as he slowly fell to the ground, after falling this clone disappeared in another cloud of smoke.
Bullies looked surprised at first fearing receive a ninja attack, but seeing that weak clone, the fear disappeared making 3 bullies began to laugh uncontrollably "That was ridiculous" said one of them while laughing, and taking advantage of the distraction, Naruto lunged to bully to the ground, "you lowered your guard fool! I will definitely Hokage me, and show them all," said the blond as he hit the bulling lying on the ground, "Hey stupid, you are underestimating us," said the other 2 bullies while they took away the blond boy was on top of his partner, knocking him to the ground and beating him between the 3.
Hinata was surprised seeing the blond boy who was starting to get a beating, 'Why is he helping me? Why keep fighting even if is he in a clear disadvantage against them? This child is not a bad person, then why do people hate him so much? He's trying to protect me' were the thoughts that passed through Hinata's head as she watched the boy was struggling against the three bullies who were hit him in the floor, and that even with a clear disadvantage, the child was still trying to fight them, then, a word of her mother in her deathbed began to resonate in her head.
"Hinata, my daughter" said a woman in bed to a 6 year old girl who despite her young age, she knew she was listening to the last words of his beloved mother "promise me that you will become a strong kunoichi, you will make you strong to fight to protect the people you love, your sister, your cousin Neji, and those who are dear to you, well you fight to defend others, especially if those people mean something to you, fight to protect those who love without flinching, without surrender, promise me daughter" said the woman as she gently stroked her daughter's hair "I promise, mother."
'He's trying to save me even when it is obvious that he can't win, he is not bigger, stronger, and more agile than those 3 children, but he is still trying, I have to get up, to protect someone precious to me, 'that he gave Hinata a feeling of confidence that she had never felt before in her life, she got up, she activate your byakugan making the seals and placed in Juuken posture to fight, ready to strike and taking advantage of the bullies were busy with Naruto, Hinata attacked one of them while he was off guard, and with great speed, she apply strikes in both arms of one of them effectively and quickly, paralyzing both arms to the shoulders, while the first one was screaming in pain, the other 2 focused their attention on the Hyuga girl "so you also want to fig..." but he couldn't finish the sentence because he was hit from Naruto who used the distraction to attack, and while the third was trying to hit Naruto, received a fierce attack from Hinata leaving him also paralyzed both of his arms, and leaving only one standing, the third was starting to bleed from the mouth, through the blow dealt by Naruto previously, watching the 3 now they were at a disadvantage and that Naruto and Hinata were prepared to continue fighting, bullies chose the intelligent output and flee as pussies, "THAT'S IT, RUN COWARDS!" Naruto shouted as hard as both childrens sat, Hinata by fatigue and Naruto the pain from the beating.
Hinata could only smile at the irony of the situation, she finished rescuing the boy who intended to rescue her, but no matter, she was happy because she could not only protect him, also by the fact that seeing the child's actions She could tell he wasn't a bad person, "Are you okay?" said the boy turned to her "y-y-y-yes" Hinata said shyly to her savior, "good, I was on my way to lunch when I hear you cry, Why those kids attacked a blind girl?" The boy said as Hinata give a look of surprise, blind? she has good vision, then she realized that Naruto probably didn't know the byakugan "No, I'm not blind, I am a member of the Hyuga clan, and we have a doujutsu, the byakugan (white eye)" Hinata said "oh, I had heard of civilians about the Hyuga clan, they say that their eyes have a creepy look" Naruto said making Hinata started looking down thinking that the boy would hate her, "but your eyes aren't, the Yours are pretty, and have a nice lavender tone" Naruto said as Hinata blushed slightly, 'he thinks my eyes are beautiful' thought Hinata, "and those moves you did were awesome, You could teach me?," asked Naruto excited "I'm sorry, I can't, my taijutsu can only be taught to members of the Hyuga clan, and even if I could teach you, you must have the Byakugan to use it" Hinata said as she saw the Naruto's disappointment face as she let out a small giggle that lifted the mood of the hyperactive blond, "Well, never mind, these movements were amazing, must be the best doing those techniques," said Naruto, making Hinata's face showed a clear sadness "Did I say something wrong?" asked the child while watching the sad face of the small Hyuga, "No, not that, re-re-really, I ..." before she could speak more, a loud growl was heard, the sound coming from Naruto's stomach, "sorry, as I said I was on my way to lunch," said the blond boy scratching back of the head, the child's behavior made Hinata giggle, Naruto was happy to see that the girl didn't run away from him, 'maybe she wants to be my friend' he thought, in that moment he had an idea, "Hey, will you come with me?" Naruto said as he stood and stretched his hand to her, "Yes, I-I-I do" Hinata said little shy but still showing a smile as he helped her to rise, "Okay, let's go... uh..." Naruto said a little nervous, because he had forgotten to ask her name. "Hinata. Hyuga Hinata" Hinata said nervously watching the child, "nice to meet you Hinata-chan, I am ..." "Uzumaki Naruto" said Hinata surprising the blond boy, seeing his face, Hinata only a small giggle, "you said your name when you arrived to defend myself against these bullies" Hinata said with a smile, "Oh, right... well, let's go then" Naruto said and he surprisingly took Hinata's hand making her blush as they started walking.
Walking through the commercial district, people began to observe, some with obvious concern, as if something terrible was about to happen, but what surprised Hinata were the glares that pointed directly to Naruto, as they passed between the people, Hinata heard people gossiping about what they were seeing "oh no, That girl is in danger!" "Someone approach and save her!" "Is not that the girl heiress of the Hyuga clan" "oh my, Maybe "it" will be controlling her?" "Oh my God! Someone to save them from ..." "ssshhhh, we shouldn't say that," and various other talks were going on around them as they continued their way to their destination, these conversations were with him making Hinata's curiosity about Naruto grew even more, 'Why say all those horrible things? Why does everyone hate him? He isn't a bad person, I mean yeah, I saw him make some pranks, but that's no reason enough for people to hate him so much, he… he is my hero' Hinata thought as she blushed a little, 'one bad person had not tried to save me' Hinata out of her thoughts as she watched Naruto and saw an obvious sadness on his face, she lift your mood for him by squeezing his hand harder, causing she took his attention "Don't worry, I'll be by your side" Hinata achieving those simple words make Naruto smile again.
The walk was a bit long but eventually arrived at the Ichiraku's restaurant, and upon entering, Hinata saw that the 2 people attending the place, unlike the others, they received Naruto with a smile, "welcome Naruto, I see you brought someone else with you, "the man who was cooking said. "Oh, how cute at that age and Naruto got a girlfriend," said the teenager was cleaning the table so that the two children had a blush, "she's not my girlfriend Ayame Nee-chan, she's ..." Naruto could finish the sentence fearing that Hinata hated the end of that sentence, luckily for him, Hinata knew what he thought and ended the phrase for him "we-we're just friends, we met a few hours ago," said a shy and blushing Hinata, Naruto was surprised she finished the sentence for him, but at the same time was very happy, for the first time in his life he had someone to call friend, "she is Hyuga Hinata, and I rescue her from some older kids who were bothering her," Naruto said proudly as he scratched back of the head, "Well, she finished rescuing me after those bullies were above me, she used those great movements that paralyzed the arms of two of them," said Naruto as they sat in the chairs, Hinata was surprised, it was the first time someone said she was good fighting, always when came to learn the techniques of the clan, Hinata only was belittled because she couldn't learn Juuken's techniques as fast as she need "a Hyuga girl, I'm surprised you did a friend of a girl who belongs to a noble clan, Naruto" Teuchi said with a smile, "Well, what will your order?" "Give me pork ramen" very happy Naruto said. "Miso ramen to me," Hinata said in the kitchen, Teuchi began to prepare the child's order of ramen, and Ayame was approached Naruto," Naruto, today will not serve you more than 2 bowls" Ayame said quietly, and laughing of Naruto's reaction. To Naruto those words were horrible, being a great ramen addict he is, naturally Naruto knelt down and begged Ayame to not being punished of that way, Ayame came to him "I do it this to you don't show your bad manners to Hinata. She is from a noble clan of Konoha, you don't want Hinata hate you by your bad manners, Do you?" said Ayame in Naruto's ear so Hinata would not hear, Naruto understanding the situation, decided to accept what Ayame said, if having less bowls of ramen was the price to pay to keep his new friend, it was a price he would be willing to pay, "Well, while they prepare us the ramen, can you tell me how it was that you were attacked by those bullies" Naruto said to Hinata and she felt some uncomfortable, but although she met Naruto just an hour ago, she felt she could tell him what happened "You will see, it all started this morning when...
Ko was surprised by what happened, after seeing Hinata losing battle against his younger sister, Ko saw Hinata began to shed tears, "Hinata-sama" said Ko while the distraught girl approached, but suddenly, for an impulsive Hinata attack, Ko took a hit of Juuken from the girl that take to the air all at once, immediately afterwards, Hinata ran to the door away of the bodyguard. "Hi... na... ta... sa... ma..." Ko said while trying to catch his breath, but she don't listen, she ran through the halls of losing the Hyuga's compound.
When Ko caught his breath go directly to the room of the Hyuga heiress to try to lift the spirits of her, recovered from the attack Ko went to search her room, only to see that Hinata was not there, this worried Ko, if something bad happened to Hinata, Ko would be seriously punished. since the failed kidnapping attempt of Hinata held during its third birthday by part of Kumo, Hiashi gave Ko the duty to be Hinata's bodyguard for being the most loyal member of the branch family, if anyone found out that Hinata was not in the mansion, Ko perhaps would be punished by activating the "caged bird seal," he had to find Hinata as soon as possible.
Leaving the compound and quickly activating his Byakugan start the search, the first thing he found in the pursuit of Hyuga heiress were 3 children scurrying, but more surprising was that with his active byakugan, he saw that 2 of them had the Tenketsu's arms closed, characteristic of victims of a Juuken's technic, taking that as a clue, he approached them and stopped them, "Tell me what happened to you," Ko said with a tone that show little patience, frightened the children confessed what happened to Hinata, but Ko concern increased to hear that the Uzumaki child had arrived and had fought with the children, "where this happen?" Ko asked to the bullies and they told them where this happen, and after receiving the information, Ko hurried to search the place, afraid that their situation was now worse than before.
One of the orders that Ko received from Hinata's father when he was assigned as her bodyguard, was that under no circumstances Hinata was approaching the Uzumaki boy, which until then, he try to follow to the letter, Ko made sure Hinata was away of the boy when he appeared close, what he did was leave the place as soon as possible with Hinata, if Hiashi discovered that her daughter had been near the Uzumaki boy, he would be tortured with the "caged bird seal" for several days and had no doubt that Hiashi himself would do that personally. Now more urgently he had to find her.
"... But my little sister won the fight because I didn't want to hurt her, and for that reason I escape from the compound, I don't set where I was running, and I crash with these children, and as they thought I was like as the other members of my clan, they wanted to humiliate me * sob * but I don't try to defend myself, because I am weak * sob *" telling her story to Naruto, as he finished their bowls of ramen, Hinata saw Naruto very angry, 'I knew it, Now he's going to hate me' said Hinata and she waited an insult from Naruto and tell them to forget their friendship "YOU ARE NOT WEAK!" Naruto shouted, leaving Hinata surprised, "You are not weak! if you were then you can´t be able to help me in the fight, and you wouldn't have been able to help me beat those bullies, never say again that you are weak, because you're not, you're giving up easily, this is different, if someone tells you you're weak, do not listen them" Naruto said looking straight into Hinata's eyes, which left her without words, she simply began to shed tears of happiness, and nodded with a new look, "You have to promise me you'll never say you're weak, you return to never doubt yourself, and don't will surrender, understood Hinata-chan" Naruto said with conviction to Hinata, "I promise Naruto-kun" she said with equal conviction, Teuchi coughed for the 2 children remember they were still in the middle of the restaurant which made when they realized were they are to finish red from embarrassment by the scene they had done, Teuchi smiled as Ayame just laughed about the reactions of both children.
After the situation calmed, Naruto insisted on paying both bills, to which Teuchi said today paid the house, to celebrate Naruto had a new friend. Leaving Ichiraku, Naruto and Hinata walked back holding hands as they walked, both talked about the fact that soon enter the academy to become ninjas, what they wished they could finish in the same class and train together to become shinobis.
As they walked, Hinata noticed that back the glares of the villagers towards Naruto, this time, Naruto was tolerating those looks thanks to Hinata stood beside him but Naruto felt concern for the way his hand clenched, Hinata again to arouse their curiosity, returning to the question, why everyone hated Naruto? But she came out of those thoughts when she get to hear a familiar voice "HINATA-SAMA" the voice of her bodyguard sound, Ko focused Juuken attack to Naruto to loosen it to her, and the hyperactive blond flew by the air, as soon as Ko saw that Naruto was on the ground he didn't think twice and took Hinata's hand "we have to return quickly to the compound Hinata-sama" Ko said as he pulled Hinata while resisting this "but Ko-san, he..." "You should not get involved with him Hinata-sama" Ko said as they left the place, and they had lost sight of Naruto, if not were because she saw the sad look of Naruto.
For Naruto, this was nothing new, he had already lived that before, when he seemed to have a friend to play and talk, at some point reached a parent of his new friend, and they walked away from him, and when he saw again the boy didn't want to bring him back in your life, it has happened many times, and today that wouldn't be the exception. Naruto would probably see her again at the academy, and probably she will tell him to stay away from her, 'Well, it was good while it lasted' he thought as he watched he believed would be his new friend away.
Hinata saw in the eyes of Naruto sadness and loneliness, the same look he had when she saw him in the distance, the same look of pain with which she began to get curious about it, curiosity that gave her a question, but never an answer, at any other time she had resigned to Ko's words, but now she couldn't leave Naruto alone, 'He rescued me just now, it is time for me to rescue him,' in a fast-moving Hinata activate your Byakugan, and with his free hand she hit a blow to Ko's forearm hard enough to drop his hand and being herself, Hinata ran quickly toward Naruto, "HINATA-SAMA" shouted a surprised Ko, its the second time he had been beaten by the heiress of his clan, Hinata ignoring the words of Ko, ran to Naruto and bent to hug him hard, everyone in the area were more than surprised, especially Naruto himself.
Ko approached Hinata even with his sore arm, worried about the clan heiress, Ko didn't understand why she was behaving that way, but the more he approached, Hinata hugged stronger Naruto "Hinata-sama, I don't know what's happening, but you must get away from that kid in this inst..." "WHY?" shouted Hinata before Ko finished, leaving him and all present speechless" WHY DO I HAVE TO STAY AWAY FROM HIM? GIVE ME A GOOD REASON WHY SHOULD I GET AWAY FROM HIM! TELL ME, WHENEVER I SAW HIM TO THE DISTANCE, YOU ALWAYS MAKE ME STAY AWAY FROM HIM, AND THOUGH I ALWAYS ASKED THE REASON, I NEVER GOT A REPLY, GIVE ME A CLEAR ANSWER OF WHY SHOULD I GET AWAY FROM HIM! AND I WILL DO INMEDIATELY, "said Hinata helping Naruto to stand up of the ground, leaving Ko cornered as the villagers around, not that they had no answer to give to Hinata, but because they couldn't say it, thanks to a law punishable by death by order of the Hokage, Ko had to invent something fast for Hinata yo stay away from him, without mentioning "it" to Hinata, the best thing he could think of was the reputation of Naruto as a prankster but at this point, it did not seem as a convincing answer, but what was more surprised Ko, it was the sight of Hinata, a sight that showed confidence, strength and courage, something that the shy Hinata had not shown before, even she don'r stuttered when she speak, 'when Hinata-sama show all that confidence?' Ko thought, and the first thing that came to his mind was the blond boy she was hugging,' Did he be the one who is giving her that confidence? '.
A woman who seemed not to fear death sentence, began to give the answer "girl, he is dangerous, he ..." the woman couldn't finish by a man, probably her husband covered her mouth to not tell the secret, "he is a good person," said Hinata, "Naruto-kun rescued me earlier today about children bothered me and although he was losing the deal to rescue me, that's not something to make someone dangerous, he's my friend, and I will not leave him alone," said the girl, so that nobody could say anything to her will serve to stay away from Naruto, but what surprised more to Hinata, was that she was hearing a cry, that cry came from Naruto, which he was happy that she would defend him in that way, Hinata just simply hug him while Naruto was crying on her shoulder.
The villagers preferred not get more into this and all decided to move on your own things, and bring Ko turned to Hinata, seeing that he couldn't win in this situation, he took Naruto and Hinata to the park and both played together until the evening "Hinata-sama, we must return to the compound, his father probably began to worry about you," Ko said with more calm when he saw that the sun was setting, "if you like, your friend can come, after all, he need to know where you live to know where to search you" said Ko seeing now he couldn't separate them, Naruto and Hinata were happy to hear that, they looked at Ko and gave him a smile, holding hands walked together toward the Hyuga compound while Naruto was telling Ko what happened to the bullies 'if I had come for Hinata-sama before, probably I will ruined Hinata-sama's life' thought Ko while watching Hinata's smile, she didn't smile like that since her mother died, 'I hope that Hiashi-sama understand the situation '. When they reached the gates, "Hinata-chan, see you tomorrow?" Naruto said, hoping not to see this is too good to be true "yeah, tomorrow 11 o'clock in the park will be well," Hinata said as cheerfully Naruto nodded, with this they parted, and Naruto jumped for joy as she was out of sight, while Hinata was leaving happily, Ko had to worry about what he have to tell the clan leader, especially because the branch guards saw all what happened at the gate 'Hiashi-sama will kill me'.
After telling Hinata to get ready for dinner, Ko search Hiashi, and when he found him asked to speak alone in his office, 'its better to speak now to Hiashi-sama, with what happened in the commercial district he found out anyway' thought Ko to get to the office "What do you want to tell me Ko?" said Hiashi, "you will see Hiashi-sama, what happened after the fight between Hinata-sama and Hanabi-sama was ..." Ko told him happened in the day, the impulsive act of Hinata, what Naruto told about his meeting with the bullies, and what happened in the commercial district of Konoha.
Hiashi was surprised to hear the story, "...and that's the story Hiashi-sama, and I apologize for being unable to carry out his orders, I will accept the punishment you ask Hiashi-sama" he said as he knelt, but contrary to Ko expected, Hiashi just sighed, "Ko, do you know why I gave you the order to keep my daughter away Uzumaki child in first place? Ko stand up to look surprised by the question, "No" was Ko's answer, "the clan council decided to move away from the child and not relate to in any way because "it", but I was opposed to that," said Hiashi leaving Ko surprised "I wanted to help the child not to have a life so miserable for his load, but thanks to Danzo, I and the other clan heads ended up hand tied to help him" Ko was surprised by the words of the Hyuga clan head, because of that, "the clan council, knowing the inevitable fate of the child, and the fact that he just waited hated by the villagers, agreed that no member of the clan relate with him, which I accepted reluctantly" Hiashi said while Ko was speechless.
"Ko, I will give my decision, but answers this first, do you hate that kid?" Said Hiashi, what Ko stood "the truth is not Hiashi-sama, I don't like your reputation as a prankster, but I can see the difference between Prison and prisoner" Ko said confidently and without hesitation, "Well, now your new order is that Uzumaki boy has my permission to be friend with my daughter, and help secretly training both, if your story is true perhaps the boy help Hinata to show your full potential," said Hiashi maintaining the 'Hyuga stare' "yes, Hiashi-sama " said Ko to Hiashi's order , "Ko, you are dismissed. "
Alone in his office, Hiashi pulled from a drawer of his desk a photo in a frame, a family portrait which he appeared alongside his death wife, Hinata standing between his parents, and a newborn Hanabi in her mother's arms "Hikari, I wish you were here, from your death has been very difficult to educate our daughters, I tried to make Hinata becomes strong, but now I see I'm using the wrong approach, the clan methods are not suitable to Hinata, she's got your kindness after all, Kushina was your best friend, and I think Hinata will help your child, Danzo ruined our chances to help him, but I think Hinata can save him' he thought as he stared at the portrait.
Before you read this part, as I said earlier, the title will hate you, and please read before criticizing, because the title is certainly to misunderstand.
Masashi is an asshole, chapter 1: 666 Satan.
Before you comment. NO, I will not say that Masashi is Satan's son, a Satanist, or that their story is made by the devil's influence, the name of this chapter because it is the reason that Masashi Kishimoto ruined his own story, You see, 666 Satan believe it or not, it's the title of a manga (known in some parts of the world as 'O-parts hunter' for very obvious reasons), and most interesting is his author, Seishi Kishimoto.
To start with the obvious questions, Seishi Kishimoto? Is he a relative of Masashi Kishimoto? Yes, he is the brother of Masashi Kishimoto, more specifically, his twin brother, also mangaka and 666 Satan is one of his works, and the reason that Masashi do misuse their history and surprisingly, the reason why his story is flawed, and most importantly, the reason why this section has the title Masashi is an asshole. I mention this work because in this manga, you discover the problem of Naruto, and the reason is because in principle, Naruto & 666 Satan are the same story, different ideas, different base elements, different characters, but in the most basic, is the same story. so much so that I can tell both stories with a single review:
The story is about a child who is an orphan and is treated as an outcast (Naruto Uzumaki/Jio Freed), he does not know because it is treated that way, but that does not stop him and help that child to forge a goal (to be Hokage/conquer the world), the reason he is treated as an outcast is because he has a powerful creature sealed within him (Kyubi/Satan) that everyone afraid, to advance the story he starts make friends and people gradually beginning to recognize its existence, one of his friends for wanting to complete a vengeance wants to kill him (Sasuke Uchiha/Jin), and another knew him as a psychopath (Gaara/Cross) and then became his friend . But this guy has to fight against an organization (Akatsuki/Stea and Zenom) have a secret but evil goal, but to get that goal need to catch some creatures (bijus/Angels & Demons) that are trapped in certain people (jinchurikis/gensekis) that they serve as containers of these creatures, and must enclose them in a special container (Gedou Mazu/Kabbalah and qliphoth), and interestingly the most powerful creature of all is locked inside the protagonist.
In the most basic form, with one review, I explain both jobs, and I start this chapter explaining the only noticeable differences between the 2 series, in the case of Naruto, it isn't necessary to explain the basic elements of the story because all by this time you already know (jutsu, elemental continent, villages, Akatsuki, the Bijus, etc.) I will highlight only the point that it is completely based on Japanese folklore. Now, 666 Satan in this story, events are not held on a continent but an entire planet, and on this planet there are devices called O-parts, which give extraordinary abilities to those who use them, but not everyone can use the O-parts, only certain special people have the necessary powers to use them, and these people are called O-parts tactics, or by the abbreviation OPTS, and in this story, there are not one but two organizations that want to gather 10 angels and 10 demons, gathered in special containers, the Kabbalah and qliphoth (in this story, Seishi called reverse Kabbalah, but I'll use real name and if you do not believe me look it that name exists, search in Google) and getting them all, leaders of the organizations will make their dreams come true.
If you wonder why the similarity in the stories, I have a theory about this, you see, I think the reason is the same story, it's because Masashi and Seishi, originally wanted to do a manga together, but when they had the basic elements the script done, they fought because both had their own ideas and items to use within the script, and because both not reached an agreement, Masashi and Seishi did their own stories on their own, I say this because the argument of plagiarism is unsustainable, Naruto began publication in 1999, and 666 Satan began in 2001, but 666 Satan end publication in 2007 while Naruto ended its publication in 2014 (I'm not counting the gaiden for reasons I'll explain later) and both stories have too many similarities.
Now why nobody noticed this? Well the answer is simple, Seishi's Manga is little known, to have an idea, if you seek the 666 Satan fan fictions (look for it on this page with the name of O-parts hunter) you will find less than 30 fan fictions. Just that says that this story is almost unknown.
With that in mind I will destroy the first argument of the fans who want to explain why Masashi did wrong their story, and replace it with my argument that will see more and more plausible as you progress through the comparison of the stories, and is, Masashi Kishimoto ruin your story because he prostitute his work (making merchandise, movies, video games, etc.) on the contrary, Masashi ruined his job because he didn't prostitute, Masashi sadly don't change anything about the story, and when he did, he did because the fans would give him a negative review, not because he realized that he was wrong, and the few changes he made to the script were made at a point where instead of creating positive change for the story, only created a forced and terrible plot twist, many of the plot points he had for the story, put them before time, or after time, making fans, wishing that certain events happen in the story and that Masashi had not even intended to put in first place.
If you want to counter-argue what I'm writing, please seek Seishi's Manga, and read it, especially because at the end of each episode of this fan fiction (I will explain the similarities between Naruto and 666 Satan) I'll spoil Seishi's story for you to see these things in common, in fact I made a video about it on YouTube and the video is called "el final de Naruto 666 Satan," (it's in Spanish and I don't complete the English subtitles) in fact I did before I left the chapter 694 of Naruto's manga, and I will say this, that video is a resume of the similarities between the stories, and lasts 46 minutes.
