Chapter 1: prologue

This is my story, the story of my life (so far), so let's give this a shot.

? POV

I'm walking Home after a long day at school, when out of an alleyway, one of the jocks at my school grabs me and pulls me towards him and knees me in the stomach, he keeps saying, "I thought told you to stay away from the football field, next time it's your life, got it?", he says whilst pulling out a knife and holding against my neck, "got it?", he says again, this time moving the knife against my neck, "got it", I say, he drops me and continues to walk on towards the school, now my name is Tristan I'm an almost pure white Caucasian male, with bright green eyes that my friends say almost glow, I have orangish-redish hair, I'm 6'5(real height), I am almost nothing but skin and bones, even though I can bench 240, I wear glasses because I don't have the best eyesight , my usual attire is my red and black hoodie, dark grey jeans (I don't believe in shorts), any shirt but today I was wearing my minecraft shirt featuring all my favorite mobs, : creeper, endermen, blazes, skelletons, etc, then in the middle was me( a shirt my friend made me), and my black and green teni shoes, apparently there was supposed to be police officers last year just for this reason but they never showed.

Tristan POV

And when I was about to get to the door my friend Ian, brown hair, brown eyes, tan, 5'6, came running at me, screaming at me to let him come over and play minecraft, which never happens, I said, " umm, I guess…", he immediately ran to my room where his and mine computers are, he went to my computer and downloaded some mods, "what are you doing Ian?!", " I'm getting us a mod pack going on our world" he said, "why", I said trying to get him to stop, 15 minutes later we were playing, laughing, and having a good time when all of the sudden there was a knock on my front door, I left so I could get it, "com'on man just ignore it, we just started playing", he whined, I ignored him, but when I opened the door I was greeted with a man with almost glowing white eyes, brown hair and a goatee, he said, "ni em tel", I was trying to figure out what he said when he grabbed a note book, and wrote, 'LET ME IN', before barging in and drawing on my floor, it was some kind of circle with writing all around it, I pulled him up before he could finish, "I don't know who you are, but get out, now before I call the cops!", I yelled, now ian was intrigued, he saw the man then fainted, saying," H-H-HEROBRINE", then the man dropped the piece of chalk, which fell on top on the circle and completed it, when this happened he pushed me onto it and then yelled,"nuf evah", before the circle glowed a bright purpleish-whitish, then we were gone.

Well ther you guys go the rewritten version hope you enjoy FYI: I DON'T OWN MINECRAFT, ONLY MY TWO OCS AMONG OTHER THINGS, byeee!