So as promised I updated the very badly written Zaraki One-shot. It's better than before in my opinion. I changed the point of view as well. I think it makes it better like that. Hopefully you guys all like it as well. I don't own Bleach that is all Tite Kubo. I'm just a fan writing my own little story.

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Is it broken?

Can we work it out?

I can see it in your eyes,

Your ready to break.

Don't look away.

-"Broken" Secondhand Serendae.


Nari stared out the wide window, taking in the peaceful scenery of the squad. Yes for once Division eleven was the calm. Mainly because instead of fighting like every would rather be doing, it was an assigned paperwork day. They had not done paperwork in nearly a month and it was stacking up. Glancing around the room her bright blue eyes took in everyone's faces especially that of her captain. He'd made it more than clear how angry he was to have a 'useless' woman in his squad. As did every other member of the squad. Minus Yachiru of course who was just happy to have a girl around. Despite how much he kept her down, she'd always really liked her Captain. More than a subordinate should. The day she heard she was finally leaving the control of Fox Face Gin she nearly squealed. When she found out who her new captain was, she did squeal. He was the whole reason she'd joined the academy. Nari had been a little kid when Ikkaku and Zaraki fought but she watched it wide eyed. She was amazed with the amount of strength the two had and vowed to be there beside them one day. But now that she was here it didn't seem like such a good idea.

Nari's short white hair was scattered in her face, as she looked up at the man who'd knocked her to the ground. Ikkaku Madarame his black eyes brewing with anger.

"Che. I'll never understand how the hell your fourth seat."

His voice seemed to drip like venom, poisoning her to the bone, well more like the heart. Yumichika gave her a half hearted smile before following after him. Still sitting in the grass she crossed my legs. With shaking hands she gripped her ripped up and bloody face. His words echoed through her mind, causing her to wonder, is this really what she wanted? A light breeze blew, the sound of ruffling tree's was always calming. The sound of a loud grunt however wasn't. Jumping to her feet, Nari stumbled into a bow.

"Captain. Please excuse my rude behavior I was unaware of your presence."

"Have you won yet? Even once? Get stronger or I'm transferring you out. I have no room for weak links."

Nari muttered a response but kept her head down, she couldn't look up knowing he was there. She couldn't even stand up when she heard his footsteps fading away. Her eyes were clenched tightly suppressing unreleased tears. Was this what she wanted? Or should she just transfer out?

A sharp pain shot through her chest at the mere memory. She could feel her heart breaking in two. Looking up she noticed she was the only one who'd even made progress with her paperwork. As usual Zaraki had the most left, it didn't look like he was even working on it now. After Nari signed the last document she stood to her feet, slowly wandering towards her captains desk. As weak as she was she was a tall girl, about an inch or so taller than Ikkaku. But her mannerisms were so kind and innocent that it wasn't a fact no one would believe it

"Captain, may I be excused to deliver my papers?"

Her voice was barely above a whisper, but she knew he heard her. He didn't even look up as he waved her away. Nari sighed taking the large stack of papers in hand and exiting the barracks. It was a warm day outside, the sun heated her cool skin in a way that sent a shiver racing down her spine. Taking in a deep breath she tried to let the memories of her first few days in the squad wash away. But all that washed away were a few rouge tears down her cheeks.

Sitting at his desk Zaraki looked out the window watching with only other female member. He was actually surprised when he heard that she'd been excited to join. Even more so when he realized how attractive she was. Her body was filled out where it needed to be, and toned in others. She had bright white hair that framed her porcelain face. The bright blue of her eyes contrasted how pale she was everywhere else. In his mind it was a shame that she was weak. If she were stronger she'd basically be perfect. Zaraki felt his face fall into an even deeper frown when he saw the tears on her cheeks before she left the division. Now that was unusual.


By the time she arrived back at the barracks night had already fallen. Small taps were made as her feet made contact with the flooring, but in the dark of night it seemed to echo around her. Pushing the doors to the office open Nari stopped instantly. There still sitting at his desk was none other than Zaraki Kenpachi. She'd expected him of all people to have gone home already. Or at least be out drinking with the rest of the squad. She hadn't realized she was staring since he was staring back. The hard scowl he held earlier still present on his face. Nari felt herself shake lightly as he stood from his seat noisily. The pounding of his feet against the wood made her realize he was indeed coming her way. Craning her head up she was still amazed by how much taller he was than her. It was unusual.

"I-I'm sorry for being out s-so long Capt-" She stopped when his voice roared roughly above her own

"You were crying when you left. Why?"

The shaking of her body only got worse after that. She knew the rule of Division Eleven. No crying. It is a sign of weakness, and weakness is not allowed. Her heart was sinking down to her stomach just begging to be drowned in the acid. Nari knew she wasn't getting out of this one so instead of answering she looked down. Letting her white hair create a sort of curtain between her and her Captain. A grunt was heard before she felt a rough hand push her face up to look at the man in front of her. She was well aware of the heat that was flooding her cheeks but decided to try and play it off to her advantage. Just as she opened her mouth to defend herself, a pair of lips roughly crashed against her own. Catching the girl completely off guard. Her eyes widened instantly, amazed that this wasn't a dream. Before she had time to react Zaraki pulled away walking back to his desk and plopping down in his forgotten chair.

"Go to sleep. You have training first thing in the morning."

Standing there still a bit amazed Nari nodded before bowing and stumbling out of the room. Staggering down the hall she placed a hand on her head, shaking it gently. Well that was unexpected to say the least.


There it is all nice and updated for Kenny. Hope you guys enjoyed it! ^_^