Nina's Last thoughts

Because this movie spoke to me and in my mind she died. I want to do a more morbid story and so she has to have some last thoughts. This is going to start as she is running up the "mountain" thing she jumps from. I own nothing… Okay so italics are her thoughts regular are actions and dialog from the movie. The bold is not from this scene it is from the one before when she is leaving for the studio.

It's almost over… The play, my life, everything…

I am running and sort of dancing up the hill the white swan jumps from.

How fitting. I am the white swan but it is not me, the black swan was me not the other way around. The white swan commits suicide yet, I was murdered by the black swan…

As I look over the crowd I see my mother.

Mommy! How can I do this to her? I am freeing myself but trapping her… The black swan said so many hurtful things…

"I'm the swan queen you're the one who never left the court!"

God how that must have hurt her. As I jump I feel free. God How comfortable this bed is. To just lay here and sleep….

"They love you, they love you. My little princess I always knew you had it in you. Come on let's take your bow.

Lily saw it. She saw the wound. Then Thomas, it took him long enough then I heard him tell people to go get some help.

"What did you do? What did you do?"

"I felt it."

"What?"

"I'm perfect."

I felt his hand move away then I continued.

"I was perfect."

The light seemed to get brighter and blurred together. All I could hear was the applause. So this is what dying felt like, it is so peaceful, so quiet.

Alright it is over and I ask that you review. I wrote this on a whim and now I ask is how did I do for my first Black Swan story?