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I peered curiously through dark lashes at the boy in the desk across from me. I was trying to be obscure at it, merely glancing, but was failing miserably even without being told by my friend besides me. I was, I sighed, the most clumsy-able to see through--sixteen year old in the world.

He didn't seem happy with me considering the scowl plastered on his handsome face and I admit if I was him I wouldn't either, wouldn't want to be goggled as though in a zoo, but he was such a complex and mysterious character that I was thoroughly fascinated by him.

The minute he entered this classroom, the day I first lay eyes on him-which was today, the new-exchange student from, I pondered for a minute trying to remember the small vague name of the town, forks.

Forks, It didn't seem to suit his nameplace, it was to dull and dry and he was so different.

Yes, different from anyone I had ever meant before, in looks and in personality. He had only been in this classroom for 10minutes and I had already had a gist of it-even without having spoken a word to him and couldn't get him out of my mind.

His face, I thought, snatching another quick glance at him-- like many of the other girls in the classroom, was unbelievably pale and the long silk-satin hair that ran down over his face was a dusky brown. His eyes were pinpointed on the tiled floor in front of him as though he was entranced by it, flashing from a honey-colored gold to a hazel gray.

The class started but I couldn't seem to pay attention, compared to him I felt like a washed-out flower. My brown-wavy hair and toffee colored eyes seemed in short comparison to the god beside me.

I sighed, wondering what was wrong with me, I already had a sweet gentle boyfriend, what more did I want?

It dawned on me suddenly as though I already had known the answer. It was so simple.

I wanted to be his friend.

And that was the truth.

I always wanted companionship when I was a younger child. I had always been so lonely. When school started I couldn't wait. Before that I felt so alone….

It seemed unbelievable that I could remember memories when I was five years old as vivid as though It had happened to today but that was my brain, sharp.

That's it! I want to be his friend because he reminds me of myself when I was younger, why couldn't I see that?

I marveled at the coincidence.

The boy had an air of gloominess and resentment as though he was trying to shut off everyone in his life, as though it had hurt too much.

The feeling of loneliness stuck in my brain, was that how he was feeling?

Over-filled sympathetic feelings washed over me.

He was tensed like a feline, his back arched, a mighty huntress, powerful.

I shivered violently but couldn't help but seem attracted to him. A light, tinkling to sensation entered my brain…probing…….puzzled I tried to shake it off.

After a few seconds of light-headiness, I managed to shake the feeling and a sudden sense of surprise overwhelmed me.

Weird

It just happened…yet…I couldn't explain…it just wasn't me..

Without meaning I caught the look of Edward eye's reflected in my own. For a minute they were stunned, reflected in my eyes and then the contact was over as he dropped his gaze once more.

A mystery…..he was a mystery that I wanted to figure out..