Hello to everybody!!! This is my first English fan fiction (I actually started to write one in Italian three days ago). I am writing this for two reason: one- I like to tell story, two- I need to improve my English.

So I will be happy if you help me to correct my grammar.

Gary:"Don't listen her! This is only a trap to wash your brains. Run right now if you want to live!"

You again! First on my blog, then to Efp (it's an Italian fan fiction site) and now here! Why do you keep following me?

Gary:" Cos I like to torment you!"

I give up. Stay. But do not interrupt me!

Gary:" In your dreams!"

Sigh...

Before Gary interrupt me, I was going to say

Gary:" That she is mentally sick."

That's it, you've cross the line!

Gary know what follow now. He become white of fear. The sound of pain started.

Click, click, click,...

All of once, four little cat aper in front of him.

Gary:" Not them again!"

Gary run away followed by the little cats (for the confused one, this little cute kitty's shit over Gary).

I still don't know how he took them of last time. Well,... before Gary interrupted me

Gary:"Aaaaaaarrrrrggggggghhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

grrrr, grrrrr,...

I wanted to say that I'm putting an survey on. Who do you like the most: Masaya, Ryou or Kisshu.

The Italian fans loves Kisshu and they are crazy for him,

Kisshu:" What can I do if I'm sexy."

for Ryou is no interest,

Ryou pretend to not be interest, but he's very jealous.

and they like go to hell before be whit Masaya, and kill him whit a machine gun.

Masaya:" What did I do wrong? The Tokyo girls love me."

Everybody:" Because they are stupid zombies, you moron!"

Masaya start's to cry.

So from now on I open the survey: WHO DO YOU LIKE THE MOST: Masaya, Ryou or Kisshu?

Gary (covered whit cat's shit) :"Can I be in the survey too? Please?"

Gary makes puppy eyes (which is very scarry, cos he is two meters tall and he's bold).

What's wrong whit you, are you mad?

Gary makes puppier puppy eyes (which is even scarier than before).

Fine. Who do you like the most: Masaya, Ryou, Kisshu or Gary?

"Can I be in the survey too?"

Who are you?

"I was just passing near. My name is Ben."

No.

Ben:"Why?"

You can do the disclaimer.

Ben:"Oki-doki smouki pouki."

Everybody look Ben thinking "Is he on drugs?"

Ben:" What?"

Nothing.

Ben:" Whatever. Here it goes... Anil13 doesn't own any character from Tokyo mew mew. Was I good?"

Yes, now get out.

Ben:"But..." tears filling his eyes.

OUT.

Ben:" You'll see, you'll see!"

Run away crying.

Good, and now I shall begin the story. Ready?

And now, the so long waited:

EP.1

Can it be worse than this? Yes!

"You broke up whit me? B-but why?" asked a very surprised Ichigo. When Masaya come to visit her she was very happy. Now she was very desperate.

"Ichigo... I wanted to say to you this before but I couldn't. You were very shocked about the mew stuff, the aliens, Deep Blue, that I didn't wanted to hurt you more. I waited a month, but I' can't hold it anymore!" say Masaya not looking at her.

"But w-why?" asked Ichigo again, now starting to cry.

"Your a wonderful, and beautiful girl Ichigo, but,..."

"But?"

"...Every time we start a conversation, you never answer to me. You just smile and act dizzy, you don't interact whit me, you..." Masaya lowered his eye to the ground.

"I'm what!" asked Ichigo stopping crying.

"Your... not... to... clever." said Masaya lowering his eyes more.

"Your saying that I'm stupid?!" asked angrily the red head girl, starting to cry again.

"Y-yes, well, not,... What I mean is that I meet this other girl, Mary-lu,...and she's really understanding me,...she is very nice..." say the boy still not looking at the girl.

"Mary-lu? You are dumping me for a swot. You're dumping me because I'm not smart enough for you?!" asked the cat-girl angry, whit tears filling her checks.

"I hope we can be still friends."

"Dumping me like a toy whit who you get tired for another?! Because I'm stupid, because I'm not interested anymore of your talk of saving the world every time we meet?!"

"Ichigo..."

"Do not to me Ichigo! You were treating me like your own possession! You are saying only now that you are brooking now whit me!"

"I'm sorry, I..."

"You're not sorry, you're a spoiled brat, who is going to smile tomorrow again like if it nothing happened!" cried Ichigo furious.

Masaya started to turn around.

"Not interesting conversation?! Did you ever ask me what do I want, what are my dreams?! Nooooooo. We always talk about you, and your education in England, your plans of saving the world! You never ask me how do I fell about that! You've already decided all by your self!"

The dark haired boy started to walk away.

"How did you like this conversation?! Was it interesting enough, or it's to stupid for you?!"

Masaya stop. For the first time in his life, he felt guilty. He didn't want to admit to him self that he's wrong. He began to walk again, whit the hands in his pocket.

"Yes, just go away! Go to your Mary-lu!"

But The boy did not turn around. He just continue to walk.

Ichigo was now crying on her knee, not worrying that all the people in the caffХ were starring at her.

It continue like this for few minutes. Ryou call for her:"The break is over Momomya! Back to work!"

"Oh, just live me along!"

"Closing time is near, and you have to clean the caffХ!"

Ichigo stood up, and started to walk toward the caffХ :"You're heartless Ryou!"

She tried to work but she couldn't. Fortunately it was closing time.

"Guys, I have something to tell you." said Zakuro when the caffХ was empty. Everybody turn toward her surprised. Zakuro never has to say something.

After they sat to the table she spoke:" This is hard for me, but you have to now. A week ago the doctors have diagnosed me with cancer."

All ayes in the caffХ were wide opened. Was Zakuro kidding? Zakuro never makes joke. She is always serious, like now.

"They say that I have about a month of life." and for the first time in her life she showed feelings. She had water eyes, and a very depressed expression.

Minto started to cry first. The other (except Keichiro and Ryou) joined her. It took a hour to calm the cries, and then another of talking, and another to calm everybody a little.

They were quiet already twenty minutes. A harsh knocking on the caffХ door interrupted the silence.

"Who could that be?" asked Ryou. He went to open the door. Out side it was dark, but he could recognize who were standing there.

"We have trouble." said Pai.

"Big trouble." reply Taruto.

"More than that." added Kisshu.

But what Ryou wasn't sure, what was standing behind them.It was moving, and it was talking. Many voices.

To be continued...

Ah, finally I finish it.

It' pretty late.

Soo what do you think?

But it doesn't stop here. Noooooooo. Is going to be much, much worse.

Gary:" You are the incarnation of evil!"

Wish to see it?

Gary:"Oh, look what time is it, I have to go!"

Kisshu:"Chicken."

Pleas comment, and correct my grammar errors.

Ciao!

Anil13!!!

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