Hi, im Tara and this is my fanfiction, so id love to hear all your thougts on it!

Chapter 1

My name is Elizabeth Sage Thorne and this is my story.

It all started 7 years ago. I was 8 years old and at a picnic with my family. We were all having a great time until my cousin Emily suggested we play hide and seek. I always win hide and seek. As Emily started to count to ten I quickly scaled a tree and studied everyone though the branches. Perfect. I could see them but they could not see me. I closed my eyes and waited. Knowing my family I'd be up here for a long time. After about 10 minutes I heard shouting. "DIE YOU MUGGLE FILTH! AVADA KEDAVRA! "I wonder what that means" I think to myself "I shouldn't go down there they are just trying to trick me, they always do stuff like that" again I heard screaming "AAAAAGGGHHHHHH!" "No" I think to myself "it's not real".

After another hour of complete silence I decide to descend from the tree. We will probably be leaving soon and they probably have already given up on looking for me. I climbed down the tree ready to announce that I had won but instead screamed in horror to the fact that my families were all laying dead in front of me. "NO NO IT'S NOT REAL! WAKE UP! YOU'RE NOT DEAD! YOU CAN'T BE DEAD! WAKE UP PLEASE! MOM! DAD! EMILY! AVA! AUNTIE MEAGHAN! PLEASE WAKE UP!" I screamed and cried until the police arrived.

A few hours later found me in a questioning room at the police station holding a cup of hot coco. Crying so much I didn't even notice as the police people entered the room. They sat down around me and asked me my name and my age. Sniffling a little bit I replied "my name is Elizabeth Sage Thorne and I'm 8 years old" "well Elizabeth we are just going to ask you a few questions all right?" said a pretty police woman with black hair and grey eyes. She had a British accent. "I'm Dorea Potter" said the lady again "and this is my husband Charles Potter" she said pointing at a man with black hair and blue eyes. "Are you ready to start the questions?" asked Charles. I nodded a yes. "Okay. What do you remember happening today?" he asked again. I took a sip of hot coco and replied "today my mom, dad, aunt, cousins and I went to our annual family picnic in the meadow near our house. We do this every year on July first as a Canada day celebration. My cousin Emily suggested we play hid and seek. My cousin Ava and I agreed and Emily started to count to ten. I climbed a tree and hid. Since Emily can't climb I knew I would win. After ten minute I heard people shouting. I thought my cousins were just trying to trick me into coming down. The shouting people said stuff like "muggle, and abrakedabra" I stayed in the tree. After an hour I knew that they had given up looking for me so I climbed down the tree and found my family dead" "please Mr. and Mrs. Potter my family can't be dead" I said through tears. "Please" and I broke down sobbing on the floor. "shh its ok. Darling it's ok. Your family is dead but I'm going to bring you somewhere safe ok" I could only nod my head. "Ok let's go"