So this is my first fanfiction and also my first time writing something that is not mine i only came up with one person so far and i'm not that good with writing conversations so if i somehow upload this plx tell me what i can improve on and this is for people who can deal with mature things so leave if you can deal with it and if i can think of more to add to this or you can come up with something that will be good please tell me so without anymore waiting on with the story.

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Harry Potter and all the others are owned by J. k. Rowling

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-chapter one-

The Boy Who Was Beaten

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It was a cold winter night in a small english community on the last road with the name Privet Drive stood the house of number 4 it was a house what looked like the others brown and black bricks and a black roofing with black framing with a black door the door that Harry J. Potter could only see the heavenly light what was so inviting to him but could never reach before being seen by his aunt Petunia and uncle Vernon and maybe sometimes his cousin Dudley as they were looking at him as if they wanted him dead but if he was ever lucky he would be seen by the angle of the family of devils his cousin Louise who would always protect him and nurse him back to health after he was beaten in an unused room what was only a torture chambers to him. This was where he was currently being held by his wrists all he could see was red was black what he know was his own blood from past beatings from Vernon, Dudley and Petunia they all had a corner where they would take to him to do they own favorite style of beatings for him beings a "freak" and that they would all be happy when his "freakiness" was out of him each corner was different Vernon and and X board what he made Harry make and even put restraints on, Dudley's was nearly the same but a cross that was also made by him along with the restraints on because Dudley and Vernon both loved sports despite being the size of a walrus. Petunia's torture corner was more doctor like with an operating table and acids and whips. Then all of a sudden a fent slamming noise as Harry slowly looked to the door where he heard the noise come from there stood all the devils that was his aunt and uncle along with there little "dudleykins" as he saw them with their treasure-cat grins as they all walked in on their high horses Harry knew that someday he would get his revenge but for now all he did was gaze downwards as Vernon released him from his restrains then dragged him over to his corner all the while he could hear Louise banging on her door where she was locked in so she couldn't interrupted Harry's "rehabilitation session for his freakiness" as they always put it when Harry or Louise was near soon after he the banging stopped. Louise was sobbing for her cousin the only person from her family she could ever love but she had no idea what always compelled her to always help him she had no idea why she loved him more than the people who were meant to love her the most her family her father Vernon who she thought was venomous to her mother Petunia and her brother Dudley who she nicknamed dumbley when she was trying to talk sweetly to Harry when she was nursing him back to proper health so he wouldn't die when all of a sudden BANG! Her door blow up right in front of her and there she saw was Harry all bloodied, blood trickling down his face from his hairline and his scare and all of a sudden she was in a she was in a forest she curiously look around her she had no idea where she was or how she got where she is but all she knew was she was small or the forest was gigantic soon she started to move around but when she looked down she couldn't, so she tried to look behind her and she saw a tall. A snake's tall behind her so she ran, ran as fast as she could or so she thought she was when she reached a river she saw what she was. She was a black Long nosed vine snake she yelled in a hiss like way "WHAT THE FUCK HAPPEND TO ME" then it all went white. When the whiteness started to fade she saw Harry just Harry looking down.

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sorry for the short first chapter but it is what i could come up with i have a few ideas for the second chapter what should hopefully be longer so see you next time and thanks for reading have a good day or evening or night so until next time and if you leave a mean review i don't care if you don't like the story too bad leave if you don't like the shortness im sorry and if you not reading Mon Fleur, Mon Ange, Mon tout go read it and show the writer some love he came up with a name for Louise so see you next time if your still reading