I gave my love away


I remember when we first met... it was amazing, I was small, too young to remember but I know, deep inside my heart it was an incredible moment. That day, October 28th 9:20pm, I was born.


Being a brand new baby The first person I saw was my Mother, she held me close, comforted me. She told me I was her inspiration, her soulmate. From that day on we were bonded forever. I'll always have a special place for her in my heart.

Soon after I was bathed, and swaddled. Some familliar voices came to see me.

a small boy about 14 years of age, approached me, He looked at me, he had such brilliant lavender locks, blue eyes, bright blue eyes that never seemed to end, we stared into eachother's eyes for what seemed like forever. Once he spoke I recognised him.

" Shes really pretty."

His gaze never left mine, I was so facinated with those eyes. His eyes,

" Can I hold her? " He sounded so eager.

My mother wrapped me up tightly, put me in his arms, from that moment I'd say we were ment to be, I rememberd his voice, his voice always sounded so sincere, so real. AND here he is, the person that voice belonged to, I finally got to meet him. I got to learn that there was a face behind the voice, and it was beautiful.

That was the day I gave my love away.


sorry the first chapter was so short, I wanted to end it quickly so I could get some info on whether I should continue or not.

This is my first story in a LONG time. I was registered in another name on AND I sucked.

I need to know if I still suck at writing, I really like to write, I just think sometimes I get started on the wrong foot.

REVIEW please, I dont care if I get flames, I just wanted to get my idea out there.