THIS IS NOT A YAOI AND WILL NOT TURN INTO A YAOI BOT EVERYONE WILL TURN INTO CLOSER FREINDS

OKAY THIS IS MY FIRST STORY EVER I HOPE YOU LIKE IT I JUST HAD ALOT OF IDEAS RUNNING AROUND IN MY HEAD AND I HOPE YOU ALL LIKE IT SO NARUTO WILL PROBABLY TURN INTO A TOTAL BAD-ASS WITH POWER...OK ONTO THE STORY...

DISCLAIMER-I DO NOT OWN NARUTO!

THEY OWN NARUTO

First off is the Manga parts - first is the creator of the Manga, Masashi Kishimoto, as he also has a cut of the anime as well; then there is Shueisha (which is the Publisher of the Manga) and Viz Media (which is the English Publisher)

Then there is the Anime parts - first is the director of the Anime, Hayato Date, then there is the Studio which is Studio Pierrot, the English Licensor is Viz Media.


This is starting during the sasuke retrieval arc


Chapter 1.

"CHIDORI!"

"RASENGAN!"

These two words hung from the Valley of The End, resulting in an explosion horrible magnitude of a . After a minute or so blood curdling screams echoed through out the valley making the Legendary Sharigan Kakashi flinch.

"Please Don't Die Naruto I'm coming." Kakashi thought franticly as he jumped from tree to tree

Naruto spat up another ounce of blood as he tried to hold the wound near his neck that Sasuke had inflicted upon him by his Chidori.

"Am…. I …going t..to die…here?." Naruto thought weakly. Meanwhile Sasuke was howling in pain as he held what was left of his right arm after the Rasengan hit him.

"Y..you idiot, l..lo..look at w..hat you did to m..me" Sasuke whimpered. Naruto just stared as his best friend no brother dies befor his eyes.

"I..I'm sorry.. Sa.. Sakura.." Were Naruto's last thought's before he laid his down and forever left the land of the living or so he thought.

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(With Shikamaru)

"Time to die you shit garbage!" The red head of the Sound Five spat as she continued to get out of out of Shikamaru's 'Kagemane no jutsu'ready to stab him with a kunai

"This is so troublesome, I'm running out of chakra and stamina. Unless someone comes to save my ass I'm dead" Then he felt it, the cold blade of a kunai in his throat, Shikamaru spat up a large amount of blood and fell to the ground,as death was coming to grab him.

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(With Chouji)

"Heh I.. I actually did it heh heh." Choji whispered as he walked away from the corpse of Jirobo holding stomach in pain.

"Ahhhh it hurts so bad!" Choji shouted as he tried to withstand the pain from his chakra depletion, suddenly he felt a sharp pain coming from his back, he moved his hand around and pulled out a kunai knife from his back, he turned around to see Jirobo crouching on the ground, spitting up blood.

"If.. if I'm g..going to di.. die you're coming with me…." Jirobo finished as he fell to the ground, dead. Choji fell to the ground as well and tried to hold the wound on his back but it was useless he was too tired to move.

"I..I'm sorry Sh..Shika..maru….. I cou-" Choji could'nt finish his statement as dath took him

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Kiba sighed as he leaned up against a tree to try and catch his breath.

"That's was close Akamaru, we we managed to get away from them." Kiba said referring to the sound five members Sakon and Ukon.

"Did you now." a voice said, Kiba turned around and saw the face of Sakon who was wearing his jacket.

"Thanks for the jacket , I guess that nose of yours didn't sense me because you're too familiar with your own scent. I'm bored of you,you can die now." Sakon said as he pulled out a kunai and prepared to stab kiba in the head,but he stopped, he got an twisted,disgusting smile and threw the kunai at Akamaru.

"NO!" Kiba shouted as he tried to get up but the wound he gave him self to get Ukon out of his body stopped him from moving. Kiba closed his eyes as he heard the sound of metal piercing flesh and a of pained bark. He opened his eyes and saw Akamaru, dead, tears started to fall from Kiba's eyes as he looked at his best friend and partner. Sakon walked over to Akamaru and recovered his kunai he then spat on Akamaru, enraging Kiba.

"YOU..YOU ASSHOLE I'LL KILL YOU!" Kiba shouted.

"Mmmhmm,DIE!" Sakon threw the kunai at Kiba embedding it in his head, killing him instantly.

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In the forest where the battles of the Sound Five and the Konoha retrieval ninja were fighting a bald man wearing the usual shinigami uniform and his zanpakuto tied to his belt was walking down a path,He was Ikkaku Madarame 3rd seat of the 11th Division of Soul Society, the division was on a hollow hunt near Konoha

"Two low level hollows all I've been able to find." Ikkaku said he looked up and saw a boy with white eyes, a tan shirt, brownish shorts, long brown hair and a chain attached to his chest.

"Ah at least there's something to do here ." Ikkaku said with a sigh as he walked up to the boy.'Not the most fun thing to do though'

"Who are you!?" The boy shouted

"Relax kid I'm here to help if that's what you call it, how long have you been dead?"

"A couple minuets,probally."

"Who or what killed you?"

"Him." Neji said as hi motioned for him towards the Dead body of Kidomaru and his ghost.

"I'm going to kill you, you brat!" Kidomaru shouted

"Oh really i was under the impression that we were both dead already,so tell me how do you plan to kill a already dead ghost"Said Neji And with that comment all Kiddomaru could manage was a dumb sounding "Oh."

"What's your two names?" Ikkaku asked.

"Neji Hyuga."

"Kidomaru."

"Hmmm they both have a strong reiatsu for new soul's I would guessed a couple hundred years." Ikkaku thought

"Well Neji, Kidomaru my name is Ikkaku Madarame and I am a shinigami and 3rd seat of the 11th division of Soul Society. Soul Society is what you know as Heaven, but before I send you there I will explain a few things." So Ikkaku began to explain hollows, wholes, the duty's of a shingami, reiatsu, the other divisions and zanpakuto.

"Now I will send you two to the Seireitei where you will be sent to the Shinigami academy and trained to be a shinigami." Ikkaku said as he raised his zanpakuto and hit Neji on the fore head with the butt of his sword sending Neji to Soul Society in a flash of blue light and Kidomaru right after him.

"Well I guess this trip wasn't a total waste. I wonder where Yumichika is?" Ikkaku said,Then almost as if planned Yumichika appeared right beside him looking kind of disgusted.

"What's wrong with you?" Ikkaku asked

"I just sent this really gross boy to Soul Society,He had the most disgusting hair cut, these Caterpillars for eye brows, the creepiest outfit and the buggiest eyes I have ever seen." Yumichika shuddered.

"What was his name?"

" 'Rock Lee' I think."

"What killed him?" Ikkaku asked.

"This teen who could use his bones as weapons. I sent him to Seiretei as well, he died of some type of illness right after he killed Lee, I think he said his name was Kimimaro Kaguya" Yumichika said.

"Hmmmm interesting, well let's go see if we can find some hollows I'm bored." Ikkaku said as he and his life long friend walked off hoping for a good fight.

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"Hey dobe you finally up"Sasuke said as he saw Naruto stir

"Oh,well this is quite interesting,truly unexpected" Naruto said unusually calm as he stared at his own corpse which was quite creepy. Noticing the chain on his chest for the first time Naruto started tugging at it.

"So since we died you are gonna drop your mask of a loud,annoying,weak,Sakura fanboy,idiot though that's good for me you probably would've beaten me quite quickly if you didn't wear it"said Sasuke as he also started to tug at his chain

"Oh yeah,dobe what happened to your appearance" He said as He just got his first real good look at Naruto since they died and,Naruto no longer appeared to be a good 6 inches shorter than her he now looked only 1 or 2 inches shorter than him,he wore a forest green hoodie with some black cargo pants with green in-lines,along with some blue ninja sandals he also had very little skin showing even though it was quite hot outside(which Sasuke noted as weird)he also had on some green finger-less gloves,his hair was now also longer it was tied in a ponytail alot like jiraiya's except Naruto's stopped 2 or 3 inches above his but and the last 2 or 3 inches of his hair was blood red just like Gaara's but Naruto's red hair seemed deeper more bright like blood and his face seemed more angular and he was more pale the exact same skin color as his father ,his eyes also narrowed the same wayas the yondaime's also had 3 piercing in his left ear so all in all he looked just like a mini-yondaime with red ends longer hair and 3 piercings in his left ear.

Sasuke finally got used to Naruto's true 's family used to be one of the council families meaning he could see pictures of the Yondaime which few people could do and all he could do was just sit list the before unnoticed ways they actually look alike but before he could say any thing he was cut off by Naruto noticing he was talking

"-And are you sasuke gonna drop your mask of a quiet,annoying,brooding,avenger and as for my appearance it went with my mask also sasuke could you stop staring at me know i'm beautiful but i'm not gay."said Naruto as he started tuggin' his chain again

Sasuke scoffed at the comment while closing sitting down saying "Ha,I'm not gay."

"I wouldn't do that if I were you." Came the voice of a very cheerful sounding girl,probably talking about tugging on the train,so he took her advice and stopped tuggin' at his chain not knowing what else to do.

Naruto looked up to see a little girl with bubble gum pink hair, wearing a white kosode, a black kimono and hakama, a white obi sash and a sword that she was carrying by a small strap on the kinda reminded him of Sakura and he scowled at the thought.

This earned a 'hmmm' from Naruto and Sasuke

"Who are you"said Naruto

"Hehehe, my name is Yachiru Kusajishi and I'm a shingami, Vice-captain of the 11th squad of Soul Society and president of the Shinigami Women's Association!"

"Huh?" Naruto muttered dumbly.

"Hehe I'm a…." 'ring, ring' "Oops hold on a sec please." Yachiru said as she started rummaging through her out fit.

"Ahhhhhhhh where is it!" Yachiru said, franticly trying to find whatever it was she was looking for.

"Aha, here it is" she said as she put some thing next to her ear."Hello….. oh hi Ken-chan…. We're leaving?... Ok I'll be there in a minute, bye Ken-chan!" She then moved the thing away from her ear and put it back in too her out fit.

"I have to go but I'll see you later." Yachiru said, she then disappeared in the blink of an eye and reappeared in front of Naruto and hit him on the head with her sword,And she did the same to a shocked sasuke

"Hey what was that fo…" Naruto stopped as the ground around him started flashing blue and he began to sink in to the ground.

"Bye, bye " Yachiru waved until Naruto was gone. When Naruto awoke the first thing that he saw was that he was now in a big white room and his friends Shikamaru, Kiba, Choji, Rock Lee and Neji in it , there were also some who weren't his friend's meaning Jirobo, Kimimaro and Kidomaru who also were wearing white robes.

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"What. Did you guys die too?" Naruto asked there shocked looks at his new clothes and appearance

"Yep, we all did I guess." Choji said,the first to get over the shock

"Troublesome."muttered shikamaru

"YOSH! My cool and youthful rival is here with me in the after life also, this is most awesome!" Lee shouted as if they hadn't just died a minute ago

"Lee please calm down,please." Neji said pleading calmly

"Does anyone know where we are." Naruto asked.

"Didn't the shinigami that sent you here tell you?Also what happened to your appearance" Kiba asked.

"You mean the one that brought me and Sasuke here, she said is that her name was Yachiru Kusajishi, that she was a shinigami, that she was the vice-captain of the 11th squad whatever that is and that she was the president of the Shinigami Women's Association, now where are we?"Sauke nodded as if confirming what he said was true while not answering Kiba's question

"We're in Soul Society, It' heaven from I've heard, we've been here for a couple of minutes and the guy that sent me here said to wait for some one to come and pick us up. He said his name was Makizo Aramaki" Shikamaru said.

"Who brought you here guys?" Naruto asked.

"The captain of squad eleven" Kiba shuddered "Man that guy is creepy yet cool at the same time, he said his name is Kenpachi Zaraki."

"Kidomaru and I were sent here by a man named Ikkaku Madarame who is the 3rd seat of the 11th division." Neji said

"Kimimaro and I were sent here by the youthful 5th seat of the 11th division of Soul Society, Yumichika Ayasegawa!" Lee shouted.

"Me and Jirobo were sent by a guy named Tetsuzaemon Iba he says that he is the 10th seat in the 11th squad." Choji said.

They were about to say more but the doors to the room they were in opened to reveal a man wearing the usual shinigami garb only he had cut the sleeve's off, he wore a lot of wrap around his mouth and his sword was tied to his back.

"Hello my name is Zabuza Momochi 4th seat of squad eleven and I am here to escort you through the Seiretei and bring you to the Shinigami academy where you will be trained to be shinigami." Zabuza sounded like he had done this a thousand times and was getting tired of it, he looked around and examined every person until he landed on Naruto And Sasuke.

"What the hell killed you two kid!" Zabuza asked/shouted.

"I was killed by Sasuke." Naruto said sadly.

"And I was killed by Naruto"Sasuke said just as sadly

"Really? Well that's weird, anyway come on lets go." Zabuza said as he left the room with the nine new shinigami hopefuls right behind him.