It was a bright sunny Friday morning, Jake and Chance were working on one of a
billion cars, when something caught Jake's eye. It was Caroline. Caroline was the
most beautiful cat in the whole town, thought Jake. He would do anything to go on a
date with her. Jake finally got up enough courage to go ask "can I talk to you for a
second?". "Uhh, sure I guess" said Caroline. Jake said "well, you see I have been
wondering, umm if you uhh ya see, ... will you go out on a date with me". "Yeah, sure
how about tomorrow night at 7" Caroline said happily. "Sounds great", Jake said in
the most cheerfull voice he has ever had. Saturday night couldn't have come any
slower, Jake was ready to go at 3:30pm. He sat down and watched a little bit of TV
and took a little cat-nap. When he woke up it was 6:45pm. "OH MY GOD!, I'M ALMOST
LATE" Jake said. He ran out, got his coat and sped off at lightning speed to make it to
Caroline's house in time. He knocked on the door, his hands shaking like he had
the chills. Caroline opened the door, and she was wearing the most beautiful blue
satan dress, with black high heal shoes. "Ready to go, my dear" Jake said. "Yeah, I
can't wait to see where we're going" Caroline said. Their arms locked as he led her
to his car. They drove to a nearby restaurant called The Cats Meow, a very nice
french restaurant Chance told him about. They sat down and talked for about two
hours just about home-life, school, romance, just the mushy stuff you see in all of
the movies. When the night ended, they gave each other one last kiss for the night,
swaring they would see each other soon. Jake glanced at his watch, 1:30am. When
he got home he fell right to sleep, dreaming about the time him and Caroline will
be able to meet again.
the end
So, this is my first Fiction, what did you think.
billion cars, when something caught Jake's eye. It was Caroline. Caroline was the
most beautiful cat in the whole town, thought Jake. He would do anything to go on a
date with her. Jake finally got up enough courage to go ask "can I talk to you for a
second?". "Uhh, sure I guess" said Caroline. Jake said "well, you see I have been
wondering, umm if you uhh ya see, ... will you go out on a date with me". "Yeah, sure
how about tomorrow night at 7" Caroline said happily. "Sounds great", Jake said in
the most cheerfull voice he has ever had. Saturday night couldn't have come any
slower, Jake was ready to go at 3:30pm. He sat down and watched a little bit of TV
and took a little cat-nap. When he woke up it was 6:45pm. "OH MY GOD!, I'M ALMOST
LATE" Jake said. He ran out, got his coat and sped off at lightning speed to make it to
Caroline's house in time. He knocked on the door, his hands shaking like he had
the chills. Caroline opened the door, and she was wearing the most beautiful blue
satan dress, with black high heal shoes. "Ready to go, my dear" Jake said. "Yeah, I
can't wait to see where we're going" Caroline said. Their arms locked as he led her
to his car. They drove to a nearby restaurant called The Cats Meow, a very nice
french restaurant Chance told him about. They sat down and talked for about two
hours just about home-life, school, romance, just the mushy stuff you see in all of
the movies. When the night ended, they gave each other one last kiss for the night,
swaring they would see each other soon. Jake glanced at his watch, 1:30am. When
he got home he fell right to sleep, dreaming about the time him and Caroline will
be able to meet again.
the end
So, this is my first Fiction, what did you think.
