Hey guys this is my first fan fic ever! Its preseries and involves Neal's capture, if you could, please pay close attention and tell me all of my mistakes in a review. Thanks.
"Neal, we're out of milk," yelled Mozzie from kitchen.
Me, Kate, andMozzie had just finished a so-so heist, and were sleeping in some crappy hotel in Cleveland.
I mean I love the guy he's my best friend, but come on he never gave me Kate and I our own room.
I groaned, unhappily awoken by my best friend.
I stretched my muscles out, weary and soar.
Rolling over I came face to face with Kate, leaning in, and waiting for a morning kiss.
"You should probably go buy some more milk babe." She murmured. "I'd like at least 1 real breakfast, before you drag me off on the run again."
I instantly felt regret. Was Kate unhappy with our life? Did she want something I couldn't give her?
But Kate me 1 of her 1st class grins and kissed me on the cheek, letting me know all was well.
With a sigh I heaved myself up into sitting position, running my fingers through my hair.
"Neeeaaaalllll." Mozzie's whiny voice caught my attention again, and I slid back down, resting my head on a pillow.
"Go get the god damn milk yourself Mozzie!" I finnaly screamed, when I heard Mozzie's footsteps coming my way.
I was totally exhausted from last night's heist, and the last thing I needed was to go out into the public eye with a woozy mind.
"I should and I could, but it's not my house, and there-for not my problem." He said leaning up against my bed frame, looking down at me.
"Yet we're out of milk." I mumbled rolling out of bed. I gave a mumbled "fine." any ways and grabbed a fresh set of clothes.
Our hotel room wasn't really all that shabby I observed, as climbed into the shower. I was just to tense to appreciate it.
But the cool water brought my senses back to life and soon I was ready to go, my mind alert and running once again.
I strolled out of the bathroom, through the bedroom, and into the kitchen were Kate was waiting for me.
"Thanks babe." She said, as I walked past her.
"No problem." I murmured stopping and grabbing her waist and pulling her close to me.
Sometimes Kate and I take a moment and just, ya know, stare into each others eyes. Kind of lame, we know, but we enjoyed our movie moments.
And we were having one of those moments until Mozzie walked right between us and told me with his mouth full to "Get 2% this time."
I swear that guy has no romance in him at all.
"Yeah, Yeah, Yeah." I said pushing him away, and giving Kate a little peck on the cheek.
"I'll see you guys in 5." I promised, and headed for the door.
I heard the door click and gave a smug smile, as I lifted Mozzie's wallet from my pocket.
I checked it's contents as I headed down the hall, fingering the two 20's.
A little chuckle escaped my lips as I heard Mozzie swear behind me.
Picking up speed jogging down the hall, I slid into a closing elevator, and then melted into bust streets of the city.
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