Chapter 1- Who's who.

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Character 1 – Danni Longstride.

It's been 12hours 37minuites and 19days since I last saw daylight. It's driving me insane. Its cramped inside this tiny little dog cage. I don't belong here, I belong on the streets, where I've always been. It was my 12th birthday 17 days ago, no one knew, except me of course, I was being experimented on, on my own birthday. My head still really hurts, it's not pounding, it just hurts. As though my head is no longer my own. I no longer cower from the Erasers, I just ignore them and hope they don't hurt me, but the white coats, they still petrify me, they won't stop looking over to me. Sometimes I think they are thinking of killing me, but at the moment I think they would be doing me a favour. My name is Danni Longstride, and this "School" is my living nightmare.

Character 2 – Charlotte Maison.

It's been sometime since I last felt someone touch my cowing skin. But I guess, you can't say I'm complaining, 3 years ago I was murdered by Hades, he sent 3 of his hell hounds after me when I stole something that belonged to him, I guess you can say it was my fault though. The only thing was, was one of his hounds was cursed by Hades' wife after he bite one of her beloved boyfriends, so thanks to her, I have a permanently scarred arm and shoulder, I can tell you now the arm hurts more than the scratch on my left shoulder, my right arm is mangled but with a layer of skin over the top, it doesn't look too bad, I hope. These stupid cages are making me feel as though I am all alone, despite the fact there are 2 other people in here. When the little boy came, he was all full of fight, he would not give up. That was until one of the white coats took him away for experiments 17days ago, poor boy he must only be what 11 to 12. His long brown hair covered his dog like ears, he was no Eraser but he didn't look far off, he must of been some kind of German Shepard by the looks of it. No one belongs here, especially little 12 year old boys. 7 days ago, a young girl with long green hair tied up with 2 blue bows came in. She could of only been what 13, they must have already experimented on her, as her large avian wings looked as though they were covered in blood when she was first thrown into her cage and left just like the rest of us. My name is Charlotte Maison; I am a 15year old ghost, and I will do anything to get out of here.

Character 3 - Mysha

The lab coats must have been having a day off. It was not normal for them to leave for such a long time, normally someone would come in every 10/20 minutes but today they had not come in for at least 4 hours. The poor girl beside me looks as though she has been dead for a while, she looks lifeless but yet somehow still alive, a large wound plastered her right arm, must have been excruciatingly painful, but it had started to heal over, I could see a thin layer of skin that covered her ghastly wound. The boy across from me reminded me of the outside world for some weird reason, his eyes are slowly losing their sparkle. He must feel so alone. My name is Mysha, and I am the most recent experiment in this hell hole.

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