Please write a review! : D This is my first chapter of my first fanfiction on here so please review! Title is rated K but content I would rate as T (teen) since it has some violence and character death. I do not own any of these characters besides Jayla Greenleaf, I made her up : D This is the Battle of Helm's deep gone into version and story

Another immortal life

By: LegolasD

Chapter 1
Jayla greives

Orcs were falling around the Elf and Ranger. Legolas stuck two of his white knives into two orcs and flung around shooting another orc coming for the ranger. The Elf gleamed with pride as an orc fell to his leather boots. He began to run, faster and faster, slaying orcs as he went. Aragorn watched the blonde elf go before turing to slay some more orcs.

"Thirty-three already Gimli!" the elf called.

"Thirty-three! I am in twenty-four. You are a very lithe warrior Legolas, I do not doupt you will loose this kill count, lad"

"Don't question yourself Gimli, your just short is all!"

The dwarf snarled and threw his axe at Legolas who grabbed it and killed the orc behind him before chucking it back at Gimli.
"Thirty-four!" he laughed. Gimli's eyes widened as a large hand grasped the Elf's neck. The hand belonged to the captain or general of the orcs. He was big, much bigger than Legolas and much stronger too. The orc brought him onto a rock and raised the young prince. The rest of his army crushed behind him making the battle stop, all eyes were on the monster orc.
"Legolas, Prince of Mirkwood!" he bellowed. Aragorn looked at the Elf, he was grabbing the orcs hand and struggling for air.

There was a howl of a dying orc and one of orcs in the first row fell. A young she-elf ran over him, her eyes were blue as a bluebird but her hair was black as a jay which was highly rare for a Elf. She managed to kill twelve orcs by herself and stood before the orc.

"Jayla Greenleaf? I thought you were dead!" the orc snarled. Jayla Greenleaf? That must mean she's Legolas's sister! Aragorn shook the thought from his head.
"Jayla, get out of here!" Legolas coughed and gasped for air.
"No, I want you safe!" she screeched back. Aragorn was amazed by her bravery. The orc mumbled something in orcish and two large orcs grabbed Jayla and the orc holding Legolas put a poisoned dagger to his heart. Jayla began to scream. She kicked and fought, her wails echoing through the battlefield. Aragorn felt pity for the two elves and suddenly he saw it, the way their eyes met, when Legolas's eyes clouded from pain to love as he looked at his sister. Tears rolled wildly down her face.

"Let him go! Stop! Please!" she wailed. The orc shoved the dagger into his chest making Legolas throw back his head and gasp with pain. The orc snarled with laughter twisting the blade and pushing it deeper. He dropped the prince making his head cut deeply from the rock. The orcs were gone in a second and Jayla was left on her knees, crying and wailing. Aragorn stared in disbelieve. The man went to Jayla and hugged her close, he didn't know her but he sensed that no harm crossed Jayla's mind. As he wrapped his arms around the Elf, he looked over towards Legolas. He was still, too still

Oooh! So as you can see Jayla is made up but she is amazing XD! Chapter 2 on it's way and write reviews!