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Another boring day at high school. When you live forever what can you live for?
I concentrated on the cracks in the wall trying to block out all the immature thought swarming in my head. Only four thoughts did I block out due to respect rather than disgust- those of my siblings- Alice, Jasper, Rosalie and Emmett. Fork's youth were more excited than normal. Apparently at the arrival of a new girl. Disgusted at their enthusiasm I started reciting Shakespeare in my head.
Suddenly I was taken into Alice's vision. I was in my meadow and surrounded by flowers but there was someone else with me! A dim figure who was sitting peacefully hugging her knees to her chest. The bell for biology snapped me out of the vision. I hurried gracefully but slightly faster than normal human speed, eager to finish school and ask Alice what that was about. I was one of the first ones in class and soon followed by the new girl. She tripped over the carpet stumbled over someone's foot but finally fell into the only empty seat- the one next to me.
Today we had to recognize between the different processes of mitosis. We were handed some slides and a microscope and had to work as partners. Trying to be chivalrous I pushed the microscope near her and finally got a chance to notice her.
She had skin that was as white as mine and looked just as impenetrable. Her heart was thrumming as fast as a humming bird – quite unusual for a human. Her eyes were as golden as mine. Strangely the sound of her blood was hidden under many layers of skin. She was too extraordinary to be a human but her heart and blood proved that she was obviously not a vampire like me. She passed me the microscope and her hand touched mine. It was not warm like a human's should be but instead the same temperature as a vampire's! Who and what was this creature beside me? The strangest part was hard as I may try I could not hear her thoughts. It was almost as if she was internally silent. Never had I encountered one like this. In my coven it was only Carlisle who would have even heard of a rare thing like this.
I was over come with curiosity. I asked Mr. Banner if I could be excuse and rushed down the corridor at a speed faster than humanly possible. I didn't bother to drive home knowing that I could run faster than my car could move. Within seconds I reached my house and almost took of the door trying to get inside. As soon as Carlisle and Esme saw my face their thoughts were in sync worrying about me.
Did he reveal his self to the world?
Was he not able to stop his thirst and succumb to our temptation for human blood?
Quickly I dismissed their thoughts and lead them to our dining room which served as a conference room as we didn't eat. Carlisle sat the head of the table with Esme and me on either side of him. We waited patiently for the rest of our family to join us and then I brought up the topic.
Their first reaction was shock, which later transformed into disbelief as I described her- porcelain skin, yellow eyes, drumming heart and all. Seeing my expression they could see I was not joking and they began racking their brains for reasonable explanations.
Werewolf?
Half bitten human?
Human in the process of becoming a vampire? But unreasonably calm!
A third kind of mythical creature come to life?
Carlisle's thought was the most unique and striking as so many other times.
Could she be a …
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