This is my first fanfic so please be nice. I would appreciate any reviews or PM you give concerning this story.
Chapter 1: Transformation
Cynder's large eyes blinked once as she looked up at the large purple dragon.
"yes, you would be perfect for what I have planned for you."
The dragon turned its head and Cynder followed his gaze to a strange creature. It stood on two legs and instead of hard scales, it had soft fur. It had two limbs that came out of its body near its head, one of which held a stick.
"Gaul, leave us."
The fur-covered creature bowed and replied, "yes Master."
Once the door shut, the big dragon turned back to her.
"Right now, you are not strong enough to lead my men. But I will make you stronger, it may hurt slightly but it will be worth it.
She didn't understand much of what was going on, she was only a hatchling. The purple dragon opened his maw and a black cloud spread from it. Cynder involuntarily raised a wing in protection. The cloud enveloped her and suddenly her scales started to feel like they were burning. She writhed on the ground as her body started growing, her tail grew longer and thicker, her wings spread out further. During the whole time, Cynder was in pain at this unnatural thing.
Finally, the black cloud dispersed. The purple dragon grinned down at her.
"This will do for now, my puppet."
Two fur-covered creatures entered the room.
"Take her to one of the rooms."
The two creatures stopped either side of her and pulled at her.
Cynder didn't move.
She looked at the purple dragon who had turned away from her. Something hit her from behind and jolted her. Cynder spun around and saw the two fur-covered creature holding strange poles which gave off lightning. They poked her again with it and she obediently followed them as they dragged her down into the dungeons.
I know this is a very short chapter but I just wanted to see if people would like to read a story like this or if I'm just going to be wasting my time. If you want to read more of this story then a review is a good way of telling me or you could just PM me. If you follow or favourite this story then I'll take that as a 'want to read more' sign. I'll hopefully see you in the next chapter.
