Hi, this is my second fic after the flop DBZ fic I wrote 2 years ago. I will be consistent with this one, but I haven't written or gotten a solid storyline for this yet, so bare with me. This will have romance probably, that's what I'm aiming for. It will probably happen in the first chapter, and go strong from there. I have already picked out who the girl is. You will be able to gather when all this stuff takes place later on. I won't leave it out, but it might be next chapter before I say.
"…" - Talking
'…' - Thinking
Italics - Flashback
Some Changes
Prologue
~~*@*~~
"Wow, so much has changed." he thought as he lounged on his moderately comfortable couch, in his sparsely decorated living room.
He thought back to the night in which his life was changed forever.
~~FLASHBACK~~
Walking outside into his backyard, Alex Davis, age 17, found himself looking at the stars once again.
"Can't get any worse than this, I don't know why I just don't get it over with… huh?" he glanced up to the starry night sky, noticing something out of the corner of his eye.
A blindingly bright light was streaking across the sky. It was going at a perfectly horizontal angle, when all of the sudden it swerved, heading in his direction.
"Uh, uh…" his voice trailed as the bright light got ominously brighter as the extremely confused boy stood, looking on, as it got closer by the second. It was now he could see that the light was half from fire, and some from another source.
A Shrieking squawk, that sounded strangely hurt, erupted from the now blue fireball as the front of this comet-like blaze of fire took on the appearance of a bird kind of creature, still bathed in translucent blue flames. But Alex didn't have any time to think about that as the strange phenomenon finally reached him.
A scream from Alex and the monster was heard far and wide as 'it' collided with the boy. As soon as it hit, the fire consumed him, but oddly enough, didn't kill him. It was almost as if the creature had planed this, as if it had no other choice, and it needed Alex for something. It was all over in a second as the flames disappeared. No pain accompanied him as he fell backwards to the ground from a huge wave of light-headedness and quizziness.
His whole body felt tingly and uncomfortable… foreign. He heard voices and footsteps coming towards him as he lie on the ground.
He tried to look around, but his body wouldn't obey.
'Don't move, they will help us…'
His body shivered from the cold night air, as it was still in the part of spring where cold nights were common. But then he felt a warmness flow through him as his shaking stopped. A warmness that relaxed him and made him feel calm.
Finally, he heard the footsteps stop, right next to him.
"Well, he's alive…" he heard a woman say, panting lightly.
"Didn't think a kid like this could take the power of the Phoenix. But it's a good thing we were able to take out those cursed mist-nin. Amazing that the hidden mist village was even able to hurt it, and bad enough for this to happen at that!" The voice he heard then was deep and it sounded as if he had something in his mouth.
Alex's vision was blurry, so the forms he saw were not clear. He couldn't think clearly, and he became very confused. So he just lie there, waiting for something to happen. What could he do anyway?
"Well, let's take him back, Gai, you carry him." He heard a mellow voiced man say. It was the last this Alex heard as the nauseous feeling overtook him and drove him into unconsciousness.
~~*@*~~
Ok? Bad? I don't accept harsh flames, only constructive criticism. I really have no self-esteem, so getting many bad reviews might halt this story, sry, just the way I am. I hope you all liked this; I thought my other story was beyond horrible, but some ppl reviewed it, saying it was good. Not that you have bad taste or anything, just the self-esteem thing, you know.
The next chapter will be about what happens to our hero (lol) in Konoha, if you haven't figured who those other guys are yet. I won't go into full detail about every little bump on his ride to the village, but I will give enough background on his entry into the Leaf, and his first little while there. This story, BTW, does not take anything away from the original story of Naruto. Everything happens exactly like in the Manga/Anime, so Naruto is still the host for the Kyuubi, and he's still better than Sasuke, even though no one knows it. My fav character, Rock Lee, will play a big part in this probably, if things go according to my half laid-out plan. I probably won't include parts for all the characters, cause it's a lot to keep up with, but hopefully, I can fit a few cameos in there. Til next time!
"…" - Talking
'…' - Thinking
Italics - Flashback
Some Changes
Prologue
~~*@*~~
"Wow, so much has changed." he thought as he lounged on his moderately comfortable couch, in his sparsely decorated living room.
He thought back to the night in which his life was changed forever.
~~FLASHBACK~~
Walking outside into his backyard, Alex Davis, age 17, found himself looking at the stars once again.
"Can't get any worse than this, I don't know why I just don't get it over with… huh?" he glanced up to the starry night sky, noticing something out of the corner of his eye.
A blindingly bright light was streaking across the sky. It was going at a perfectly horizontal angle, when all of the sudden it swerved, heading in his direction.
"Uh, uh…" his voice trailed as the bright light got ominously brighter as the extremely confused boy stood, looking on, as it got closer by the second. It was now he could see that the light was half from fire, and some from another source.
A Shrieking squawk, that sounded strangely hurt, erupted from the now blue fireball as the front of this comet-like blaze of fire took on the appearance of a bird kind of creature, still bathed in translucent blue flames. But Alex didn't have any time to think about that as the strange phenomenon finally reached him.
A scream from Alex and the monster was heard far and wide as 'it' collided with the boy. As soon as it hit, the fire consumed him, but oddly enough, didn't kill him. It was almost as if the creature had planed this, as if it had no other choice, and it needed Alex for something. It was all over in a second as the flames disappeared. No pain accompanied him as he fell backwards to the ground from a huge wave of light-headedness and quizziness.
His whole body felt tingly and uncomfortable… foreign. He heard voices and footsteps coming towards him as he lie on the ground.
He tried to look around, but his body wouldn't obey.
'Don't move, they will help us…'
His body shivered from the cold night air, as it was still in the part of spring where cold nights were common. But then he felt a warmness flow through him as his shaking stopped. A warmness that relaxed him and made him feel calm.
Finally, he heard the footsteps stop, right next to him.
"Well, he's alive…" he heard a woman say, panting lightly.
"Didn't think a kid like this could take the power of the Phoenix. But it's a good thing we were able to take out those cursed mist-nin. Amazing that the hidden mist village was even able to hurt it, and bad enough for this to happen at that!" The voice he heard then was deep and it sounded as if he had something in his mouth.
Alex's vision was blurry, so the forms he saw were not clear. He couldn't think clearly, and he became very confused. So he just lie there, waiting for something to happen. What could he do anyway?
"Well, let's take him back, Gai, you carry him." He heard a mellow voiced man say. It was the last this Alex heard as the nauseous feeling overtook him and drove him into unconsciousness.
~~*@*~~
Ok? Bad? I don't accept harsh flames, only constructive criticism. I really have no self-esteem, so getting many bad reviews might halt this story, sry, just the way I am. I hope you all liked this; I thought my other story was beyond horrible, but some ppl reviewed it, saying it was good. Not that you have bad taste or anything, just the self-esteem thing, you know.
The next chapter will be about what happens to our hero (lol) in Konoha, if you haven't figured who those other guys are yet. I won't go into full detail about every little bump on his ride to the village, but I will give enough background on his entry into the Leaf, and his first little while there. This story, BTW, does not take anything away from the original story of Naruto. Everything happens exactly like in the Manga/Anime, so Naruto is still the host for the Kyuubi, and he's still better than Sasuke, even though no one knows it. My fav character, Rock Lee, will play a big part in this probably, if things go according to my half laid-out plan. I probably won't include parts for all the characters, cause it's a lot to keep up with, but hopefully, I can fit a few cameos in there. Til next time!
