The dialogue during the rots balcony scene between anakin and padme is quite simply awful. I rewrote the scene to take advantage of foreshadowing.

Anakin: You are so Beautiful

Padme: That's only because I'm so in love

Anakin smiles. Padme smiles back, pauses, and looks away from Anakin momentarily

Padme: Have you thought of a name?

Anakin: No...

he gives her a wry smile

Anakin: ...you have

Padme: I've always liked, Leia

Anakin: Leia...

Anakin ponders a moment and playfully mocks her

Anakin: ...and if it's a boy?

Padme glances down holding her belly

Padme: Luke

Anakin strides over to padme staring at her mid-section. He reaches out with his hand and touches her belly.

Anakin: Luke Skywalker...my son.

Padme gently places her finger under Anakin's chin and raises his head so he is now staring at her.

Padme: Our son.

-dissolve to the nightmare sequence-