The dialogue during the rots balcony scene between anakin and padme is quite simply awful. I rewrote the scene to take advantage of foreshadowing.
Anakin: You are so Beautiful
Padme: That's only because I'm so in love
Anakin smiles. Padme smiles back, pauses, and looks away from Anakin momentarily
Padme: Have you thought of a name?
Anakin: No...
he gives her a wry smile
Anakin: ...you have
Padme: I've always liked, Leia
Anakin: Leia...
Anakin ponders a moment and playfully mocks her
Anakin: ...and if it's a boy?
Padme glances down holding her belly
Padme: Luke
Anakin strides over to padme staring at her mid-section. He reaches out with his hand and touches her belly.
Anakin: Luke Skywalker...my son.
Padme gently places her finger under Anakin's chin and raises his head so he is now staring at her.
Padme: Our son.
-dissolve to the nightmare sequence-
