Okay! So this is my first fanfic and…well, im from Israel, therefore im a Hebrew speaker, and even though English is my best subject and I'm really good at it, I might have some misspelling and grammar problems. So please review to correct me and tell me what do you think of this story (please don't be too harsh) so this story is about the arrancars when they were around the ages of 15-16 and it should explain a few things. I hope you'll enjoy it!
Disclaimer: in fact I DO own bleach…(in the wonderful place called dreamland)
Ulqiorra was sitting in his room, his stereo system works on the highest volume, the sounds of harsh screamings and electronic guitars was escaping from the white walls. At some point there were knockings sounds added to the song, but, it was impossible since there wasn't any knocking a part of the song. However, ulqiorra went to open the door (since the knocking sounds came from there).
It was gin in front of the door.
"ulqiorra-san, could you please put the volume a little lower? Im trying to get loly and menoly to sleep" (a/n: they are babies, and so does lillynet)
Ulqiorra stared at the ex-captain for a moment, then he simply said "no"
And shut the door. Gin knocked once more. "what?" ulqiorra opened the door and glared at him.
"ulqiorra-san, aizen-sama wants you to organize the table," gin continued, "you can ask grimmjow-san to help you if you want." Ulqiorra continued to glare at him "aizen can bite me" he said, shut the door closed and locked it.
Grimmjow was also in his room, suffering from the pain in his teeth. He was at the orthodent today ,who had pulled further the metal strings he had on his jaws. "ugh!," he said to himself, "why the fuck do I have to suffer this stupid orthodontia? Hell, they should've started with Nnoitora!" then, he heard a knock on the door.
He slammed the door open, "what?" he barked. It was gin.
"oh! Grimmjow-san! How do you feel?" gin asked happily.
Grimmjow stared at him. "gin," he begun, "have you ever been threw a orthodontia?" he asked.
"why no, grimmjow-san. Does it hurts?"
Grimmjow glared at him ,"oh, I don't know, is yanking your jaw sounds hurts?"
"I'll take it as yes," gin said, "anyway, aizen-sama wants you to organize the table"
Grimmjow glared at him. "ask someone who's actually going to eat something. Unfortunately, I can't eat a freakin' THING since I have a bird cage on my mouth." He said and shut the door closed. "I wouldn't say it next to cirucci," gin mentioned and went to look for someone to organize the table for dinner.
So…did you like it? Did I had any mistakes? Please review!
