The Storyteller 993 is here! . And brings to everyone my second story idea called Unforgiven . This story takes place around the Loud House episode No Such Luck . But i wont say many things about this story , i dont wanna spoil the surprise at all . I wanna thank everyone that like my other story Brother of the Night that i will continue that story also . But today i am talking about my second idea Unforgiven so be sure to check it out review on it .The story category for Unforgiven is Rated M for violence and many more harsh stuff that will appear . This Series belongs to the owners that created it and also works with the TV Progam Channel Nickeloden . With that being said The Storyteller 993 wants to say one last thing . I wanna apologize for every kinda mistake i am making writting this story . Thanks you for youre time and enjoy Unforgiven .
'' An unforgiving heart is an uforgiven heart '' - Tim Keller .
Chapter 1 : Enough is enough
After Lincoln Loud was kicked out of the Loud House for his so called bad luck problem and started to feed him like an animal by his parents Lynn Loud Sr. and Rita Loud beliving the words of there daughters that Lincoln is cursed to bring only bad luck to everyone he comes across . Lynn Loud Sr. and Rita Loud where thinking at that time that maybe if they get a little distant with there own son , maybe his bad luck problem will vanish soon and he will be able to return into the house .
Lynn Sr. after a couple of minutes thinking about this situation with his son , he started to speak with his wife :
'' Dear do you belive that our boy is bad luck ?'' asked Lynn Sr. his wife .
Rita Loud was trying to pack off a few change of clothes for Lincoln to give them to him since the weather was getting really cold outside , when she suddenly stopped from what she was doing hearing her husband starting to ask about all this bad luck thing , so she then started to speak back at him saying :
'' Well i dont know for sure if he is bad luck or not but from what the girls said to me , i just dont know who to belive . When i was outside trying to make Lincoln eat something , since he started to reject food from me and when i asked why he told me he was not bad luck at all , he was only playing around so that he dosent want to participate in every activity his sisters have '' said Rita Loud to her husband .
Lynn Sr. was thinking that maybe the girls are probably overreacting about the whole bad luck problem . Since everything has started from when Lynn Jr . said that she lost her game just because her brother was there to support her . It' s not like he wanted that to happen just cause he was there , he only wanted to support his sister nothing wrong with that , but then again Lynn Sr. realized that Lynn Jr . is that kinda girl that always wants to win every game she has so instead of accepting one defeat she suffered she let out her anger losing the game straight to her only brother .
Then Lynn Sr. started to speak again :
'' You know what ? How about we try tomorrow morning as the sun will start to rise let' s try and speak with the girls about there brother maybe they will understand and we can let him back in the house '' said Lynn Sr. to his wife .
Rita Loud was very happy to hear this and she gives her husband a hug and a kiss , for trying to solve these problem .
Meanwhille outside the backyard of the Loud House...
Lincoln was trying to understand the whole situation that has appeared in his family . Lincoln started then to speak with himself about everything that has occurred in his family :
'' I cant belive this , i only wanted to stay away from my sisters activity , but looks like my idea to tell everyone that i am bad luck made things much more worse for me'' said Lincoln . Lincoln was feeling worst that he had to lie like that , not knowing how bad things where gonna become later on . It' s not like he dosent want to hang out with his sisters at there activities , but sometimes he wanted to just chill and relax alone , reading some comics maybe , eating some ice cream maybe or even to playing so video games all alone .
Then Lincoln remembered something very important . He remembered that his sisters never tried to back him up at all about this whole mess he was into . Well can you blame them ? He started this fire and he cant stop it now .
'' Maybe if i keept my mouth shut and not complain at all , maybe then i would have still been inside my house . Instead of that look at me sleeping in the backyard of my house on the cold grass. My sisters are sometimes very harsh and cold with me like that time with the whole brawl they had . Because of them i was not allowed to play a game or watch at the Tv and when i tried to make things up with them they shut down my offer because of that stupid sister code they have '' said Lincoln .
'' That time they where thinking again only about themselves , just like now not even carrying at all that whille i have to sleep outside in this cold night they are sleeping happy in there warm beds . And my parents belived them about me being bad luck . Of course at first i did not had a problem with this , but when they looked me outside and statred to feed me like some sort of dog then i gotta say that they have really crossed the line '' said Lincoln again looking at he conditions he had to spend . Infron of him was bowl of food and another bowl of water .
'' Well they could have at least give a warm blanket so that i wont freeze to death in my pajamas , but like i said and i will say it one last time they only think about themselves and dont care how i feel . Well no more if they think of me like that , then tomorrow i am gonna change the paper , no more mister nice guy , no more mister peacemaker and definetly no more speaking with any one of them . This is my punishment for my family treating me like shit ''said Lincoln as he was trying to get some sleep with his eyes filled with so much rage and anger towards his own family .
The next day ...
The sun was starting to get up and at the same time Lynn Sr. just like he said last night he wanted to speak with his sisters about there brother Lincoln . So after he changes in his regular outfit clothes he starts to wake up his wife kissing her cheek . Soon Rita Loud wakes up and starts to change herself in her regular oufits to start the day .
As Lynn Sr. was outside the hall he started to go into every room to wake up his daughters telling them that they are having a very important meeting they need to discuss in the living room and it cant wait any longer . His daughters did not liked the idea to wake up most of the times to start a new day , but when there father camed to there rooms with a serious look on his face , some of them started to get up from bed , whille some where having a hard time to even open up there eyes . But in the end everyone was awake after the went to the bathroom and after a couple of minutes they where all gathered in the living room . The siblings noticed that they did not started there day like they do , after they go to the bathroom they always head up in the kitchen but this time around things where different and they did not know what to expect from there parents . What ever it was it looked really serious when they noticed there parents with a serious face that they didn' t seen it in a long time .
'' So why are we all gathered in the living room instead of the kitchen to get our well deserved breakfeast ? '' said Lori Loud the first and eldest sister of the Loud House .
'' Yeah what' s going on here dudes ?'' said Luna Loud the third eldest sister as she was holding her youngest sister Lilly Loud .
After a couple of minutes Lynn Sr. starts to speak to his dauhgter alongside with his wife .
'' Lori are you sure that we are all here ? Dont you think someone is missing from this meeting we are having ?'' asked Lynn Sr. his daughter .
Lori then started to think who can probably miss , when she realized that hher father was talking about her only brother Lincoln . Lynn Sr. noticed that Lori finally figures out who was missing so he started to speak again :
'' Now listen up everyone , today i called out much more early in the morning then you guys usually wake up because of the recent problems we have , problems that involves youre brother Lincoln and his so called bad luck problem '' said Lynn Sr. to his daughters .
His daughters then finally understood why there father called everyone so ealy in the morning , but one thing they did not understand why is this meeting was made just cause Lincoln is bad luck .
After a little whille Lori starts to speak again :
'' Dad i dont understand why you had all of us to wake up just for Lincoln '' said Lori to her father . Lynn Sr. was very shocked that his own daughter had the guts to '' say just for Lincoln '' , then he started to wonder what does his daughters thinks of there only brother .
His wife noticed also what Lori just has said so she started then to speak really pissed off from where here husband has left until he can recover of what Lori just said .
'' Lori Marie Loud how dare you use such cold words , what you just said is totally mean , he is not just Lincoln he is youre only brother for crying out loud and that goes for everyone else in this room . That who ever speaks like that i am gonna ground everyone one of you , you understand me ? '' said Rita Loud scolding her daughter . Every sibling was really shocked at what they just heard and then soon started to realize that what there mother said was true he was not just Lincoln he was there only brother that always helped them out so many times , they can ever count .
'' Now look , what youre father is trying to say is that you Lynn told us that he is pure bad luck just over a silly game and everyone got afraid of him over the fact that his called bad luck and might hurt everyone of you'' said Rita Loud still angry at her daughters , but tried little by little to clam herself down for going ot like a total maniac .
Then Lynn and every sibling soon started to realize that they made there only brother feel worst . They just didn' t realized that much sooner , they where thinking only for themselves not carrying at all how there only brother was feeling , being looked outside the house and treat him like a dog giving him a bowl of wather and food or even to try and give him a nice warm blanket for the night since outside the weather was really cold .
After a couple of good minutes Lynn Sr. finally snapped back to reality , but he did hear his wife backing him up at what he was trying to say to his daughters . Lynn Sr. was really happy to have such a great wife to back him up , but his happines did not last enough when he realized he should have back up his own son , a thing that he failed to do .
Then he started to speak again :
'' Okay thats enough il take it from here Rita'' said Lynn Sr . to his wife . Rita Loud did not said anyhting else so she let her husband deal with the girls .
Lynn Sr . then lookd straight into the eyes of his daugher Lynn Jr . and started saying to her . Lynn noticed that and was keeping her mouth shut to hear her father scolding her , just like her mother did with Lori . She knew that this problem started from her so she had to take it no matter how hard will her speak to her .
'' Lynn , when did you get to the conclusion that youre brother is bad luck ? Is it because you lost the game ? Or is it because you just wanted to let out some steam from losing ? Belive me Lynn winning is fun , but when you dont know when to accept a defeat , you just dont start looking for some sort of excuse just cause you did not win , you take it like a real pro sports fangirl you are '' said Lynn Sr. to his daughter .
Lynn then started to realize that her father was right she was only looking for an excuse for why she lost , instead of just accepting the fact you can always win every game you have ,she let out her anger towards her brother and made everyone belive that he is nothing else just pure bad luck . What she did affected everyone in the entire house , but the most affected was her brother Lincoln .
So Lynn then started to speak :
'' Guys mom and dad are right one hundred percent right , we screwed up big time and Lincoln was caught in the middle of the fire . We must go outside and apologize to him and let him back inside the house and to hope that he will have the power to forgive us '' said Lynn to her other siblings . Her other siblings nodded that they really want there brother to forgive them . With that they all started to go outside in the backyard of the house hopping for the good with Lynn and Rita Loud were coming also to apologize to Lincoln there only son . Lynn Sr and Rita Loud where really proud that there daughters want to make up for the awfull things they did to there brother .
Outside the backyard of the Loud House ...
Lincoln was shaking really bad because of the cold night he had . He finally open his eyes and started to hear lots of footsteps coming from the house straight to the backyard .
Lincoln noticed that it was his sisters and parents . Lincoln' s sisters and parents where in a shock to see how there only brother and son was shaking like there was no tomorrow because this was there fault sleeping outside in the cold night .
Lincoln wanted to speak with them but he did not forget what he told himself last night to not speak with them so he waited to see who was having the guts to speak with him seeing in what kinda conditions he was sleeping . Lynn then broke the silence to speak first since this mess was all her fault in the first place
'' Lincoln , please listen to me first and then decide if you wanna slap me back for what i am going to tell . All that i want to say sorry youre not bad luck at all ,i was so pissed off that i lost that game that when i saw you i let all my anger on you . I blammed you for being bad luck and told everyone else to stay away from you . But now i finally understand that i was wrong , really wrong you are a good person that was made to eat and sleep in this kinda condtion just because of me for speading that awfull rumor about you being bad luck , so in the name of all my sisters please forgive me and them '' said Lynn as she was coming towards him and gives a warm hug with tears in her eyes hopping she will hear him that he will always forgive her and his family since that kinda boy was Lincoln . A boy that knows to forgive and forget , and always moves on with his life .
'' It ' s true son'' said Lynn Sr. with a small smille who started then to speak after Lynn was done apologizing .
'' We should have been better parents to you but we failed really bad and i know that some simple words wont make you forgive us that easy , only actions will make . So how about i start my first action letting you come inside the house '' said Lynn Sr. to his son . About that time Rita Loud saw that the warm hug was not helping Lincon from the shaking , she decides to came along also into the hug trying to make him feel much better, one bye one they started to come and and after that the entire family was in a warm family hug . Then they let go of Lincoln and made way for him to go inside the house , thing he just did not saying a word back at them .
His siblings noticed and where kinda worried a little about the silence coming from Lincoln , they where thinking at that time that maybe he needs to warm up first and then they can hope that he will forgive them in the end .
'' Man it' s really damm cold outside , i cant belive he went through all this cold weather all night '' said Lynn who was starting to shake .
'' Then let us go inside to start warm up and make breakfeast since where are all up'' said Rita to her daughters . They all agreed and went back inside .
Whille Lynn was the last one to get inside the house she stopped for a couple of seconds looking at the sky who was starting to get ugly , meaning a storm was coming .
A storm would never make Lynn care about it , but for some odd reason this time she did . She did not understood why at that time why she had this odd feeling that something bad will happen , but she hopped it was just her imagination trying a prank at her .
Inside the House ...
Lincoln was glad that he was back inside the house as he was going straight to his room . But whille he was proceding to his destination a very cold and angry staring appeared on Lincoln 's face as he was passing by the room 's of his sisters .
He started then to speak to himself :
'' Youre just a bunch of good nothing liars , after all that you think that i can forgive and forget ? Yet you dare start to hug me ? With youre disgusting hands ? Thinking that will make me feel good ? Ohh belive me when i am saying that , not only that i will not ever forgive you all , youl see that this time around that things in the Loud House wont be same anymore '' said Lincoln finishing to speak with himself having a very angry face as he entered his room and gets in his warm bed to have nice little sleep .
The Storyteller 993 is back again ! And this was chapter 1 of Unforgiven . I wanna apologize for every kinda mistake i am making writting this story like i said the beginning of this story .Thanks you for youre time and i really hoped you enjoyed chapter 1 of my second fanfic Loud House idea called Unforgiven and please dont forget to review on it , if you all want of course . See ya .
