Hello. I am a Pertemis shipper, and this is directly to Pertemis writers to give you some tips about writing.

I often see the Percy goes to Olympus to die cliche and this is stupid. If he wants to kill himself he can get a rope and a chair and be done with it. Don't do this.

Why does Annabeth cheat on Percy? People just don't cheat out of no reason, Annabeth has spent 4 years with Percy as a friend and has a relationship with him now. Explain why she cheats, don't make it stupid either.

Another thing about Annabeth, a lot of you kill her off to get rid of her and no offense this is starting to get boring and annoying can you all come up with something original?

Artemis isn't a man hater, she dislikes men but doesn't hate them. She is very extremely pragmatic: Pragmatic - "dealing with things sensibly and realistically in a way that is based on practical rather than theoretical considerations."

Get Artemis personality right from the wiki: "calm, reserved and reasonable being, but also stoic, serious and extremely pragmatic". ( I may have broken this rule.)

Get Percy's personality right wiki/Percy_Jackson#Personality

Perseus can't just march up to Olympus and do whatever he wants.