So, this would be my second fanfic, but clearly it didn't improve at all. I hate my writing skills… I would be grateful if you guys can give my your opinions, so that I know what to focus on the next time I write something :d Oh, and I DO NOT own Vocaloid, the song or any characters related to it.
INTRO: THE GATE TOWARDS WONDERLAND
Greetings. It has been a long time seen I have seen a human. …Ah, where are my manners…I bid you welcome, to the land of never-ending dreams, Wonderland. I hope that you will enjoy your time here. Oh? You are wondering who I am? Hehn, hehn... I am called Yume, a wanderer here at Wonderland. What am I doing here? Why, I am simply guiding humans, or to be precise, humans with dreams to Wonderland, where their wishes and dreams shall come true. Hehn, hehn, hehn... Oh, sorry. I lost myself there. Oh, it's time for you to depart for Wonderland. It has been great talking to you, but this is where we must part. I bid you adieu... for now, since we shall meet again...soon...
...Heh, it's gone. The human is gone. Hehn, hehn, hehn... My, they're simply stupid, aren't they? A land where wishes come true? Where dreams never end? Hehn, don't make me puke. Humans are such greedy creatures... No matter how much they have, they'll always ask for more. Trampling on one another, sacrificing everyone else for their own needs, thinking that they are the center, the root, the creator of the world... Hehn...Hehn, hehn, hehn... Hehn hehn hehn hehn hehn! That thought alone makes me laugh. That's right humans, dream, dream, dream, dream for all eternity, for you shall never be able to wake up from this one nightmare. Hehn, go on and make my world... my dear Alice-chan
